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t3hpython — I have no Heart
Published: 2006-02-02 21:20:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 922; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 13
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I have no heartits been ripped out
dont try to ask
what its about
if you know me
you already know
and if you dont
I've nothign to show
only pieces left
of soemthing once proud
now depression is hidden
by a deceptive shroud
you'd think im happy
but you dont know better
'cause in my life's story
you see only each letter
not the shadow behind it
or the sorrow that hides
now only in noone
can i this confide
no one understands,
they haven't felt this
to have their heart ripped
bye Fate's cruel fist
straight form the chest
and flung to afar
to leave in its place
the ugliest scar.
this scar is a shell
where the heart used to be
containing the sorrow
not letting it free
now stuck with the sadness
of immesurable bounds
i'd kill for some love.
oh how mad that sounds
madness, of course
a logical answer
'fore this sorrow turns
to an emotional cancer
devouring what little
that brightens my day
ensuring the sadness
never goes away
cursing my life
to lowest of low
with the mask i wear
it will never show
madness would seem
to lift all the worry
leading my thoughts
to incoherent flurry
emotions mixing
creating the strange
concoction that starts
unpredictable change
for better or worse
with worse hard to find
the interior turmoil
where sanity shined
a diffrent person emerges
from remains of delusion
trying to grasp
the strange illusion
of reality
now love a pipe dream
of a ravaged mind
torn at each seam
and no one knows
what its all about
i have no heart
its been ripped out
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Comments: 31
Beautiful! I like the emotion the structure and decription gives.
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wow. thats powerful. it reminds me alot of the monster in Frankenstien. you should read it its really good
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ill try to remeberthat
thanks ^_^
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'Tis good. The emotion is pouring out of it.
The end is the most powerful, and it actually gives that feeling of helplessness...Great.
I only have one tiny suggestion. Find where your verses break, and add an extra return in there, it breaks up the poem, and makes it easier to read for your audience.
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It usually does work.
Not only is it easier to read, it's more visually pleasing.
Not that a poem must be visually pleasing, but it's just a tip I've learned over the years.
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alright, i may go back and edit it when i get time. thank you
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this is really great
it hit me right in the heart when i started to read it and when i was done my heart was only half its normal size
i personally know how you feel
i wish i could find some one to love and never take my heart out of my body only unless my heart leaves from excitement
WE ALL ((all humans that is)) need a soul person i could tell everything to someone to treat me the way i should be treated
I am tired of being treated like shit everyday not just by the ones i love but the ones people call friends
WE ALL need some one who can define what love truely is and what friendship really is
WE ALL need proof that the words love and friend ship truely exsist
WE all need proof that i am worth living in this hellash ((not sure on spelling)) world----
life sucks
WE ALL need some one to cry on
WE ALL need some one who will accept us as who we are and will never reject us on our look or if we change in some way
the only proof i have is that i am human with no reasoning
not only that WE all need somebody to love
thank you for taking your time to read this ---if you did but i love the poem so much it truely hit home
sorry that i just spat everything out like i did but all of that is what i truely wish everyone had---first i wrote i in it all then thought i am not the only one who needs all of this ---WE ALL need it all
THNX SO MUCH
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i agree on all the points (its hellish, wish an i)
thanks for taking the time to read my poem, deary
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dont say that noone knows how you feel, and since when can u not tlk 2 me?, great poem btw
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i cant talk to you if you arent online, deary
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"and no one knows
what its all about
i have no heart
its been ripped out"
that's lovely.
awesome job sham, you rock.
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loveley......love.....live.....lie.....
thanks tho
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..it is lovely...
don't be all sad. sad people make me want to cry.
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dont cry over me, im not worht your tears
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stop doing that, it only makes me more sad
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cheer up you silly girl!!! *poke*
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quit callin me silly
You're the one who's sad
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and your silly
so there
*pokepoek*
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Dude, great poem, but spellcheck for the love of god.
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