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These are two of three of my final ideas for a typography project based on an assigned word. The word is "size". I'm supposed to illustrate the meaning or use of the word using only black and white text. Also, the professor has required a minimum of 10 words that relate to the given word (size) that must appear in some form in the design (IMO, 10 words is superfluous) Which of these, if either, do you think illustrates the concept more significantly? Let me know what you think and feel free to give any constructive criticism!Related content
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Iris-Zeible [2007-09-03 15:41:05 +0000 UTC]
im not a pro but ur art wark attract me..
i like the 1st one better
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Asitis [2007-03-26 12:24:20 +0000 UTC]
The second is IMO more pleasing. Is the project required to be a specific size, because ultimately I think both work best together as displayed.
Also given the ridged requirements of the task I think you have done a great job (but I always had difficulty judging the grade of art lol, I think if something is better that something else it just highlights the perceptual bias in your mind).
Good luck and kick your professors arse if you don't get the grad you want
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sytraxia In reply to Asitis [2007-04-05 01:34:34 +0000 UTC]
My professor gave me a D on this project. Oh well, I'm not very interested in communication design anyway. I'd really like to get into film.
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apechute [2007-03-15 07:48:40 +0000 UTC]
First, nice design. Second. If I'm reading this correctly there are 2 images side by side? If so, the left image seems to me to work better compositionally but the right incorporates variances of "size" better.
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sytraxia In reply to apechute [2007-03-20 01:50:16 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. I went with the overall structure of the left side but I changed the "macrocosmic" form and inserted the egg/sperm/embryo into the planet form. Hopefully it will get a decent grade.
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akilia [2007-03-15 02:18:12 +0000 UTC]
I think both ideas are cool, but illustrating the meaning is more significant in my mind.
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sytraxia In reply to akilia [2007-03-20 01:47:27 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I decided to go with a combination of the two in the end.
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