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t3hpython — Sacred Ground
Published: 2005-11-26 02:35:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 100; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Description
all is lostnaught can be found
you have entered
sacred ground
nothings there
but you can find
yourself in here
your soul, to bind
an empty shell
when you enter
screams of hell
do your mind
deter
from this goal
that you seek
from society's shoal
of conformity
a whisp of light
in darkness complete
doth catch your sight
and bring you forth
to see the truth
and enlighten you
to visions of sooth
in these dark times
when Man destroys
himself and his world
the intiate employs
this sacred ground
Comments: 7
Very well written. It flows very nicely, and would be a good poem to read aloud.
I like the rhyming. It adds zest to the poem without detracting from its gravity.
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thanks very much!
bit of a contrast from the one that made tea shoot out your nose, ah?
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yeah, but Zombie Haiku is pretty much my only happy peice
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