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Published: 2013-04-11 13:20:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 1561; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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Well guys here it is the first page to the cutie mark crusaders!!I know its not really detailed but for me this is a milestone for me. Even though it takes me so long to get the outlines right and all of that. There are 2 characters in this that you will see a lot during the are Appleseed and Green Thumb ^^
Appleseed is blind in both her eyes thus the reason she didnt see the hoof in front of her.
So.... I guess that is mainly it for the describtion
Just really happy that I got this up today before I go to bed. PLEASE leave comments about this. I really want to know how you guys think of this. and also()()()() COMMENT WITH YOUR PONY/FILLY OC IF YOU WANT HE OR SHE TO BE IN THE COMIC. Still looking for characters for certain parts in the stories.
Still questioning on doing only 1 chapter or doing multiple...... More than likely 1 but I may do multiples
Also wanna give a big thanks to For letting me get 3 fillies/OCs for 5 points. ^^ Thanks a lot!!!
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Art done by me
Appleseed and Green Thumb are mine
Ponies and other things copyrighted to Hasbro and the maker whose name escapes me right now
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Appleseed: Courageous.... *looks a little scared*
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Cinder: -Pats her on the back- You have some courage, you just don't know it. We all had to learn that the hard way, such as standing up to bullies, bloodthirsty monsters or something similar to either of the sort.
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Appleseed: I dont think I can do something like that. I mean bullies I probably can.... but not monsters
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Scootaloo: I thought the same thing, but Princess Luna and Rainbow Dash helped me face my fears.
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Appleseed: Well I dont have anyone to look up to.... >.>
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Applebloom: Cinder led you here, and he had protected you! Maybe he will continue doing so.
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Appleseed: I dont think so. >.>
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Cinder: Thanks for damaging my self-esteem.
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Appleseed: Im sorry *nudges what she thinks is him* didnt mean it like that
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Sapphire: Um...Cinder is over there...-Leads her to him-
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Appleseed: *embarrassed* Oh... sorry.... -___-
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Cinder: -Pats her on the back- It's alright. I will protect you.
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Appleseed: Im surprised anypony out there likes me with me never knowing where anything is at
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Cinder: Appleseed, if you can't see, then use your ears, nose and hooves as your eyes. It may sound hard, but you will make it. I promise.
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Appleseed: I've been trying to but it hasnt been working
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Sapphire: What he's trying to say is...courage doesn't come from not being blind. It comes from the heart.
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Applebloom: Non-alcoholic Apple Cider? -Hands Appleseed a mug of apple cider-
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Appleseed: Apple Cider? Never had this before. *takes the cup*
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Scootaloo: Just as long as she doesn't get drunk!
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Appleseed: Its non-alcoholic isnt it?
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Applebloom: Eeyup! I looked at the bottle, and...Eeyup. Non-alcoholic!
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Appleseed: *takes a sip* Ahh that burned a little. you sure that was non alcoholic?
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Applebloom: It said it is...
Cinder: So...did the same happen to Fluttershy and Big Mac? Did they-
Applebloom: DO NOT MENTION IT!!! There are kids here!
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Appleseed: Uhm.... What were you going to say? They had sex?
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Applebloom: I said NOT IN FRONT OF THE KIDS!!!
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Appleseed: We're gonna have to say it, talk about it, or even do it eventually in our lives. Might as well just say it
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Applebloom: -Facehoof- Are you drunk?
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Appleseed: *drinks some more of the cider and starts wobbling a little* I-I dont know
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Applebloom: -Looks at the bottle- I didn't request for any alcohol. -Looks at the ingredients- It doesn't say anything about alcohol, and it was recently bought.
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Appleseed: Well that doesnt mean its not in it *Smiles*
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-Some time later...-
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[link] heres my oc if you want to use her (She is an artist, dj and when she uses magic her horn glows neon green) Anyway, this looks really amazing, I love it so far and cant wait for the next page! Also I hope your wrist feels better
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Did you make that specifically for the comic?
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Actually I made her a while ago, just never posted her but anyway if you want I could make some specifically for the comic if you want
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No its alright I was just seeing XD
Got a personality for her yet?
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Ok lol
Mean, Greedy, Snotty, Bitchy, Ignorant, Nice to friends/some fillys
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some fillies? Sounds like Diamond Tiarra a little
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lol yeah she kinda hates little fillys, but she is nice to some of them
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... Well thats going to suck. You want her to be a blank flank in the story or have the mark?
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Have the mark
(If you dont want her to be so rude, you dont have to make her that mean lol)
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well there is no point in asking personality if I wasnt going to let her be herself
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She looks like Fluttershy in a sense
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She doesnt act no where near the way she does does she?
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no lol she is a little shy at times, but is brave and outgoing every other time haha
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lol alright I'll see what I can do with her in the comic if I can.
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