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Published: 2015-06-03 01:43:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 477; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 3
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I made this after watching a beach-themed episode on Project Runway, hehe. I love summerRelated content
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MadameFuriosa [2015-07-23 21:32:34 +0000 UTC]
Hi, you choose a good theme for your picture. I like the transparent blouse. You drew it well. Your background is well done, too. YouΒ΄ve got many details there.
You could improve your artwork with shafts of sunlight or with some highlights.
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TechnophileForever In reply to MadameFuriosa [2015-07-23 21:59:33 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the critique. I'll make sure to work on those.
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MadameFuriosa In reply to TechnophileForever [2015-07-24 04:42:05 +0000 UTC]
ItΒ΄s not easy I know. Shafts of light are difficult to draw, but I tought you can maybe try it.
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Jez13 In reply to TechnophileForever [2015-06-06 18:14:15 +0000 UTC]
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Summer-Lynx [2015-06-04 14:29:15 +0000 UTC]
I love the tropical theme on this piece! I feel summer-y just looking at it and I also really like how you did her eyes, hair and clothing patterns! Very cool! A suggestion I have would be to shade/add shadows to the girl and the background. I see you have some small shading in the background so maybe darken those shadows a bit more. You'll need toΒ find your light source first though. Here is a helpful shading tutorial I found that may help you:
www.deviantart.com/art/Shadingβ¦
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TechnophileForever In reply to Summer-Lynx [2015-06-04 19:36:24 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for the lovely critique!
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Summer-Lynx In reply to TechnophileForever [2015-06-04 20:24:06 +0000 UTC]
Your very welcome!
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