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TE-Lightning — CMC Chapter 1 Page 1
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Published: 2013-04-11 13:20:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 1561; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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Well guys here it is the first page to the cutie mark crusaders!!I know its not really detailed but for me this is a milestone for me. Even though it takes me so long to get the outlines right and all of that. There are 2 characters in this that you will see a lot during the are Appleseed and Green Thumb ^^
Appleseed is blind in both her eyes thus the reason she didnt see the hoof in front of her.
So.... I guess that is mainly it for the describtion
Just really happy that I got this up today before I go to bed. PLEASE leave comments about this. I really want to know how you guys think of this. and also()()()() COMMENT WITH YOUR PONY/FILLY OC IF YOU WANT HE OR SHE TO BE IN THE COMIC. Still looking for characters for certain parts in the stories.
Still questioning on doing only 1 chapter or doing multiple...... More than likely 1 but I may do multiples
Also wanna give a big thanks to For letting me get 3 fillies/OCs for 5 points. ^^ Thanks a lot!!!
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Art done by me
Appleseed and Green Thumb are mine
Ponies and other things copyrighted to Hasbro and the maker whose name escapes me right now
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Tiara: -She is now at the gates of a sinister-looking castle. The gates open for her. She enters into an underground council room-
Ebon: Sister? Are you doing alright?
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Green Thumb: She looks alright to me. *sitting in a chair half asleep*
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Tiara: Wake up, you Fluttershy wannabe! -She doesn't look happy...-
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Tiara: Wake up, you Fluttershy wannabe!
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Green Thumb: Says the pony with a stupid little tiara atop of her head. *snickers*
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Tiara: -Draws out her sword and points it at Green Thumb's throat- RUN THAT BY ME, AGAIN?!
(Silver Spoon comes in and stops them)
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Silver Spoon: *drops Tiara's sword* Now now Tiara.... Just calm down
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Tiara: Silver Spoon! What are you doing here?!
Ebon: You must forgive my sister. She's in a foul mood. Best not make it worse, please.
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Silver Spoon: What I cant join in on this now?
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Ebon: You can. Try and comfort her. It's the least you could do, since you had once called her "friend".
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Ebon: You can. Try and comfort her.
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Silver Spoon: I'll try... Now Tiara... Wont you just sit down here please?.. *tried to lead her away*
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Tiara: -Calms down a bit- Y...yes. -Follows Silver Spoon-
Ebon: Green Thumb, please don't mind her. She will be in a better mood, soon! Now on to business!
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Green Thumb: Sure do hope so. So whats the topic today?
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Ebon: How was your first day of school? Did a red colt and a blue baby dragon get in your way, and did you leave the scene immediately?
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Ebon: How was your first day of school?
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Green Thumb: Just like what all the others are going to be. boring
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Ebon: If you want me to, I can make it better...as we crush those inferior Blank Flanks like insects! But first...what kind of weapon do you perfer?
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Green Thumb: Weapon?... what do you mean weapon?
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Ebon: -Takes out his sword- Sticks and stones may break bones, but words are merely secondary. You've seen Sweetie Belle defeat Diamond Tiara in a sword duel, correct?
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Green Thumb: A little bit of it
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Ebon: Then don't you wish to avenge Tiara's defeat?
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Green Thumb: A little but not that much. My fight was with the blind one not that Sweetie Belle
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Ebon: You mean that pitiful Appleseed?
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Greem Thumb: Yeah that is exactly what I mean
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Ebon: If you want revenge, you can...join me!
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Green Thumb: I like the sound of that
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Ebon: This way you may turn from a bully to a bigger bully, also called a "Villain"! -Sinister laughter-
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Green Thumb: So whats the revenge situation?
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Ebon: You wanted to take part in the capture of Appleseed, correct? Then choose a weapon! (Medieval-to-Victorian weapons as they appear to be)
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Green Thumb: We're not gonna kill them are we?
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Ebon: The weapons are fake! We're actors! Okay?
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Green Thumb: Oh... So its like fencing then right?
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Ebon: Yes, but with different weapons! Which weapon finds your interest?
As listed:
Hooves (Unarmed and dangerous)
Karate
Sword
Sword and shield
Longsword
Grimoire
Bow-and-arrow
Hammer
Axe
Greatsword
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Green Thumb: I guess the Greatsword would do well
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Ebon: Alright...-Hands Green a wooden greatsword- Are you sure, though?
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Green Thumb: What do you mean? It cant be that heavy. *Tries to pick it up* Ok it might be.
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Ebon: Longsword, then?
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Green Thumb: Yeah... Maybe that then
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Ebon: -Hands her a wooden two-handed longsword, and it's lighter than the greatsword. Much lighter-
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Green Thumb: Much better *she picks it up and swings it*
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Ebon: Alright...-Readies his fencing foil-
(Cutie Mark Crusaders: LARPers. That should sum it up.)
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Green Thumb: Oh you wanna challenge me dont you? *readies her sword*
(Larpers?)
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Ebon: Indeed. Silver Spoon?
-She comed into the room-
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Silver Spoon: Huh? You called me?
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Ebon: Give the signal!
(The signal: "Begin!")
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Green Thumb: Begin *she swings at him*
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Ebon: Whoa! Not yet!
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Green Thumb: *Stops the sword* Oh... sorry *readjusts back to before*
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