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Description Part I of III - The Challenge Issued

Challenge: Follow me... and find me; track me down from the ends of the Earth and prove your worth.

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Part I - Here
Part II - fav.me/d6ob0ce
Part III - N/A
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Future Rider: Niyol
Elmas Zo: #42 Abaddon - fav.me/d6mm2vb

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Again, Niyol woke with a start, knocking his pillow of the hammock as he bolted upright, shaking his
head. For three nights now, the same thing has been happening - a great red and black stallion comes
to him.... and speaks. But, what the noble creature says, he can never remember.... or can never
understand.... which of those it was he could never tell.

Huffing, the tired and rather frustrated youth slid out of his hammock, nearly sinking down to his knees
from the soreness of his legs and everything else from the bull he had been dared to ride the day before.
Groaning, he reached for his boots, and not even stopping as he walked across the loft, tried to slip
them on.... that didn't turn out so well, as he nearly ended up tumbling down the ladder leading to the
rest of the barn below. Luckily, he managed to pull both on without breaking any bones and headed down,
or rather, slid down, the ladder, taking his bow and fur vest with him. Never knew when a predator might
attack, and the air was getting colder as winter neared.

Most of the horses that were kept stabled in the barn at night slept on or minded their own business, but
a couple, such as his Loph mare and one of the kelpies, rose their heads up to nicker at him as he passed
by, the youth hoping that a walk outside at night would help him get to where he can actually sleep again.

After exiting the barn, the Navajo youth jumped the fence and made his way to the pasture.

A strong wind was blowing, and in the distance, flashes of lightning could be seen dancing around a huge
thunderhead.... no doubt the brewing storm would be upon them in a few hours.

For two hours he walked, enjoying the peace and quiet that was broken on occasion by deep rolling
thunder from afar. Above him still the stars could be seen, as the clouds hadn't reached the point above
the ranch yet.

Yawning, he headed towards the rise not to far away; still groggy, but knowing he'd be unable to sleep
with that stallion trampling all through his........ head.....

-So, you have finally answered my call.-

Okay, now.... either he was dreaming still.... or that stallion was right in front of him, standing on the
rise he had been walking towards. He... was certain that there had been no horse there before... and he
had not heard any hoofbeats..... yet now it stood before him, it's red mane whipping around in the strong wind.

-You know what I am.- It was not a question, but a statement.

Unable to do much else, he nodded.

-I have chosen you, Niyol, to be my rider. Complete the task I set before you, and I will be your partner...
your friend.... your guide, for as long as you shall live. But then, you already know this, do you not?-

Again, he nodded; not daring to speak out of reverence for the creature in front of him.

-You are a tracker; there is nothing, not print from the paw nor mark from a hoof that you cannot follow, so
I challenge you - follow me. Track me, where ever I may go, even to the ends of the Earth. If you can stand
before me once again in three weeks time, then you have earned the right to be called a rider of the Elmas Zo.-

-Then, and only then, shall you learn my name.-

And just like that, the huge stallion whirled and galloped off, leaving him alone, standing in awestruck stupor
until the first raindrops started pattering against the ground, and the first light of the new dawn creeped
up on the horizon. A few more moments he stood, then he bolted off back to the ranch house, determined
to wake up his best friend, spill the news, and get his things together. He was going to be away from home
for a long while....
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Art, Abaddon (c) ~TalonV
Elmas Zo breed (c) =Yami-maru
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Comments: 41

Scutterland [2013-09-16 16:45:36 +0000 UTC]

WOW this looks stunning!!!

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TalonV In reply to Scutterland [2013-09-16 17:30:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much!

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HayleyWolf [2013-09-16 14:28:54 +0000 UTC]

oooo Great job! That stallion is so gorgeous <3

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TalonV In reply to HayleyWolf [2013-09-18 01:47:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much!

Hey... would you be willing to help me with something?

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HayleyWolf In reply to TalonV [2013-09-18 12:38:53 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome ^_^

And sure I can try XD. What is it?

