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tearsofthunder — Jupiter the mlp
Published: 2003-10-29 02:51:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 809; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 194
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I had held out on posting this picture because I'm not at all happy with it, the proportions are severely off, her nose is way too shprt for her body and the clouds look like and exploded marshmellow all over a micro wave (don't ask how I know that)_ but still, I guess I can post it and see what kind of response I get, as well as some good critisism, which I appreciate! as long as you point out the mistake and suggest how to improve it. My style and technique has changed sinse this was drawn however, so be gentle.Related content
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absolutely LOVE this one 
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thanks, Im glad the pieces I am dissapointed over are still appreciated *hugs*
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no thanxs ! I just love my little pony's...especially yours! she looks so dreamy...
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I think the clouds look abit more like..maybe grass or bushes, than clouds. But you know..that's not a problem, still looks like she's laying in something.
Her legs look abit too long (but I'm not good with guessing Flutter leg length..). The expression though, is great..so much emotion in such a small space..heh.
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In spite of the few proportion probs as said before, this picture is beautiful
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The wings...well need some shape changes to make them more...stylish? You could have helped the muzzle look better by moving the nostril on the left more to the left and drawing perhaps a short line, between the top of the eye and in line with the nostril to give the appearence of foreshortening the muzzle. Everything else looks great =^_^= I like the clouds =O_o= and the colours.
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yay! this is cute..... even if the proportions are a little off.. it's still good.
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