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Published: 2005-11-30 02:10:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 87; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Ignorance, Apathy, the problem here,the solution, dear Reader, will never be near,
War and Famine, Poverty and Strife,
misfortune splits society as a Knife,
rich and poor, delighted and sad,
i fear, dear Reader, we shall all go mad.
but I digress, the point must be made,
Truth must come out, form Lie's dark shade,
quarrels 'tween nations, large and small,
conflict evolving, encompassing all,
ineffable horrors pulling the strings,
behind the scenes, manipulate things.
it's a game to them, emotions lie stark,
Truth in the Shadows, lost in the Dark.
some call it god, some call it fate.
just to give it a name, may be a mistake.
Peace and Love, would solve the problem,
will each Human comply? must all of them?
Humans cooperate, not unheard of,
But this task fits not Man's hand as a glove.
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MuffinSex [2006-01-06 11:45:37 +0000 UTC]
I do the same thing... as what you said above, Sham. I think it kinda flows though, maybe it matters on how you read it.
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t3hpython In reply to MuffinSex [2006-01-06 20:18:40 +0000 UTC]
yes, i;'ve shown it to people at school , who read it aloud, and it flowed rather well in soem cases...
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fiacha3 [2005-12-01 13:07:28 +0000 UTC]
again i love the word choice and symbolism of this, but it doesnt quite flow
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t3hpython In reply to fiacha3 [2005-12-01 14:22:10 +0000 UTC]
yeah, i've noticed my poems dont always flow very well....there are a few...but yeah, as i have mentioned, i write as soon as the words come to mind without really thinking about it alot
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