 

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TalonV In reply to HayleyWolf [2013-09-18 12:50:10 +0000 UTC]

Would ya mind commenting here obsydiandragon.deviantart.com/… saying something along the lines of "I'll pet her for ~TalonV ." I need some friends to help out to get her to level up/grow. :3

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HayleyWolf In reply to TalonV [2013-09-18 12:52:09 +0000 UTC]

Yep! I did ^^

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TalonV In reply to HayleyWolf [2013-09-18 12:58:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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HayleyWolf In reply to TalonV [2013-09-18 13:00:33 +0000 UTC]

No problem ^^

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Edhube [2013-09-16 11:42:52 +0000 UTC]

I love it when you write!  This is great!

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Yami-maru [2013-09-16 04:14:14 +0000 UTC]

OMIGOSH YES! this is PERFECT!!!!!!!! <333 what an amazing challenge well done! well done indeed~ I cannot wait to see the rest of it!

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TalonV In reply to Yami-maru [2013-09-16 04:31:10 +0000 UTC]

GAH! I'M SO GLAD!!!!! You have no idea how glad I am that you like this!!!!

I had no idea really how to issue a challenge like that, so I just started typing and let everything fall into place on it's own. X3 I like writing the silent-type people like Niyol, because you have to focus more on the actions and not the words they speak. (Another one of my OCs is a mute kid named Mouse.... he is a blast to play!)

I'll try to get part 2 done sometime this next week..... how much longer do I have to get the other two parts up and the ref drawn? Cause.... I might need a little more time.....

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Yami-maru In reply to TalonV [2013-09-16 04:44:00 +0000 UTC]

Well ig you draw a flat color reference sheet his registration will be complete and there is no time limit to challenges, however i would like them done as soon as possible. because it sets an example for others and newer memebers. 


plus it allows everyone to get to know the character better.


That aside. the rp is at a standstill because of a massive art project i am doing for class

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TalonV In reply to Yami-maru [2013-09-16 16:04:13 +0000 UTC]

Oh! I thought that we couldn't post the ref until the horse is officially 'owned', aka getting the challenge completely done first! That's what I was aiming to do; but I think.... since I have a week left, I should probably go ahead and get the ref up... Dun wanna loose me horsie!

I've got the ref sketch done, just need to scan it in and color it. :3

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Yami-maru In reply to TalonV [2013-09-16 18:33:54 +0000 UTC]

yea registering is a ref and place holder.


challenges should come soon after.

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TalonV In reply to Yami-maru [2013-09-16 18:35:37 +0000 UTC]

Okay! Ref will be up very soon!

Might work on it after I'm done with my RL horses outside... X3

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Yami-maru In reply to TalonV [2013-09-16 23:34:53 +0000 UTC]

Whooot! <333

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TalonV In reply to Yami-maru [2013-09-17 03:03:00 +0000 UTC]

talonv.deviantart.com/art/42-A…

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Yami-maru In reply to TalonV [2013-09-17 03:11:13 +0000 UTC]

i said this in a comment, but the neck is extremely thin for an elmas zo. they have thick arched necks but thin arabian necks.  but other than that it is gorgrous

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FishKid28 [2013-09-16 03:58:06 +0000 UTC]

Oooh..., me likey!

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TalonV In reply to FishKid28 [2013-09-16 04:25:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

I'm liking that I'm having to work on my writing recently.... it helps even out the art, and kills artblocks. XD

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FishKid28 In reply to TalonV [2013-09-16 04:32:15 +0000 UTC]

Yah, I find it easier to just write or think and dream about something to get out of art blocks. Because if your not feeling good at poses and the emotion you want in a drawing, you can take a piece of your writing and draw that moment, or sketch it and read it until your ready to go make beautiful art.

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TalonV In reply to FishKid28 [2013-09-17 14:48:48 +0000 UTC]

Exactly! :3

Oh! I used that vitamin E on Leo's face; it looks so much better! He still looks like a franken-horse though....

