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DragonHeart-Orange [2010-04-09 19:19:58 +0000 UTC]

Pretty good, pretty good, I can't tell the difference between what you drew and what he drew, but... well... yeah.

Now, I'm going to go into minor issues I have, but that isn't what I think of the piece altogether, I'll get to that.

There's not too much wrong with the pose itself, I say this because there are two bits of this picture that are two-dimensional while the rest remain in an artificial third. First, the head, second, the tail.

The dragon's eyes are looking forward (Which is really hard to see by the way) but the positioning of his head makes it seem like he's looking towards the viewer. The whole head just seems like it's in dispute whether it's at a portrait view or a three-fourths view. There's also no definition at the base of the skull either, even dragons have a little bit of definition. As for the tail, the only hint to what the extremity is doing is the shadow underneath it. From a first look, it seems to be curled away from the viewer, on a second look I noticed that it was pointing upwards, towards the dragon itself. Feels a bit awkward I must admit.

But as I said, these were minor gripes, this is a really good OC piece. I love his expression and the pose, despite my gripes, really works. I also love his little belly love thing, I don't know why that's so goddamn adorable, but it is. Finally, the anatomy is spot on, I must admit, the mistakes I saw really surprised me since the anatomy is simply awesome.

So yeah, great job Nixx and Degyn! You both did great.

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