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Published: 2012-12-24 13:41:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 1210; Favourites: 114; Downloads: 5
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Description Alternate title: Sweet Dreams
..haha puns. puns eveeerywhere
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This is for the secret santa hosted by my dear friends =Amadoodles and =Enaxn , I was assigned this cute character for *BecSparrow !

Really sorry for being -just- in time, I have been crushed under schoolwork (studying for exams right after christmas ahdsjksahd) and this painting isn't as detailed as I would have liked it to be but I'm still quite satisfied with it c: I absolutely love blue-white combinations hehe. Tried to do this new simple soft shade style, but my brain punched me and I went too detailed again *facedesk* I've never even seen snow, so I had no idea how to tackle this winter scene! I'm really sorry about the fail background ;;

The minute I saw Beccat I instantly thought "CANDYCANES!!HKSHKJAHS!" cx

MERRY CHRISTMAS EVERYONE!
Thank you for making this year great, I wish I could be more active online but I hope everybody is doing well, staying healthy and having lots of warm food!


Critique would be appreciated!!
~Intuos4 med, PSCS6, Paint Tool SAI, about 5 hours I'm guessing..

Copyright art to me, please do not use in any way, do not reproduce, repost on another website, copy, reference, trace etc.
Copyright character (Beccat!) to *BecSparrow
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Comments: 13

Draslonias [2012-12-24 15:31:20 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Over all this picture is just plain cute. The colors are vivid, and really catches the eye of anyone happening to find it while browsing DA.

The overall anatomy was well done, but I do have to say that the hind paw, was just a tad small compared the to front, which are practically spot on. The broken, or should I say half eaten, candy canes on the snow in front of him was nice touch. You could really tell he enjoyed them! With the shading on the fur, although very well done with detail, the blending up to the lighter parts of his fur could've used just a bit more.

With that being said, the background give me the thought of the unknown, seemingly, all around him, and although it helps with adding the main focus on the cat, it could've use just a little bit more. But the tree branches seem to almost frame the entire picture itself. The blur, also, gave it the idea of it being close. And to get to the point of that, it looks nice.

With the snow, although I see that it's dark from his shadow, the lighter parts could've been blended a little bit more with the lighter parts of it.

Overall, I love the picture, and will be sure to add this to my favorites! ^^
Keep up the good work my friend.

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JEAikman [2013-01-11 12:17:18 +0000 UTC]

Amazing I love the shading on the fur

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Syphellium In reply to JEAikman [2013-03-31 12:07:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it cx

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JEAikman In reply to Syphellium [2013-03-31 12:27:12 +0000 UTC]

my pleasure

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BecSparrow [2012-12-24 23:42:06 +0000 UTC]

AHH
AHHHHHHH
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

LOOK AT THISSSSSSSSSSS

This is so *LOVELY!* I can't believe I've not seen your art before! X3 This whole style is so beautiful! What a lovely surprise! Gosh! Also I like that you held on before you posted it! The suspense of wondering what I was going to get was part of the excitement!! Heehee!

The pose on this is so lovely! I really like how she's all curled up there keeping herself warm in the cold. The way she's curled around is really cat like and I really like it!

Also I love candy canes >_______> She is red and white striped so it makes SENSE she's a candy cane cruncher Teehee! I love how it looks as if she's crunched a whole lot of them and not really stopped to finish a whole one before munching on another!! I hope she clears all those bits up!

Your shading style is so beautiful as well! It's like, cell shaded, but REALLY detailed at the same time! I can see HUNDREDS of little hairs there in her leg and belly fluff! You must have SO much patience! The wee smile on her face is beautiful too! She looks so content and happy. You really nailed her design too what with her stripes and earring and the TAIL TIE! So many people forget various bits of her design lol.

You absolutely CRACKED her hair too! Her hair can be such a BUTT to draw because it has a weird fringe bit and it's like a mane, but it's like hair, and she's a girl so really she shouldn't even have any hair, BUT YOU GOT IT PERFECT WOW!

The blue backlighting you've used is delicious too! It perfectly captures the little stray edges of her hair and fur and I really love it.

I LOVE IT ALL AHHHHHH! Thank you so much!
Have a watch as well! LOVE your art C:
Merry Christmas and good luck with your exams! (I have January finals too >___>)

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Syphellium In reply to BecSparrow [2013-03-31 12:12:09 +0000 UTC]

Wow look at me with my crazy late replies ;_; I'm so sorry! I get really flustered at how to reply to such sweet comments, add on school and personal issues it's a melting pot of disaster.

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it! Seriously, this was great fun to work on and it makes me overjoyed to know you like it too <3333
Candycanes are delicious, is it weird that I still have some in the fridge? THEY WERE ON SALE IN JANUARY... SO I BOUGHT A LOT OF THEM nomnomnom.
I can't possibly sum up all of my sadhkasdhsajkdhkajshdk so I'll end with a really sincere and heartfelt, thank you, I'm absolutely honored by your comment <3

Also, I hope those finals went well! Mine were alright, the studying definitely paid off. Unfortunately I have my real IGCSEs in May-June, so the panic and nervous tension is coming back .

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BecSparrow In reply to Syphellium [2013-04-01 21:17:38 +0000 UTC]

Heehee! Thank you so much again!

and yes my finals went great thank you! I'm now a qualified Optician which is all good! Eek! Good luck for your IGCSEs <333

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Nojjesz [2012-12-24 22:47:15 +0000 UTC]

Very nice work!

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Syphellium In reply to Nojjesz [2012-12-28 13:41:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! c: I had a lot of fun doing it!

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Nojjesz In reply to Syphellium [2012-12-29 11:20:10 +0000 UTC]

I bet! you did a wonderful job on her!

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lou2209 [2012-12-24 17:03:40 +0000 UTC]

Aww this is so pretty! I do love the colours and the general atmosphere :3
I think the shades are a bit too deep for the light source (i'm assuming it's the sun/sky), if you were going for a softer shading style, you could still keep the fur detail by lowering the opacity of the shading layer.
The foreshortening of her left hind leg seems a little off too, although I'm terrible at perspective so I have no idea how I can help ;A;


happy christmas eve c:

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Syphellium In reply to lou2209 [2012-12-28 13:45:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!
That's very true, now I look at it I feel really silly for making it such a deep blue <__<" Ahh I just like blue shadows a little bit too much and it came to bite me back in the butt haha. Thank you for pointing it out though, I'll definitely keep it in mind for future!
I did notice that, though I wasn't sure how to fix it either and as it was a secret santa I couldn't put it on dA to ask for critique ;_; Thank you though!

Look at my terribly late reply.. I hope you had a great christmas though! Did you do anything special? c:

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lou2209 In reply to Syphellium [2012-12-28 16:00:49 +0000 UTC]

No problem at all dear! Aw don't feel silly, there's nothing wrong with trying different things out :>

Hehe it's fine, and thank you!
Hmm not particularly, but I did have a lovely time as always. What about you? c:

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