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Description "When I left for the REPF I broke Bristol's innocent heart. I made it worse by treating her to a lovely picnic at our favorite vantage point too. I thought it was the best farewell I could give her before I shipped out. We watched the most beautiful sunset I've ever seen as the sun fell behind Mt Ruapehu too. [link] [link] But...that's not what she saw.

She never said directly apart from screaming 'I HATE YOU KAIMANAWA! I HOPE YOU NEVER RETURN.' Before she ran off into the crowd at the pier. I guess...I guess that's proof enough. ~sigh~

I don't blame her either, I mean, I think back now and realise she probably thought that I finally wanted there to be more between us. All I could selfishly think was; 'This is my goodbye to you sis, a goodbye forever. I'm not coming home, at least not alive.' What a bucking idiot, what a young inexperienced colt...what did SHE do to deserve that.

I wonder if she dreams about me, I wonder if she has nightmares too?" [link]

The above wording is going to be in a story I write when Kai is sitting in his office alone one evening after getting a package from his mom. The pic will be the cover image

Here is the latest piece commissioned by me from the godly talented who's works never cease to astound with rich colours, deep and emotive mannerisms, fetching postures and amazing backgrounds.

I requested a picture of Bristol having a nightmare about Kaimanawa and the vivid image of him when he got his cutie mark. Note the blue not the blonde? Yes, that is intentional. Some may know but when Kai is at his emotional zenith his features turn two tone blue due to anger or paternal want to protect his Iwi (extended kinship group ie Bristol, Snowy, Rainbow Dash, Squadron mates ).

A very heart felt thanks Shine for this works and I look forward to your future works coming out.

I had no part in the actual work, only commission request but picture is uploaded so you call all experience her awesomeness.

Kaimanawa/Bristol (c)
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Comments: 56

Tempestwulf In reply to ??? [2013-01-28 07:45:38 +0000 UTC]

You pretty much hit the nail on the head with your description. She deeply regrets what she yelled at him as it was an emotional response and out of character. She fears for his safety and dreams of past memories of him, a nightmarish scenario playing through her subconscious while she's asleep.

Fortunately, Kai does survive and the reunite after Bristol enlists in the Royal Equestrian Pega Force and is luckily posted to Equestria from New Friesian. Kai does get shot down and is wounded in the line of duty, more than once too. He also gets turned into a mare at one stage mere days before they reunite. But, she doesn't see that

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easyridin In reply to Tempestwulf [2013-01-28 14:53:36 +0000 UTC]

Now I need to read this story of yours. It sounds pretty good. What is it called and is it on Fimfiction?

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Tempestwulf In reply to easyridin [2013-01-28 21:05:16 +0000 UTC]

No it's not in Fimfiction actually. It's in my gallery, there's a folder called Spirit Journals containing all the chapters. [link] - Starts from the bottom one called Enter The Wolf

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Fyre-Medi [2012-02-25 23:50:35 +0000 UTC]

Did you know that when I searched REPF this came up as THE most popular of all time.

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Tempestwulf In reply to Fyre-Medi [2012-02-26 00:15:11 +0000 UTC]

You're right. It's because it's the fifth word in the description.

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Fyre-Medi In reply to Tempestwulf [2012-02-26 00:21:46 +0000 UTC]

That would explain the hit but the popularity can not be denied.

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Tempestwulf In reply to Fyre-Medi [2012-02-26 00:30:31 +0000 UTC]

Yup. Probably the only one with the REPF in the description actually so that'll be why.

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kprovido [2011-12-26 21:20:58 +0000 UTC]

Awww, its soo cute!!

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Tempestwulf In reply to kprovido [2011-12-26 21:46:35 +0000 UTC]

Thx. Kaimanawa loves his surrogate sister Bristol

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TheJackpotRaven [2011-12-06 04:34:11 +0000 UTC]

very nice

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Tempestwulf In reply to TheJackpotRaven [2011-12-06 04:38:14 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely. wish I had the skill to draw like that myself but that skill goes into other mediums.

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TheJackpotRaven In reply to Tempestwulf [2011-12-06 15:30:20 +0000 UTC]

i wish i could draw like that too lol

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Spartkle [2011-12-06 04:26:38 +0000 UTC]

*dead*

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Tempestwulf In reply to Spartkle [2011-12-06 04:36:43 +0000 UTC]

That's what you get for messing with Kai's Bristol Hawke Ain't no pony messes with my Iwi

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Spartkle In reply to Tempestwulf [2011-12-06 04:48:45 +0000 UTC]

Tehe. x3

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Miss-Bow [2011-12-05 21:36:53 +0000 UTC]

Oh my lord, this is gorgeous. *o*

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Tempestwulf In reply to Miss-Bow [2011-12-05 23:27:14 +0000 UTC]

I knooowwww It's so cool, she does an amazing job and portrayed Kai & Bristol perfectly.

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Miss-Bow In reply to Tempestwulf [2011-12-05 23:28:21 +0000 UTC]

Simply amazing. ^-^

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CrossFirePony [2011-12-05 19:55:09 +0000 UTC]

the hooves look like they were painted white and tha paint is drying/cracking off
awesome blue kawa..kawaiia....uh....KONICHIWA.

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Tempestwulf In reply to CrossFirePony [2011-12-05 20:42:09 +0000 UTC]

Bless you *gives tissue*

Thx, she's my favourite artist on DA.

