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Part II- Innocence
Published: 2007-07-29 02:41:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 11955; Favourites: 462; Downloads: 207
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EDIT: Well that was terribly unexpected Travii, you terrible, terrible person. Thanks for the DD.
Apophysis
Dream Theater
A Change Of Seasons
Part II- Innocence
I remember a time
My frail, virgin mind
Watched the crimson sunrise
Imagined what it might find
Life was filled with wonder
I felt the warm wind blow
I must explore the boundaries
Transcend the depth of winter's snow
Innocence caressing me
I never felt so young before
There was so much life in me
Still I longed to search for more
But those days are gone now
Changed like a leaf on a tree
Blown away forever
Into the cool autumn breeze
The snow has now fallen
And my sun's not so bright
I struggle to hold on
With the last of my might
In my den of inequity
Viciousness and subtlety
Struggle to ease the pain
Struggle to find the same
Ignorance surrounding me
I've never been so filled with fear
All my life's been drained from me
The end is drawing near...
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Comments: 45
Even when you not here - you can get a DD !!!
Wow I love your stuff and Im glad you got the well deserved recognition
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sorry i didn't put this in my first comment, but another good title for that pic is "Opalescence"
i don't know how to spell it...
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This is amazing, I saw the small thumbnail and HAD to see it up close. The title and image work so well together and the poem is great too. This strikes me as intense.
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Love it.... For some reason, reminds me of a dystopia sort of thing, but in a good way.
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Nice poem. I actually liked that one. And your artwork is cool too, really nice perspective on it. Good texture, nice looking design, and lighting works well, too. Good effect for how simple it is.
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Nice design, great use of lights and darks too! Cool effects!
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So pretty. The simplist things can convey the most emotion.
Well done.
And the poem... you can't be that old!
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It's funny because I feel like I've seen this shape a lot of time, but never with such a nice texture...
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ah, now this one is much better. I must admit i wasnt a big fan of part 1, but this has seriously improved on it. Great shot, man
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I had to make the first one fit the song. Theres a lot of little details in it if you look closely.
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yeah i noticed. This one is still far cooler, if you ask me
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Yep. It seems everyone thinks so
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haha perhaps. It could be that everyone here just wants to make a good impression on you, so they give you blind compliments and dont actually look at the picture enough to give good, positive feedback, instead of a "omfg awesome!" reply
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Wow! It looks like a flame frozen into ice! It's an amazing color/texture effect.
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Wow travii. Wow.
I cant believe you said that about a flipped disc.
I'm not sure if I should be afraid or happy o.o
Thanks?
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