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TF-Wizard β The Demon Queen Rises(NETWar Chapter 2)
Published: 2013-09-17 01:10:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 48201; Favourites: 343; Downloads: 615
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As you can probably see, I decided I'm trying something a bit different with this TGTF. The picture was given to me by the always cool and I immediately thought of a longer story told through chapters. As it seems that most of my watchers prefer captions, and I kind of prefer writing them, I have decided to display these chapters as captions. The first chapter was an earlier story, you can read it here. or use the links below. I have all the storyline chapters planned out now. They will be written at random points, with some of my captions including this Demon Queen which will be essentially random TG's and TF's. I will still be doing random requests and captions in the middle, not all of my work will relate. Regardless, feel free to share your thoughts on such an endeavor below.Previous
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As always, I do not own, nor claim ownership or credit for the picture used in this caption. I can say it's awesome though.
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Sure, it's easy to find the next chapter too, I'll be writing the chapter after that one as soon as I get done with my current monster girl story.
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Thanks, it was a very fun one.
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No prob. I'm sure ya did. Hahaha!
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Yup. It was fun to do a more 'Evil' TF.
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Cool!
I know all about evil characters!
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You'd have to know my character to understand that! Read my TGR story once I make the My Own Hell part and it'll sum it up! Hahaha!
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I honestly was just confused by what you said earlier...and what you're saying now.
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Huh? You mean How I help people and know evil?
(I'm easy to confuse given the right words! XP )
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Don't worry about it..."
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In In a way, yes.
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I aint voting for the demon queen...
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Silly human! You don't vote for queens!
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I know. 
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Uh, um...I'm not sure I understand...
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Β An exciting glimpse of a series I'll be looking forward to. I love the link between file corruption and metaphorical "corruption" here.Β I would also like to point out that I doubt if anyone would mind you incorporating their random request(s) into this storyline if the mood struck you. Two birds with one stone, and all that. Of course, if you've got it all planned out, there's no real need to force extra episodes in, but I just thought I'd point that out.Β
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Actually, many of the storyline chapters are more or less "filler" and I can definitely complete their requests as part of the story. This won't be true all of the time though. For example, right now I'm working on a completely unrelated caption.
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amazing~
Succubi are my second favorite group of fantasy creatures~
Can't wait to see more of this~
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Heh heh! What is your first favorite? I'll probably do a more traditional succubus at some point as well. Glad you liked the cap.
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My first favorite are kitsune~
And I'm looking forward to your succubus cap/story~
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Oh, I see. I have at least one kitsune story. What I need now is a Harpy Story...dont' have one yet, nor do I have an Elf TG!
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^^ Time will show~
btw, the harpy one was very good
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Thanks I thought that one went well.
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Glad to see you liked it.
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Thanks! I'm glad to hear you say that!
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Wow...awesome job on this. I really enjoyed the story and I think the pic fits perfectly with it, especially with those lines of corruption and her green eyes.
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Thanks,Β I saw the pic and the idea came right away.
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Needs more proper computer science references, otherwise people who know more about computers will facepalm.Β And remember, deleting a file does not erase it from the hard drive.Β If only she overwrote the reality alteration program with dd, and did it correctly...
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As a Student inΒ Computer Engineering, I must admit I am ashamed of myself a little for using Hollywood Hacking (Nice to see another troper!)Β in this story. However, spending half a paragraph explaining sniffing packets honestly does not make for a good story, especially considering the space limitations of aΒ caption like this. As for deleting the file, was deleted in the other story, and thus picked up by him. It also was not a straight delete either, as I stated in the story itself, this is an insane, essentially magical program.Β Basically theΒ digitalΒ equivalent of Pheublonium. I found the Hollywood hacking toΒ be a lot easier to use in this story actually, it let me slide through those issues with ease.Β Please feel free to talk to me more about it though!Β
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lol didn't realize you were a cs student.Β XD
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Nicely done. I'm not used to seeing a caption with effort put into it.
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Thanks. I like to put a bit more effort in. Too many cap writers get lazy and try to survive on picture alone. I like to write a story and fit it to a picture.
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Wow. I have no other words other than this:Β Β
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Are you sure you don't have any other words? Tee hee. I assume you mean that in a good way.
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I want to say awesome, but that is not enough. Just about everything is perfect. And if this creates sequels....I may explode. Completely. In a good way.
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Well, I already have the two other plot chapters planned out. The rest will essentially be ordinary captions that relate and use our demon queen as a villain.
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