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Taser-Rander — Part V- Another World

Published: 2007-07-30 16:23:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 1029; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 67
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Description Apophysis

Part V of VII- Another World

So far or so it seems
All is lost
With nothing fulfilled
Off the pages and the
T.V. screen
Another world
Where nothing's true

Tripping through
The life fantastic
Lose a step
And never get up
Left alone
With a cold blank stare
I feel like giving up

I was blinded by a paradise
Utopia high in the sky
A dream that only drowned me
Deep in sorrow, wondering why

Oh come let us adore him
Abuse and then ignore him
No matter what
Don't let him be
Let's feed upon his misery
Then string him up for all the world to see

I'm sick of all
Your hypocrites
Holding me at bay
And I don't need
Your sympathy
To get me through the day

Seasons change and so can I
Hold on Boy
No time to cry
Untie these strings
I'm climbing down
I won't let them push me away

Oh come let us adore him
Abuse and then ignore him
No matter what
Don't let him be
Let's feed upon
His misery
Now it's time for them
To deal with me
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Comments: 8

Hollow-Phoenix [2007-08-13 05:42:27 +0000 UTC]

Reminds me strongly of particles' tracks in the Bubble Chambers of particle detectors.

I love the swirled lines, but I think there may be a tad too many - perhaps if you adjusted the levels so there was more of a polarization in the weights of the lines - either thick, or quite faint. As compelling as they are, they approach the point of visual overload at the moment.

The orb elements are quite nicely done, as well.

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AnnaKirsten [2007-07-31 16:23:01 +0000 UTC]

An excellent fractal image!!

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Taser-Rander In reply to AnnaKirsten [2007-07-31 17:17:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Anna

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Razorhawk88 [2007-07-31 12:00:22 +0000 UTC]

I like this one the most!
It's very detailed, and i like the colours at the top...
keep creating!

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Taser-Rander In reply to Razorhawk88 [2007-07-31 17:15:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Jshei [2007-07-30 20:28:22 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic poem and picture!

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Taser-Rander In reply to Jshei [2007-07-30 20:29:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, the lyrics are from A Change Of Seasons, by Dream Theater. Definitely worth a listen

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Jshei In reply to Taser-Rander [2007-07-30 20:40:00 +0000 UTC]

Awesome.

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