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tebited15 — Mother X the beginning part 3
Published: 2011-02-17 22:49:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 2609; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 296
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part 3: the battle against the first boss and the return of the starmenplease tell me if you see grammar errors
part 2: [link]
part1 : [link]
Mother series belongs to nintendo/itoi
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Ay, pobre Nicholas, jejeje, se pego un buen susto XD
Y el príncipe Boomax me recuerda un poco a Buzz Buzz...
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Basicamente son del mismo planeta solo que su especie esta mas desarrollada.
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Esteban una pregunta: los sprites de Helen abriendo el regalo y callendose los hiciste editando los de Hinawa en el sheet q tenia a Mystia?
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si los edite de hinawa pero de su sheet original de spriters resource
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Ahh... No recordaba que tambien estaban en Spriters Resource :\
Una pregunta, recibiste mi idea para Rose, Lily y Violet que puse en tu Journal hace unos minutos?
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si los recibi esta buenisimo
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si por el momento necesitaba usarlos temporalmente como los padres de cheryl y nicholas que son hermanos y los padres de chuck
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No puedo esperar a que tu amigo combierta esto en un juego!
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Oh snap!
I'm so picturing this as a game... too bad its only a comic, either way the story is going great so far :3
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the story is getting better the next chapter takes place in the space
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here are some corrected grammar errors:
Let's see if someone's inside.
My planet is doomed. They came for me and your fam-
I wonder how many planets there are in space.
Get ready for the ending of the world as you know it and a new era of slavery.
Lucas must have sent it for our anniversary next week.
Anyone who gets in the way of the emperor of the universe must die.
I don't think so, they probably want to experiment on us.
All the grammar errors I found as you asked.
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thanks, I changed the errors
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