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swiftwingOC95 — Korrasami part 11
Published: 2015-03-22 19:27:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 63061; Favourites: 256; Downloads: 208
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sorry guys there is a lot of Korra lately and less Asami...... BUT there will be soon more of her x) (I guess? no spoliers lawl) just be patient
..... aaaaand sorry the panels seem to be soooo boring since there isn't to much interaction between the character btw guys do you like this comic structure or should I go back to what it looked like before (first 8 pages) aaaand my backgrounds are less detail they suck but srsly guys tell me immediately if there is something that changed that you dislike :/
anyways here it is the new page I hope you like it ..... the story Korra comes up with is pretty lame xD (Jinora and Ikki saw through it immediately lol) Tenzin was about to take the bait .... but who the fuck ? who knows what will happen next ?
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This one is also great, i like Korra's expressions....
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DX who's the snitch ? cause' he/she gets a stitch >: 3 (lawl, jk)
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This is a very good comic, can't wait for the next page.
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mmmmooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeee and give me a link on the next one
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calm your horses dude it's not even out yet ....xd but look at the journal at my page go check out how far I am with the next page ...
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love how fast you're releasing the pages! keep up the great work! love ur comic garl
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lol it takes me a whole week sometimes even more I'm not even close to fast ^^#
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one week is good enough lol. I'd be crying if you took a month XD
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I can see Asami stumbling into breakfast with a hangover.
"Korra, why weren't you in bed when I woke up, I didn't get a good morning kiss. "
"A-Asami "
Tenzin: What happened last night Korra? "
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oh wow soo many great ideas sometimes I don't know why I'm the one making a comic when a lot of the people watching me have way better ideas ^^ anyways it's a shame I alrdy got the story in my head and it can hardly be changed.... =/ lets just say we have to be patient and see what's coming up ^^# I'd always feel like I'm disappointing all the people with those awesome ideas 'cause my comic page is always diferrent from what they exspect xD
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Oooooh Korra, you are so busted XD
This is great, I really like the Jinora/Ikki panel. I can just hear them thinking "Bullshit!" in Cassandra Pentaghast's voice XD
About the background, this seems to bother you a lot. For me the real test will be when you move the action outside. They are inside a monastery, I expect to see walls behind them, and not much else. Maybe you can add a window here and there, but that's not really an issue. You have a good grasp at proportions, the way the characters' "skeletons" move is good, and you give us Korra squished boobs after revealing a partial under-boob, so we're good XD
All jokes aside, keep trying, and work on what you think you can improve, but I'm having a blast reading this comic the way it is now
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wow thanks glad to hear that you enjoy my comic so much 
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I hope you updated soon it's SOOO Niiice I love this
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oh God I'm really willing to wait for this to end! Its so good and funny hahaa <3 I LOVE IT!!
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Busteeeeeeeeeeeeed xD
not a good story there Korra xP
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yea the story was soooo lame only Tenzin would take the bait XD
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I first thought she would go with: I couldnt see so I smashed my head against the (conveniently) opened door!
xD
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I guess everybody could have come up with a better story than I did xD
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aw come on
its great x3
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This was a good start to my morning! (especially since I was forced to get out of bed early. Ef you morning.) Anyhoo, I personally prefer the old structure. I feel like it allowed for more detail, and the characters felt more together. But that's just me. o3o
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ok nice to have some opion right here I'll see if I can figure something out so there'll be more space for character interacting and detailed stuff since I got really lazy with the backgrounds v.v
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I don't blame you. I've gotten so lazy that I don't even bother to color my comics anymore.
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Lol. Korra's not going to be able to talk her way out of this one. Great job.
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yup no escaping or shit talking this time
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Lol I hope she does.
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Hahah this keeps getting better and better hahahah XD i love it 
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Omg!It's soo exciting!I love it!I'm looking forward you put next!Nice work!
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exciting ? I considered this page rather boring well that suprises me ^^#
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It's nice to see Korra regrew her hair. I'd like to think she would do that in canon.
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yup I don't dislike the new shortened hair but for some reason my gut told me to give her long hair again in this comic
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Maybe you should have Asami comment on the fact she likes that Korra regrew her hair. Korra regrowing her hair could represent her regaining herself among other things.
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I like the idea
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I could picture Asami running her fingers in Korra's hair and telling Korra that she's glad Korra regrew her hair. She could state something similar to what you did that she liked the shorter hair, but she thinks the longer hair fits Korra better.
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we'll see about that ^^
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you think so ? haha ..... yea it was xd
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