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Published: 2019-03-03 21:17:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 797; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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Hello! I'm here from Project Comment with a (hopefully) constructive comment for you.
This is a really eye-catching piece. You've used some very bold colours and lines, and the lighting really makes it 'pop'. I think you've done really well with the anatomy of the roach, and I love the hairs on the leg. The front half of the roach in particular is really well executed - I think the head and antennae look great.
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In terms of things which could be improved with this piece, I think the biggest thing that stands out is the lack of detail in the background. Iβm not sure whether you were deliberately keeping it simple to make the roach stand out, but I think it actually distracts from the roach β I think itβs the βgrainβ of the wood that is bothering me the most. I think some more defined lighting and shading wouldβve helped you out here.
The other thing that catches my eye is the rear end of the roach and the lack of detail there. Compared to the front section, I feel like it lacks a bit of definition, which again I find a little distracting.
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Having said all that, I think youβve got a very impactful piece here, and youβve definitely nailed the roach anatomy. I hope this was helpful for you (or at least interesting!), and please keep creating, as itβs obvious youβve got talent.
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Terrifying to see one so large, but at the same time it's drawn so well! haha
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*Opens DA*
*Looks at cockroach*
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Nope.
Very lifelike, btw!
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