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kyo4kusanagi [2011-12-05 15:12:54 +0000 UTC]

Sweet ^^

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Tempestwulf In reply to kyo4kusanagi [2011-12-05 20:41:18 +0000 UTC]

Yet deadly XD

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kyo4kusanagi In reply to Tempestwulf [2011-12-06 08:31:41 +0000 UTC]

Agree ^^ *nod*

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unitoone [2011-12-05 15:01:21 +0000 UTC]

She did a wonderful job.

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Tempestwulf In reply to unitoone [2011-12-05 20:41:11 +0000 UTC]

She's an amazing artist. Likely to commission again in future.

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HiddenZealot [2011-12-05 12:28:42 +0000 UTC]

Why art thou blue~?

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Tempestwulf In reply to HiddenZealot [2011-12-05 12:49:17 +0000 UTC]

It's a colour warning of impending DOOOOMMM

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HiddenZealot In reply to Tempestwulf [2011-12-05 12:51:56 +0000 UTC]

Hmm... appears legitiment~!

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Fyre-Medi [2011-12-05 11:45:36 +0000 UTC]

Bluuue huh? *giggles maniacaly* That IS interesting.

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Tempestwulf In reply to Fyre-Medi [2011-12-05 11:53:10 +0000 UTC]

It's a can of pinkie pies I tells ya.

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MagicaRin [2011-12-05 11:45:27 +0000 UTC]

What about your daughter? 8I

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Tempestwulf In reply to MagicaRin [2011-12-05 11:52:33 +0000 UTC]

Dearest lace, you are the outcome of your mothers grief and desperation to still have a part of Kaimanawa with her. It's likely to be put into writing at some time (sounds like broken record). Immaculate conception after she begs Celestia for help which is denied by the Princess...but not by a certain sister.

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MagicaRin In reply to Tempestwulf [2011-12-05 11:53:47 +0000 UTC]

Don't you love me? ;_________________________;

THINK ABOUT THE PANCAKES.

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Tempestwulf In reply to MagicaRin [2011-12-05 12:00:45 +0000 UTC]

Hey, wait, what? *cuddles* Of coarse I love you Lacey, you're my only and most special daughter. You're our miracle child that was born from the spark of your mothers soul and the bond that we shared. She travelled all the way to Equestria with her heart felt plea, to give her solace and something to hold onto until my return from the war.

*nuzzles* You are the centre of our ponyverse.

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MagicaRin In reply to Tempestwulf [2011-12-05 12:01:53 +0000 UTC]

You just gave me my pony's background story. Thank you.

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Tempestwulf In reply to MagicaRin [2011-12-05 12:24:04 +0000 UTC]

Hey, wait, what (again) I did? Oh, yes, I did. I am your father after all

I've had that image of your, Laces, genesis for a while, I like how it feels in respect of Bristol. I didn't want Kai & Briss to have an interlude, kinda ruined it in my mind.

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MagicaRin In reply to Tempestwulf [2011-12-05 12:24:44 +0000 UTC]

oAo You lost me. Lol.

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Tempestwulf In reply to MagicaRin [2011-12-05 12:47:40 +0000 UTC]

Talking to much. I'll stop now

Basically I didn't want Lace to be conceived through a sexual relationship. I do but I don't, I like the idea she was conceived through a powerful spell due to Bristol's desperation. You decide on which you'd prefer since it's your OC too.

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MagicaRin In reply to Tempestwulf [2011-12-05 12:48:15 +0000 UTC]

Oh, uh. I don't really care. xD

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Tempestwulf In reply to MagicaRin [2011-12-05 12:51:22 +0000 UTC]

I understand, you don't love your papa anymore. You only did it for the pancakes.

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MagicaRin In reply to Tempestwulf [2011-12-05 12:58:23 +0000 UTC]

You caught me. v.v *hands pancakes back and walks away sadly*

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Tempestwulf In reply to MagicaRin [2011-12-05 13:03:36 +0000 UTC]

Hey...wait...Lacey ~sniffle~ I want you not pancakes *feels emptiness* Alas, I am alone again.

okay enough emotions. lol

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MagicaRin In reply to Tempestwulf [2011-12-05 13:11:49 +0000 UTC]

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Tempestwulf In reply to MagicaRin [2011-12-05 13:16:02 +0000 UTC]

*sits you down & gives cutlery & large stack of pancakes with extra butter/maple syrup* Good good. Now eat your breakfast, you're Squadron Leader for a day remember so you need all your energy to command my pegasus.

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MagicaRin In reply to Tempestwulf [2011-12-05 13:19:36 +0000 UTC]

oAo...........

Now I'm even more confused than before.

Y U DO THIS

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Tempestwulf In reply to MagicaRin [2011-12-05 13:23:04 +0000 UTC]

Because it's 2am, my brain is tired and starting to faulter. I'll stop now, really I will. Bed calls & my cat is curled up on the bed waiting of the light to be turned off. Night

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MagicaRin In reply to Tempestwulf [2011-12-05 13:24:47 +0000 UTC]

xD

Good night.

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GreenTeaSocks [2011-12-05 11:02:22 +0000 UTC]

i have to draw him when he's blue. I HAVE TOO!!

...

thank you for you confirmation.

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Tempestwulf In reply to GreenTeaSocks [2011-12-05 11:05:49 +0000 UTC]

It's all good. I like his blue features style as much as the blonde but it's rare to see him that way.

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GreenTeaSocks In reply to Tempestwulf [2011-12-05 11:14:30 +0000 UTC]

i have this odd thing for change. so if it different then it normally is, I'm all for it. But yeah, i like his blonde.

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