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SyphrilBlue — We.
Published: 2005-04-20 00:07:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 116; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description you and me
streetlights in the moonlight
dancing beneath them
a pulsating rhythm
no one ever said that love was free

to be
beside you in the daylight
thats all that matters
when heart strings are shattered
take all your passion out on me

and we
two souls shivering in the cold
who said warmth was everlasting;
the wind keeps howling and blasting
but i feel safe and warm in "we."
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missing-echo [2005-04-20 00:12:25 +0000 UTC]

Awwhh. Fantastic imagery, holy crap... favorite line: "when heart strings are shattered/ take all your passion out on me." Love that you used the wind without being cliche. Very nice.

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SyphrilBlue In reply to missing-echo [2005-04-20 05:07:04 +0000 UTC]

thank you soo much! it means a lot that you say its not cliche. I was worried about that ^.^;;;;

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