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TF-Wizard β Error Message (Joining the Bandwagon: CLOSED)
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I'm usually not a bandwagon kind of person, but these Error Message things have gotten so popular lately, I figured I'd give it a shot. I took my Adventure Game story as inspiration. WARNING: TG may be involved!EDIT: No More Entries from people who haven't posted please! I'm trying to finish this up so I can get back to work on stories.
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No, you are pretty sure that it was larger a few minutes ago. Your hair seems a little longer now that you think about it.
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Nyu? ... ok, here are some strange things happening. * walks faster* Maybe I can find someone to guide me
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You feel like some help would be very nice, you feel a little lonely and scared. At least you have your dolly! Maybe it's just your imagination, but your limbs seem a little smaller than before, but much smoother and unblemished. Your body also feels more agile than ever, if a bit weaker.
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Nya, this place is very lonely. I see no one (whine)
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You are confused, why did your mommy leave you here? You feel small and vulnerable. You've always been such a good girl!
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*squeezes the doll to her chest as starts to tremble in fear*
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At least you have dolly! She never leaves you! You hear an odd sound coming from the side of the road.
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* trying to be brave * M-mommy?
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You hear a growl from the side of the road. It is definitely not mommy. Mommy is not this dark, large creature approaching.
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Β *screams and cries while running* please don't hurt me!
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You scream and run, until you drop your dolly.
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My dolly! She never lets me. I can't leave her alone and scared! *runs to dolly and grabs it*
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As you run towards the dolly, you see it rise into the sky. It waves at you and then turns toward the creature.
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*surprised* Mary? What's going on?
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Your doll flies towards the beast and punches it, the beast actually falls backwards!
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*looks surprised what happens*
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You cointinue to watch the terrible battle, claw against fist, fur against porcelain. Luckily, it appears Dolly is winning!
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Go, Mary! I trust you! I love you!
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The doll manages to defeat the creature, beating it to the ground, it starts to beat the creature into a bloody pulp.
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*closes eyes not to see blood* Mary is very brave
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The sight is almost horrible as she continues to beat the body of the beast, blood spurting and flesh breaking. Somehow however, you aren't too scared. This is your dolly after all!
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*excited* Mary is the best friend in the world!
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Mary emerges from the beast's carcass, covered in blood but otherwise fine. It raises its arms out for a hug and floats towards you.
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*Hugs Mary* You saved my life. I love you much Mary *Kisses Mary's cheek*
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You are wrapped in a bloody hug with your dolly, and you feel safe and protected.
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you're always there when I need you *smiles*
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Your dolly seems to smile and falls into your hand. You feel an inner voice telling you that you are never alone and everything will be all right...as long as you never forget Mary.
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I will never forget you. Now, we go home, Mary. I will comb you and cleanse you and love you very very much.
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You continue along your way home, happy to have your companion once again.
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You happily skip along the road until you return home.
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I don't remember which of these houses is ours
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You remember it's the pretty little red one!
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oh yeah *giggle* How could I forget? *knocks on the door*
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"Coming!" You hear, and then a nice lady opens the door. It is mommy!
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You give your mommy a great big hug, you feel sage and protected.
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Mommy, I was on the road and can't remember why I was there but an ugly monster attacked us but Mary saved me and Mary now it's dirty. I can clean her? and eat cookies?
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Your mommy hugs you and smiles again. "It's okay, mommy's here, everything's going to be all right."
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I love you much, mommy ^^
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((Mind if we end it here? I can do some wrap up narration if you want...))
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oki doki pocky. Write the end of this story, Mr. narrator ^^
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As the young girl hugs her mommy, she feels safe and protected. She walks into the house, knowing it is hers and not someone elses. Deep in the dark recesses of her mind, a voice cried out, but it was an old voice, a forgotten voice, a voice of absolutely no importance to the young girl. Said voice scared her, but it was defeated, as always, by dolly. She knew that she would stay in this house with mommy and her dolly forever!
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How do I know you aren't already a Naga? Asking me to transform you into one would be rather boring then, wouldn't it?
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That is a fair point. Human to Naga if you please. Oooo or Angel to Naga, just to play a little.
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Are you implying, dear sir, that you are an angel then? A holy guardian of light? A servant of god? A radiant creature from the heavens?
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You may take from that what ever you may wish.
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Well fine then, let's say for the sake of this story that you are an angel. However, you haven't exactly proved yourself worthy of your angelic form. You have betrayed your god, your wonderful, merciful god, and committed a great crime. You knowΒ your crime,Β and you know it is worthyΒ of great punishment.Β Your god has punished you, and you were cast down to earth. You feel corruption filling your form as you touch the earth with your body.
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Okay that was an accident! I didn't mean to betray God! He knows that I would never do that to him. I want my wings back... and now I cant feel my toes or feet.
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