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FishKid28 In reply to TalonV [2013-09-17 14:54:21 +0000 UTC]



Hahaha, franken-horse huh? That's got to freak the other horses out

Glad its working! Hopefully in a couple weeks he will start to look normalish!

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TalonV In reply to FishKid28 [2013-09-17 15:21:49 +0000 UTC]

XD I don't think the other horses mind much at all.

Here's the improvment so far since the stitches were taken out - sta.sh/22ao5z3259p?edit=1 I think he's healing up VERY well! Thank you again for the prayers!

Did I ever show you the before vet/after vet photos? Can't remember....

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FishKid28 In reply to TalonV [2013-09-17 15:37:14 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, how do you know? maybe they gossip about him now behind your and his back.

"Ugh gosh, look at his face!"

"Shut up *horsename* your the one that did it to Leo!"

" °3° oh...right...bahaha" //kicked//


Yah I saw the before pictures ^_^

Oh yes, he is looking a lot better. Eh, yah, he is gonna need lots of neosporin and vit. E though :/

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TalonV In reply to FishKid28 [2013-09-17 15:50:18 +0000 UTC]

Pffft! You got my horses down to a 'T'!!! The first horse would be Koriro, and the second would be either the old senible mare Star, Leo's grilfriend Piper, or his loyal friend... the tiny pony Daisy. XP

Yes... he is.... and very often... at least he likes me putting it on though. His face must be itchy. X3

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FishKid28 In reply to TalonV [2013-09-17 16:04:49 +0000 UTC]

Bahaha, Oh funny, I bet they all all have funny character. x3


Ugh! Yes I bet its itchy! That's got to be torture...no hands! D:

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TalonV In reply to FishKid28 [2013-09-17 16:15:06 +0000 UTC]

Oh goodness, yes..... XD

Well, the bad thing is he'll rub his head to scratch it... and there's no way we can stop him from that. Thankfully, he's not scratched hard enough to do any damage whatsoever.... I think he knows not to...

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FishKid28 In reply to TalonV [2013-09-17 16:25:02 +0000 UTC]

Eek, yah, you can't really stop him but I hop he just doesn't try to rub it in dirt and stuff and get it butchered up again D

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TalonV In reply to FishKid28 [2013-09-17 17:45:39 +0000 UTC]

No, he won't rub it in dirt... maybe on a tree trunk, but nothing worse than that....

He seems to be pretty smart in that area.

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FishKid28 In reply to TalonV [2013-09-17 17:57:29 +0000 UTC]

Thats good, as long as he doesnt make it worse.


Yus, He must be

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Dreamer12423 [2013-09-16 02:58:31 +0000 UTC]

-jaw drops- excited to see the next 2 parts!!!

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TalonV In reply to Dreamer12423 [2013-09-16 03:19:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

I was worried the story wasn't.... um.... 'Elmas Zo' enough, but... going back over it again, methinks me like! X3

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Dreamer12423 In reply to TalonV [2013-09-16 22:40:36 +0000 UTC]

welcome!


it was perfect for the horse!!!

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TalonV In reply to Dreamer12423 [2013-09-16 23:19:18 +0000 UTC]

 

Would you mind doing me a tiny favor? :3

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Dreamer12423 In reply to TalonV [2013-09-17 01:48:45 +0000 UTC]


what is it?

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TalonV In reply to Dreamer12423 [2013-09-17 01:57:18 +0000 UTC]



I play a little dragon adoption game here on DA and for my next task, I need a few friends to help me out by commenting here - obsydiandragon.deviantart.com/… saying something like "I'll play with Serenity for ~TalonV ." :3

It's a really fun game, and I like how it requires you to seek help from friends every now and again. X3

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Dreamer12423 In reply to TalonV [2013-09-17 02:30:57 +0000 UTC]

commented!

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TalonV In reply to Dreamer12423 [2013-09-17 03:03:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Dreamer12423 In reply to TalonV [2013-09-17 21:51:03 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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