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Published: 2013-08-30 15:08:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 4417; Favourites: 72; Downloads: 6
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Description Well here is my first MLP comic, this comic is based of story called "Twilight's First Date".

It is an Amazing story, and I just had to ask permission to make a comic out of it. Thank you Courageous for letting me do this.
Their is more to come so just keep on troop'n......pretend I didn't say that...

Please do not use this artwork without my permission, I worked hard on it.

A Repost is coming soon, I realize that I do need to make the first page longer.
So just hold on it's coming.

Better version:
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Comments: 33

labba94 [2013-09-01 08:37:28 +0000 UTC]

Hahah! Don't misunderstand me, I'm not making fun of it, but I'm glad you listened to Szafa's advice: the better version is... yes, actually better, and thanks to that I am really looking forward to the next parts But this one... this one wasn't as powerful as the better version to be the first part of a story, but it is a masterpiece of involuntary comicality that I cannot not fave it

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The0ne-u-lost In reply to labba94 [2013-09-01 12:11:14 +0000 UTC]

I knew you weren't making fun of it, it's fine.Β 

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HoodedHorsy [2013-08-31 12:16:11 +0000 UTC]

oh and Princess Celestia IS A ALICORN Y U NO GIVE HER WINGS

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The0ne-u-lost In reply to HoodedHorsy [2013-08-31 13:12:25 +0000 UTC]

Holy crap, I didn't see that, I'm reposting it anyway, but thanks.

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HoodedHorsy [2013-08-31 12:14:49 +0000 UTC]

If TS is dating Flash (ya' know dat one pony from dat 1 movie) immana kill u

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The0ne-u-lost In reply to HoodedHorsy [2013-08-31 13:16:04 +0000 UTC]

No, it's based off of a fanfic, by a good friend of mine, the date is any OC.


By the way I'm sticking to the fanfic's plot, the story's good, so I hope you won't be disappointed.


HOW THE HELL DID I FORGET THE WINGS!?

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Bass-Javelin [2013-08-31 09:38:48 +0000 UTC]

its a little weird when u write 'clop' in it :I, nevermind what i said this is going to be great

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The0ne-u-lost In reply to Bass-Javelin [2013-08-31 13:12:44 +0000 UTC]

I'm going to be reposting it.

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tyendye [2013-08-31 06:01:53 +0000 UTC]

coolio X)

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The0ne-u-lost In reply to tyendye [2013-08-31 06:04:48 +0000 UTC]

I'm going to be reposting this, with a lot more content, as a feel too little was given here.


By the way love your icon, Deadpool and Spiderman.

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tyendye In reply to The0ne-u-lost [2013-08-31 06:10:06 +0000 UTC]

kk X)


And Thank You!

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YesImDeadpool [2013-08-30 22:31:36 +0000 UTC]

This might be good.

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The0ne-u-lost In reply to YesImDeadpool [2013-08-30 22:39:14 +0000 UTC]

well I'm going to be reposting it, I needed to give more then what I gave in this comic.


Expect much more in the reposted comic.



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YesImDeadpool In reply to The0ne-u-lost [2013-08-30 22:47:02 +0000 UTC]

Yay!

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Pony-Berserker [2013-08-30 18:23:12 +0000 UTC]

and about the sound effects - it's absolutely unnecessary addition here. normal walking isn't usually expressed this way. it's rather through certain position of legs. it's not even necessary to add motion lines. And indeed, "Clopclop" isn't the best choice in MLP-fandom context. I'd really suggest editing it out.

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The0ne-u-lost In reply to Pony-Berserker [2013-08-30 18:54:45 +0000 UTC]

I understand, I'll be more alert about sound effects, I'm looking for editors right now, so I don't post crap.


After I posted this I noticed how unnecessary the sound effect was.... as for a repost I think I will.

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Pony-Berserker In reply to The0ne-u-lost [2013-08-30 19:22:39 +0000 UTC]

you can always replace the file in this submission. I usually do it several times on my comics because I notice some mistakes after I post... :iconfacehooplz:

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Pony-Berserker [2013-08-30 18:21:38 +0000 UTC]

May I give you advice about this comic? If it's the series, you're going to draw quite a lot of panels. You should release more panels at one time. Those 3 panels could work as 1 page in a "full physical comic". But if it's an internet series, releasing such small parts might be discouraging and irritating. it's better to release more, but not too often (some like *labba94 can release long pages very often, but you need to be a god-like at speedpainting )

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The0ne-u-lost In reply to Pony-Berserker [2013-08-30 18:56:28 +0000 UTC]

I appreciate you advise, Like I said before I'm looking for editors.


Would you be interested?


If so would you like something in return?

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Pony-Berserker In reply to The0ne-u-lost [2013-08-30 19:21:31 +0000 UTC]

If you say "editor" you mean something like a "pre-reader", right? If it's only about opinion/advice at the page etc., then sure, why not (if I could be of any help). I guess it shouldn't be any burden for me.Β 

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The0ne-u-lost In reply to Pony-Berserker [2013-08-30 19:41:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, it's good to hear you say yes, by the way love you art.

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Pony-Berserker In reply to The0ne-u-lost [2013-08-30 19:44:29 +0000 UTC]

thanks



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SzafaLesiaka [2013-08-30 16:51:09 +0000 UTC]

It's maybe just me, but a comic with this title and having "clop clop clop" in the first strip makes me a bit worried. Or maybe it's just the influence of that wierd part of the fandom that makes me think this way...?

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The0ne-u-lost In reply to SzafaLesiaka [2013-08-30 17:52:55 +0000 UTC]

Ah well, we'll see how it goes.


I'm not that big on sound effects, but I wanted to get a sense that she is walking.

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SzafaLesiaka In reply to The0ne-u-lost [2013-08-30 18:09:21 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I know... Just when you're seen certain things in the fandom, they can't bee unseen (knowyourmeme.com/memes/wingbon… )...

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Courageous-of-Light [2013-08-30 15:54:07 +0000 UTC]

This is very beautiful and well made, my friend


This comic is going to be great, I just know it will be. I look forward to the next page and Twilight having her first date

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The0ne-u-lost In reply to Courageous-of-Light [2013-08-30 16:02:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I hope it will be as good as the story....^^'

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Courageous-of-Light In reply to The0ne-u-lost [2013-08-30 16:05:35 +0000 UTC]

I know it will be, so dont you worry


I understand if college may keep you busy, but hopefully not too busy. Myself and others will definitely want to read more

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Greenver [2013-08-30 15:23:13 +0000 UTC]

I think it's will be an amazing comic just like a story

I really like how you drew that page.

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The0ne-u-lost In reply to Greenver [2013-08-30 15:25:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I'm working on the next panel right now.


I'm in college right now so the submissions might be slow.

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Greenver In reply to The0ne-u-lost [2013-08-30 15:32:49 +0000 UTC]

It's nothing because college is really important thing.

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The0ne-u-lost In reply to Greenver [2013-08-30 15:33:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for understanding.

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Greenver In reply to The0ne-u-lost [2013-08-30 15:34:46 +0000 UTC]

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