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Published: 2013-04-11 13:20:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 1561; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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Description Well guys here it is the first page to the cutie mark crusaders!!

I know its not really detailed but for me this is a milestone for me. Even though it takes me so long to get the outlines right and all of that. There are 2 characters in this that you will see a lot during the are Appleseed and Green Thumb ^^

Appleseed is blind in both her eyes thus the reason she didnt see the hoof in front of her.

So.... I guess that is mainly it for the describtion Just really happy that I got this up today before I go to bed. PLEASE leave comments about this. I really want to know how you guys think of this. and also
()()()() COMMENT WITH YOUR PONY/FILLY OC IF YOU WANT HE OR SHE TO BE IN THE COMIC. Still looking for characters for certain parts in the stories.

Still questioning on doing only 1 chapter or doing multiple...... More than likely 1 but I may do multiples

Also wanna give a big thanks to For letting me get 3 fillies/OCs for 5 points. ^^ Thanks a lot!!!

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Art done by me
Appleseed and Green Thumb are mine
Ponies and other things copyrighted to Hasbro and the maker whose name escapes me right now
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Comments: 808

TE-Lightning In reply to ??? [2013-04-24 20:28:27 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. sorry...was trying to help

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Swordmaster200 In reply to TE-Lightning [2013-04-24 20:59:18 +0000 UTC]

Applebloom: Thanks, but it's too dangerous!

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TE-Lightning In reply to Swordmaster200 [2013-04-24 21:01:22 +0000 UTC]

For me to help?

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Swordmaster200 In reply to TE-Lightning [2013-04-24 21:04:03 +0000 UTC]

Applebloom: I mean this fight. You may help, but only if you have the will to fight.

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TE-Lightning In reply to Swordmaster200 [2013-04-24 21:11:26 +0000 UTC]

Well I mean... Ive almost been killed twice. and I really dont know what I can do to help

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Swordmaster200 In reply to TE-Lightning [2013-04-24 21:17:51 +0000 UTC]

Applebloom: You have?

Grey: Maybe you can get yourself killed the THIRD TIME!!!

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TE-Lightning In reply to Swordmaster200 [2013-04-24 21:20:59 +0000 UTC]

Come on now Applebloom would never let you get close enough to me and I wont let you get close to her

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Swordmaster200 In reply to TE-Lightning [2013-04-24 21:31:09 +0000 UTC]

Grey: Hmph...you're just like HER!

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TE-Lightning In reply to Swordmaster200 [2013-04-24 21:35:37 +0000 UTC]

Better than being like you.

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Swordmaster200 In reply to TE-Lightning [2013-04-24 21:38:34 +0000 UTC]

Grey: SHUT UP!!! -Attacks you-

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TE-Lightning In reply to Swordmaster200 [2013-04-24 21:41:27 +0000 UTC]

*pushes Applebloom away and dodges the attack* Anger will not get you anywhere

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Swordmaster200 In reply to TE-Lightning [2013-04-24 21:46:08 +0000 UTC]

Applebloom: Thanks. Be careful!

Grey: DIE!!! -Zombie pony form, he attacks you again-

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TE-Lightning In reply to Swordmaster200 [2013-04-24 21:49:57 +0000 UTC]

*kicks the knife out of his hooves* come on now... just stop

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Swordmaster200 In reply to TE-Lightning [2013-04-24 21:51:13 +0000 UTC]

Grey: You son of a-! -His hoof shoots out bullets made of blood-

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TE-Lightning In reply to Swordmaster200 [2013-04-24 21:53:33 +0000 UTC]

*surprised by the bullets* What the heck *tries to dodge them*

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Swordmaster200 In reply to TE-Lightning [2013-04-24 21:58:12 +0000 UTC]

-You managed to dodge some of the bullets and gain minor cuts from the others-

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TE-Lightning In reply to Swordmaster200 [2013-04-24 22:01:07 +0000 UTC]

*looks at the cuts* That a little too close... *looks at him and tries to kick him*

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Swordmaster200 In reply to TE-Lightning [2013-04-24 22:02:00 +0000 UTC]

Grey: -Gets kicked in the leg- Impressive...

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TE-Lightning In reply to Swordmaster200 [2013-04-24 22:32:19 +0000 UTC]

Theres lots I can do that will impress a pony like you

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Swordmaster200 In reply to TE-Lightning [2013-04-24 22:44:00 +0000 UTC]

Grey: How so, boy?

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TE-Lightning In reply to Swordmaster200 [2013-04-24 22:45:57 +0000 UTC]

They dont call me Lightning for nothing

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Swordmaster200 In reply to TE-Lightning [2013-04-24 22:48:53 +0000 UTC]

Grey: A lightning-fast fighter, I see...

