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Published: 2007-11-26 03:22:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 211; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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I am the darkness, haunting your dreams,I am the guilt, tearing you at the seams.
I am to be reaped from the seeds you did sow,
I will have no remorse 'till you let me go.
I make no action to worsen these things,
I am not the one pulling your strings.
You are the reason that your dreams are haunted.
You are the reason for your guilt unwanted.
You are the reaper of your crop full of lies.
You will have no reprieve until you cut the ties.
You have done all that worsens these things.
You are the one, pulling your own strings.
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Wow. I really like...spooky in a way, but good!
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I love this, the words, the rhyming pattern, the feeling, everything!
THAT's my boy, haha.
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^_^
and how does it makes you feel?
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To me, it looks like the writer was hurt badly by the person he's addressing, and he/she feels guilty about it and can't stop thinking about him(?). he/she thinks they are guilty because of what they did to the writer, but it seems at the second part they are ACTUALLY guilty because he/she is a dishonest and [mean] person. and they feel guilty about lying and making things worse.
This probably isn't what it's about at all, sorry that I'm bad at interpreting things, but that's what I get out of it. It's very creepy, in a good way.
Du bist so talentiert!
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no no no, not what you think it says, how it makes you feel
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wow. what an embarassing waste of a comment.
=/
Do you mean if it were addressed to me how would I feel?
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lets see.... pretend i didn't write it, and you just sorta found it. its not necessarily addressed to you, but it could be about you in some way. kinda like how people have "their song" thats about them, even tho it isn't.
and you didn't waste that comment
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Hmmm, okay. It would make me feel haunted and very curious. I'm not so sure.
It would make me think about the way I am to see if I was like that. If I had just found it I would think that the writer is representing themself as a thing or feeling, not just a person speaking to someone.
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*nod nod* k, i see what you did there
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xD mm. sorry, my thoughts about those sorts of things are stupid sometimes.
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thanks!!
tell me though, how doe sit make you feel? what thoughts does it evoke?
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I dont know if im going to give you the answer I want. But it seems as though on lover is talking to the other. The one being talked to has cheated on the one talking. The one talking it telling the other that they(the one being talked to) are the reason guilt fills a relationship. Make sense? It could also be seen as a friend talking to another friend. Sorry if this doesnt help.
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makes sense. i probably wont tell anyone the intended 'feeling' of the poem for quite a while, i'd like to see what different people make of it.
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cant wait to know! I keep reading to see what else I can get out of it.
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let me know what else you can pull out of it, eh?
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