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The0ne-u-lost — Twilight's First Date #1
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Published: 2013-08-31 17:32:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 57100; Favourites: 547; Downloads: 187
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Here is the improved comic, I wanted to upload it separately, and delete the other one.This comic is base off of a fanfic by: and no The date is not referencing Equestria Girls movie.
I promise that I will do my best to upload a fast as possible, but I also have college to work on.
Just let me know If you okay with that.
still there is still more to come.
Let me know what you think
Part 2
What the future art will look like
Please do not use this "WITHOUT PERMISSION"
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Comments: 67
i had just finished reading page 6 when i figured i might as well see it from the beginning in order to find out why that incident occured. good work so far btw.
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Twilight - quit dancing on the Panel Borders - you're breaking the fourth wall here!
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Ha ha, it's fun to do that.
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spike run bro when ever this sort of thing is going on u r better off just running 4 it
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Well this has earned you another fav and watch. I can't wait to see where this goes.
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I get the sense that the first impression that she's dating Tia is wrong.
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Thanks, you saved me some time. No offence to the artist's abilities; that's just not a use for them that I prefer to consume.
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It's okay, the writer wrote this before twilight was "officially Shipped" if you can call it that.
It's your choice to read it or not.
I did block the comment you read but not to mislead people.
I feet that the person leaving the comment was rude.
He had an opinion but presented it in a hurtful way.
Still thank you for your comment, it's appreciated.
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Please be more mature and refrain from the insults.
People may not like how the story goes but it's still going to continue.
By the way this story took place before season 3, so at the time this was okay. It may not be now but I'm sticking to how the writer wrote it.
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It was never OK.....
Course since it's not YOUR story, go right ahead, nobody will judge you.
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Okay, still I hope people will give it a shot before completely rejecting it.
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Don't worry I'm sure they'll give it a shoot- I mean shot....
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They will aim well....
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Nope, It's the writers OC.
Courageous Heart.
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well if she's not counting nights with Trixie, I can understand why she's so excited! and again those were not the real Trixie those were with stuffed animals so it's entirely make sense! [you will go to your a geek when you have a giant stuffed animal of your arch nemesis,and take out your sexual frustrations out on!]
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Okay..... ha ha, I don't know how to respond to that.
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twilight is a nerd who is proud of her (insert lollipop chainsaw reference)
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Ha ha, well I don't get the reference but oh well.
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I kind of wonder who is she dating, well, Flash Sentry?
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Ha ha, glad you like the finished part 1.
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Thanks, It's better I hope.
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I don't remember if I commented on the earlier version... but yeah, I saw it. And I'm glad to see how much it has improved! 
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Thanks I owe everything to them.
Thank you for the input.
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That's a very nice artstyle, watching it makes me feel happy.
Also no clopping this time, yay!
Sorry, I couldn't resist...
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I have a pre-reader and editor to help me.
So the new stuff should be better.
Glad you like it.
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BTW, it's a strange think to ask, but would you consider moving that old version to scraps, instead of deleting it? The mistakes you did there were both understandable and incredibly funny, as the double meaning of the sound effects mixed so well with the title and with wingless Celestia at the top of that all... It would be a shame for that version to just go down. ^^
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I think Pony-Berserker is helping you? He's indeed a great source of tips and a good pre-reader.
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Yep, he was kind enough to pre-read for me.
I kind of see him as a mentor.
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