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TE-Lightning In reply to Swordmaster200 [2013-04-24 22:53:33 +0000 UTC]

You know it *appears behind him* Afraid yet?

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Swordmaster200 In reply to TE-Lightning [2013-04-24 22:56:23 +0000 UTC]

Grey: -Scary face- Are YOU?!

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TE-Lightning In reply to Swordmaster200 [2013-04-24 23:00:10 +0000 UTC]

*kicks him* Am I what?

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Swordmaster200 In reply to TE-Lightning [2013-04-24 23:31:31 +0000 UTC]

Grey: Damn it! You're gonna pay for that!

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TE-Lightning In reply to Swordmaster200 [2013-04-24 23:35:04 +0000 UTC]

*I laugh* Yeah right.

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Swordmaster200 In reply to TE-Lightning [2013-04-24 23:39:58 +0000 UTC]

Applebloom: He had never met a zombie pony, yet he can handle one on his own! Amazing...

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TE-Lightning In reply to Swordmaster200 [2013-04-24 23:46:06 +0000 UTC]

You wanna just give up now or continue?

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Swordmaster200 In reply to TE-Lightning [2013-04-24 23:50:23 +0000 UTC]

Grey: Give up? We're just getting STARTED!!! -Slices out a blood-scythe with his right hoof-

Applebloom: What is this? Deadmare Wonderland? (Deadman Wonderland)

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TE-Lightning In reply to Swordmaster200 [2013-04-24 23:55:01 +0000 UTC]

Well this is going to get fun *looks at him and then disappears*

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Swordmaster200 In reply to TE-Lightning [2013-04-25 00:13:42 +0000 UTC]

Grey: You can do that...but I can smell your blood! You cannot escape death! -He shoots a blood-spike in your direction-

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TE-Lightning In reply to Swordmaster200 [2013-04-25 00:18:55 +0000 UTC]

*narrowly avoids it and gets behind a boulder* Damn that was too close...

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Swordmaster200 In reply to TE-Lightning [2013-04-25 00:27:08 +0000 UTC]

Applebloom: He's good!

Grey: Grr...-He slams his bloodied hoof into the ground and red stakes go in your direction-

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TE-Lightning In reply to Swordmaster200 [2013-04-25 00:29:45 +0000 UTC]

*feels the ground rumble* What is that? *sees the red stakes coming towards him* OH! *disappears from sight again*

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Swordmaster200 In reply to TE-Lightning [2013-04-25 00:30:54 +0000 UTC]

Grey: Fight me like a stallion, damn coward!!!

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TE-Lightning In reply to Swordmaster200 [2013-04-25 00:34:24 +0000 UTC]

*gets behind another boulder and power-kicks it at him*

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Swordmaster200 In reply to TE-Lightning [2013-04-25 00:36:08 +0000 UTC]

Grey: -Dodges the boulder-

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TE-Lightning In reply to Swordmaster200 [2013-04-25 00:36:58 +0000 UTC]

*gets beside him and powerkicks him into a tree*

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Swordmaster200 In reply to TE-Lightning [2013-04-25 00:40:47 +0000 UTC]

Grey: Ow...that hurt. This isn't over yet...Apllebloom, I love y-

Applebloom: -Kicks him- Crazy psycho!

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TE-Lightning In reply to Swordmaster200 [2013-04-25 00:46:31 +0000 UTC]

Isnt he still concious?

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Swordmaster200 In reply to TE-Lightning [2013-04-25 00:53:09 +0000 UTC]

Applebloom: Looks that way.

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TE-Lightning In reply to Swordmaster200 [2013-04-25 00:56:15 +0000 UTC]

You give up now little one? *chuckles*

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Swordmaster200 In reply to TE-Lightning [2013-04-25 02:23:17 +0000 UTC]

Grey: Retreating! -Leaves-

Applebloom: What a yandere.

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TE-Lightning In reply to Swordmaster200 [2013-04-25 02:27:20 +0000 UTC]

*I sit dont exhausted* Whew... that hurt a little

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Swordmaster200 In reply to TE-Lightning [2013-04-25 02:39:36 +0000 UTC]

Applebloom: -Takes out her medic kit box- This might burn a little...

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TE-Lightning In reply to Swordmaster200 [2013-04-25 02:45:26 +0000 UTC]

Woah... what are you doing? *inches away*

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Swordmaster200 In reply to TE-Lightning [2013-04-25 02:54:16 +0000 UTC]

Applebloom: Oh well, might give you this. -Gives you a healing potion-

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TE-Lightning In reply to Swordmaster200 [2013-04-25 03:06:45 +0000 UTC]

Healing potion?

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Swordmaster200 In reply to TE-Lightning [2013-04-25 03:11:03 +0000 UTC]

Applebloom: It works faster in healing your wounds.

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