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Published: 2018-11-30 20:39:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 35776; Favourites: 113; Downloads: 82
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Wren is about to head home when she suddenly hears Lana and Kobi having a private chat in her office. Kobi is clearly torn about this mysterious Katie who vanished at some point. Lana tells him to move on from her like she has but he refuses to accept that and leaves her. Wren decides to take action and see what's going on around here.It's time to get some answers.
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The look Lana gives on panel seven is just perfect show of emotion: confusion, betrayal, loneliness. Really well done TFS.
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Hey, hi, young artist here. I love your stuff but there's some common errors I think could be easily fixed in your artwork. First thing first, I recommend using references for your poses more often, sometimes they can look pretty janky, I also recommend putting a bit more attention into the anatomy of the breasts because sometimes they look like you've just pasted the circle tool on to a girl's chest without any depth, and tits are not perfectly spherical, just saying. But yeah, another thing that isn't really a big deal but could be wierder is how wierder the hair of some characters is, to the point where it looks almost like clay, that could be just stylistic but it's something I've noticed. Anyway, ciao!
- someone who hardly knows what they're talking about
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MY ART IS PERFECT HOW DARE YOU SAY OTHER WISE. BLOCKED, REPORTED AND UNSUBSCRIBED
Nah joking of-course XD
I appreciate the feedback here. As you can see, anatomy and poses aren't my strong point and I do tend to wing it half the time which isn't a good idea at times so I'll definitely look into that more often to avoid jankiness in the future. Regarding the breasts, yeah, again I really should touch up on the anatomy on them again as I tend to reference old drawings I did for them and obviously after so long it gets worse and worse XD
As for the hair, I'd say my only defence for that is a stylistic choice. I've always liked to keep the hair on my characters quite clean and almost clay like to give it my own flare. Plus I hate drawing hair in general XD
Thanks again for the feedback!
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i want to know what the heck is going on. I have to much curiosity for my own good.
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Ooooooooooooooh Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit.
Teleporter malfunction type 3 incident?
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or is it type 4?
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My guess, Lana and Katie are the same person; she was the first Room test subject. He stayed hoping Katie could reemerge from Lana, but it's too painful to stay with what possessed her. Especially that line about asking if Lana is enough; imagine Wanda from Host asking the hiding humans (including Melanie's family) if she was enough.
Hey, I've seen a few clone and possession movies/episodes. Perfectly understandable reaction Kobi.
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Hmm... Interesting story submission by submission.
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so, split personality, then? that or possession by a magical being are my guesses.
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