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Zegaroth [2011-11-27 04:58:12 +0000 UTC]

This is my favorite page, good art and all.

Also, I can see you, too, are a pencil artist.

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Template93 In reply to Zegaroth [2011-11-27 05:04:49 +0000 UTC]

yes, but also trying to use computer as well.

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Wanderingwolf999 [2011-11-26 06:51:33 +0000 UTC]

this story was so metal. this page is especially awesome, epic moon between the parting woods and all. very opeth.

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Template93 In reply to Wanderingwolf999 [2011-11-26 06:59:02 +0000 UTC]

thanks, glad that you enjoyed this and hope you will stick around for the continuation.

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TRXAcero [2011-11-26 02:03:10 +0000 UTC]

Tis' pure gold... I really don't know what everypony is talking about a "game" but I still got a hold of the story and it's magnificent. Great work

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Template93 In reply to TRXAcero [2011-11-26 02:06:25 +0000 UTC]

its because it based off of one. here is the link >>[link] <<< got the approval from the creator and is helping me with the continuation.

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TRXAcero In reply to Template93 [2011-11-26 03:59:46 +0000 UTC]

IT WAS BUCKING SCARY!!!!!
And hard as NES game. Again Thanks for the link.

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Template93 In reply to TRXAcero [2011-11-26 04:17:39 +0000 UTC]

no prob.

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TRXAcero In reply to Template93 [2011-11-26 02:46:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the link. I really like horror stuff though I'm not really good at handling 'em.
It souns cool saying is based on NES mechanics. I'll give it a shot.

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JustaSuta [2011-11-25 20:14:03 +0000 UTC]

Great retelling of the game. I like all the different little parts, they make the whole thing flow better. Good work! Will you colour this in the future? I bet it'd look great.

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Template93 In reply to JustaSuta [2011-11-25 20:18:08 +0000 UTC]

yes, i do have plans to color this. when that happens, any errors (grammer or imagery) will be corrected and the comic itself (hopefully) will be about 20% cooler.

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JustaSuta In reply to Template93 [2011-11-25 22:02:11 +0000 UTC]

Awesomeness!!!

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Clonetrooperkev [2011-11-25 11:41:38 +0000 UTC]

Good work

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13ZiggomaticV17 [2011-11-25 11:37:24 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful.

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watcher25 [2011-11-13 22:50:14 +0000 UTC]

*I pause just outside the forest and take in the scene, and sigh with relief*

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MonocledGentlewoman In reply to watcher25 [2011-11-16 00:03:44 +0000 UTC]

Fucking hell, stop the masturbatory self-inside roleplay bullshit, you're ruining the fucking comic you weirdo.

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Lumfi In reply to MonocledGentlewoman [2011-11-26 01:45:13 +0000 UTC]

I love you.

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MonocledGentlewoman In reply to Lumfi [2011-11-26 11:21:51 +0000 UTC]

*brohoof*

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watcher25 In reply to MonocledGentlewoman [2011-11-16 23:37:12 +0000 UTC]

if you really cared about the comic you'd pay attention to it and not the comments...

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Lumfi In reply to watcher25 [2011-11-26 01:44:56 +0000 UTC]

If you really cared about the comic you wouldn't have spammed every page of it with your flat, unwanted self insertion. You would have, oh, I don't know, talked about the comic itself. You should be glad I can't reach through the computer to punch you, hypocrite.

About the comic itself, I like it. It has a really nice flow, and only using a pencil to draw a traditional comic must have been a lot of work.

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watcher25 In reply to Lumfi [2011-12-05 07:47:52 +0000 UTC]

sigh, this is not spam and I though the comments were to do what you wanted with them, in cast you haven't noticed, I only originally put one comment per page.

If I really wanted to spam, I would have, but I don't do that, and I dont call this spam, just friendly banter

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Lumfi In reply to watcher25 [2011-12-05 13:11:13 +0000 UTC]

Spam stands for Stupid Pointless Annoying Message. The comment section isn't meant for you to do whatever you want with it, it's for reviewing the image. Imagine working hard on something and someone waddles into your comment section, entirely ignoring the effort gone into the drawing and just starts spewing random stuff, or some gaudy one person roleplay. It's insulting, and Template seems like a nice enough person not to call you out on it.
If you want to do something like this in the future, base a fiction on whatever, you can, just post it as a submition instead of doing it on someone's comment section.

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watcher25 In reply to Lumfi [2011-12-16 06:25:08 +0000 UTC]

Then I suggest you cut the flames before we both get into trouble, wise guy

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RainsongSkywatcher In reply to Lumfi [2011-11-27 22:58:00 +0000 UTC]

Ok guys REALLY, CALM DOWN.
Love and Tolerate, Remember? DON'T MAKE ME BREAK OUT FLUTTERSAD

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Lumfi In reply to RainsongSkywatcher [2011-11-28 18:37:24 +0000 UTC]

Oh white knights. You never cease to amuse me.

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MonocledGentlewoman In reply to watcher25 [2011-11-17 19:52:42 +0000 UTC]

None of those words made sense.

