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Published: 2011-03-23 14:42:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 100; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Snap out of it, JohnSnap out of it, please
Somehow my mood drops rapidly
I don't know why, it's not that I bleed
But that less-opulent word has been a boom for the week
And the traces it left must have been thorns for me
When lovers are destined to obliterate each other
The prank will get famous and pierces our hearts together, leaving us dead
When war of ideas is sure to break out
I'll stand here, tilting to where wind of wishes and norms blow me to.
The say flexibility is a good thing to practice
But why give destruction to me for your own sake?
I know I'm not as adaptable as the ideology
But the treaty between us has been broken
Sorry but I have to remove and dispatch you.
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Comments: 10
MoxieMora [2011-06-07 07:45:10 +0000 UTC]
It conveys the ideas well for one of the first ever written. Very well executed. Keeps the reader interested and with you.
I'd say definitely keep with it
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th2ndchmst In reply to MoxieMora [2011-06-07 08:00:33 +0000 UTC]
sorta one of my first actually. Thanks! I'll keep on with it
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nadhzakira [2011-03-24 12:11:09 +0000 UTC]
keren dit (padahal nggak ngerti haha justru itu yaa)
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th2ndchmst In reply to nadhzakira [2011-04-02 06:20:35 +0000 UTC]
ngok nadh -- haha itu salah satu lirik yang ada di hape gue dong nadh hahaha
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ichas In reply to th2ndchmst [2011-04-02 15:18:50 +0000 UTC]
yeuu protes ajaa gajadi asek ah..(?)
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