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Augusata [2014-08-07 02:30:09 +0000 UTC]
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This is a very beautiful drawing overall. I really can understand how hard it can be to NOT lineart (I wouldn't do better myself). There still, of course, is always chance for improvement, and I will try my best to help you (this is also the first drawing I ever saw by you and I am really impressed).
Vision: The anatomy of this drawing is really awesome, you got the sitting form perfect, and this is so cute! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="17" height="23" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="599" title="
"/> When I look at the tongue, however, something seems a bit... off. When I first saw this I though the character was eating a carrot or something! How about you change the end of it, maybe make it thinner? I am sure that it would help out a lot!!!
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" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="97" title="w00t!"/>
Originality: Well, I am not quite sure what to put here. I believe the character is not yours, correct? I will just rate it 5 stars, because I really don't know what to write XD But anyways, the design is great (whoever I am telling this to) but most manes remain a consistent pattern, not stripes on one side, then complete black on the other.
Technique: The way you shaded is really accurate/realistic, and the eyes you drew kept the MLP style really well! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title="
(Big Grin)"/> I love the blue shade you but on the face/tail... where is the light coming from? The sky? A random blue thing? Well, who cares about that much anyways? I love how you made the shading stand out really well and I could tell the different between the leg and the body or the head and mane.
Impact: I put most of the "Impact" stuff on the other categories as well (oops) so this one will probably be mostly review e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="395" title="
(Lick)"/> This may not make sense, but, well, I love how you drew the shading and the Cutie Mark also seems to be shaded in different colors... great idea!
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" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="576" title="Huggle!"/> The light on the eyes seems a bit wrong. Maybe use white next time, like on the original MLP style? It probably would work better.
THIS DRAWING IS REALLY REALLY AWESOME NO MATTER HOW RUDE WHAT I SAID MAY SEEM. You did wonderful and I definitely would have had a lot of trouble doing this as well as yours. You made it really fit the environment and the color scheme is perfect~ e.deviantart.net/emoticons/m/m… " width="15" height="15" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="578" title="Meow :3"/> Keep up the great work beffu!
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" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="160" title="Hug"/>
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SymbianL In reply to Augusata [2014-08-07 03:31:33 +0000 UTC]
Criticism is not rudeness. XP
Thank yee.
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Augusata In reply to SymbianL [2014-08-07 03:35:34 +0000 UTC]
Lol, but some people do take it the wrong way XD You're welcome anyways!
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