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watcher25 In reply to MonocledGentlewoman [2011-11-24 02:31:30 +0000 UTC]

when I said "it" I meant the comic: pay attention to the comic and not the comments

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MonocledGentlewoman In reply to watcher25 [2011-11-24 09:57:44 +0000 UTC]

I gathered that. But I didn't understand the implication that by being annoyed by a masturbatory self-insert one-sided RP I was caring less about the comic.

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watcher25 In reply to MonocledGentlewoman [2011-12-05 07:42:43 +0000 UTC]

Read the comic enjoy the comic and ignore the comments

Got it?

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MonocledGentlewoman In reply to watcher25 [2011-12-05 09:39:23 +0000 UTC]

You're adorable.

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watcher25 In reply to MonocledGentlewoman [2011-12-16 06:25:28 +0000 UTC]

whatever

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MonocledGentlewoman In reply to watcher25 [2011-12-16 10:17:06 +0000 UTC]

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RainsongSkywatcher In reply to MonocledGentlewoman [2011-11-25 14:20:22 +0000 UTC]

There IS NO implication that you didnt care less about the comic! Watcher is just saying that if you don't like his little inside-the-comic thing, just IGNORE IT. I personally, liked his little inside-the-comic thing, but really, if you hate it so much, just DO NOT LOOK AT IT.

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MonocledGentlewoman In reply to RainsongSkywatcher [2011-11-25 18:08:41 +0000 UTC]

"if you really cared about the comic you'd pay attention to it and not the comments..."

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LadyFoxling In reply to MonocledGentlewoman [2011-11-25 18:27:57 +0000 UTC]

Actually I really have to agree with you, roleplay posts are annoying to see as comments. It seems really self centered especially if there isn't any commentary on the artwork, the stylization of it, etc.

Roleplaying is for an actual roleplay between people--not for typical deviation comments.

As for the comic, I thought it was pretty good as far as style goes, and though it was smudged in places it was pretty neat and tidy, never mind the few spelling/grammatical errors scattered throughout it. It's a pity it's not colored, but grayscale is a lot easier to work in I must say! So this was a satisfactory comic to me ^^

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MonocledGentlewoman In reply to LadyFoxling [2011-11-25 19:13:22 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it was driving me crazy. *facepalm* I came here to read about Applebloom, not some dude's self insert.

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Template93 In reply to MonocledGentlewoman [2011-11-26 04:30:16 +0000 UTC]

aside from that and my errors in the comic, did you enjoy the read?

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MonocledGentlewoman In reply to Template93 [2011-11-26 11:20:56 +0000 UTC]

The comic, I loved. The one-sided rp comments, not so much XD

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LadyFoxling In reply to MonocledGentlewoman [2011-11-25 20:48:07 +0000 UTC]

I saw his comments and just don't really understand the point. He should have written a fanfic where he's in it instead of commenting on the comic =/ Just my opinion though...I know a lot of the other bronies are saying "just ignore it" but I don't see this on just pony pics, it's everywhere, on youtube comments, on Sonic pictures, every fandom. And it has nothing to do with anything. It's related but serves no help to the artist =/ Though the artist in this case didn't seem to mind, I know it certainly would've bugged me.

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Template93 In reply to LadyFoxling [2011-11-26 04:29:40 +0000 UTC]

i'm pretty laid back about a lot of things. but the way you guys put it, it sounds quite annoying. and at the end he did comment about the comic sooo, idk. as long as you guys enjoyed the comic, then thats what i aimed to accomplish. hope that you will also stick around for the continuation.

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LadyFoxling In reply to Template93 [2011-11-26 04:54:10 +0000 UTC]

I generally would've ignored it (and had for the past fifty five pages in fact), but when I saw other people telling her she was wrong for being annoyed by it I felt it necessary to tell her she wasn't alone in her annoyance!

I saw that he commented on the comic in the next page and was glad, but feel like commenting at all should be reserved for commenting on the artwork on the pages--what he was posting could actually be classified as spam since it doesn't serve any purpose for anyone but him, really.

I am excited that you're doing a continuation especially with an alicorn, it looks like it will be amazing! And I really liked how you drew up that page with the alicorn on it. I'm hoping it is a male alicorn? I just had the feeling it was male in my head when I read it, and read his words with a masculine voice. Of course, gender doesn't matter in the end as long as the plotline is good! I'm looking forward to it.

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Template93 In reply to LadyFoxling [2011-11-26 05:04:11 +0000 UTC]

thanks, and hope not to disappoint on the next comic. and sorry, its female.

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LadyFoxling In reply to Template93 [2011-11-26 05:33:28 +0000 UTC]

Ah, too bad. But I suppose it fits in with the two existing princesses! Looking forward to how that'll work out! ^^

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txninja In reply to RainsongSkywatcher [2011-11-25 16:01:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for being the voice of reason. I also enjoyed Watcher's comments it added a little humor to the story, which is almost always good.

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anzul [2011-11-07 22:23:14 +0000 UTC]

BUCKING! AWESOME!

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