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TheBadFaerie — MLP: FiM - Without Magic Part 11

Published: 2014-06-17 18:53:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 42827; Favourites: 302; Downloads: 233
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Description After a very long break (Much longer than I'd been expecting), I've managed to finish Part 11.

During this time I've been experimenting with various different styles, and techniques. Trying to improve my skills as a comic writer, and trying to find a style of my own.

I think that I've improved since Part 10. I hope that you think so, too. I also hope that you like my Spike vectors, I had to update my original one, and do some more expressions and gestures for him. Which counts for most of the time that this comic took to make.

FYI, in case you haven't read parts 1-10, Twilight Sparkle is supposed to be without her horn and her Cutie Mark. It's part of the story.

Please excuse the poor spelling and grammar. I usually make a couple of errors in these comics.

Part 1: perfectblue97.deviantart.com/a…
Part 2: perfectblue97.deviantart.com/a…
Part 3: perfectblue97.deviantart.com/a…
Part 4: perfectblue97.deviantart.com/a…
Part 5: perfectblue97.deviantart.com/a…
Part 6: perfectblue97.deviantart.com/a…
Part 7: perfectblue97.deviantart.com/a…
Part 8: perfectblue97.deviantart.com/a…
Part 9: perfectblue97.deviantart.com/a…
Part 10: perfectblue97.deviantart.com/a…

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Comments: 118

wielkimistrz1 [2021-02-24 15:20:17 +0000 UTC]

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wielkimistrz1 [2021-02-24 15:20:14 +0000 UTC]

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TheBadFaerie In reply to wielkimistrz1 [2021-02-24 15:27:02 +0000 UTC]

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cory0brennan [2017-09-01 23:45:38 +0000 UTC]

Oh for the love of celestia's golden sparky crap ain't that awesome!

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Setakarn [2016-09-25 11:35:46 +0000 UTC]

DERPY IN PANEL 2

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bazla1236 [2016-05-28 07:36:32 +0000 UTC]

BHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAH !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  

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KitCatKombo [2016-04-03 14:13:16 +0000 UTC]

Poor spike he has to deal with so much sh*T all the time XD

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Kema--Nafe [2016-03-12 05:53:09 +0000 UTC]

that poster hahaha

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matt-flameboymallon In reply to Kema--Nafe [2016-07-08 20:54:46 +0000 UTC]

Was the position of the poster planned (looks like Celestia was staring at Spike)

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Rassiliana [2016-01-28 08:43:28 +0000 UTC]

Big Brother....

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TigroSpottystripes In reply to Rassiliana [2016-11-14 01:34:30 +0000 UTC]

Sister, actually

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xsnowkitx [2015-09-12 15:53:49 +0000 UTC]

xD CELESTIA IS WATCHING YOU

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FloodedHeart [2015-08-26 19:55:48 +0000 UTC]

that last panel tho X'D

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TwinBird [2015-06-14 03:45:16 +0000 UTC]

Who is the second filly?

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TheBadFaerie In reply to TwinBird [2015-06-14 11:10:02 +0000 UTC]

Apple Bloom and Scootaloo (And Fluttershy)

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PundertaleFan [2015-05-30 19:27:25 +0000 UTC]

Poor twilight.

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GoldenTorizo [2015-05-02 23:44:06 +0000 UTC]

That Celestia Poster. It scares me... D:

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WildNoctis In reply to GoldenTorizo [2015-08-20 03:58:03 +0000 UTC]

I know right

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DefendraDoesGamez [2015-04-28 15:20:17 +0000 UTC]

 The Fuck?

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Wireball [2015-03-18 03:55:48 +0000 UTC]

Part 12:

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EpicBronyL In reply to Wireball [2015-11-24 01:39:05 +0000 UTC]

You're very helpful. Thanks.

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Saddust In reply to Wireball [2015-03-31 13:10:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanx (^v^)

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Maldrete [2015-03-15 05:48:45 +0000 UTC]

"It's not even noon yet , and I've already offended Applejack and made 3 fillies cry." [next panel] Well...Two fillies and Fluttershy."

That made me laugh.

Also, you are doing a good job so far with this comic.

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SayEeda19 [2015-02-27 22:05:36 +0000 UTC]

Celestia is watching ppl     YEAA

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Dragonjek [2015-01-11 06:44:04 +0000 UTC]

"Two fillies and Fluttershy"

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ABrightSide [2014-12-22 19:02:13 +0000 UTC]

Can you explain why Pinkie went crazy around Twilight? Or do I have to keep reading?

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rainbowdash10124 In reply to ABrightSide [2015-10-08 07:06:34 +0000 UTC]

keep reading she had a scary moment in her life like a story?
you:...
ok take that as a yes ok ehem filly, friends, chanceling, died, only one to servive, party, didn't return, cutie mark and now crazy ok i'll tell with noncunfusness                !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*****************DEEP BREATH*****************!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

when pinkie was a filly she was playing with her friends then an ugly rainbow of a changeling killed her friends but not her she was the only one to servive she hosted a party for them thinking they would come back but they didn't return how she got her cutie mark then turned crazy
    

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*******************************THE END*****************************!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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ABrightSide In reply to rainbowdash10124 [2015-10-08 08:36:21 +0000 UTC]

I read the rest of the comic already. My comment is more than 6 months old, you know.

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rainbowdash10124 In reply to ABrightSide [2015-10-09 05:57:43 +0000 UTC]

yeah i know alls well that ends well im hungry

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TheBadFaerie In reply to ABrightSide [2014-12-22 19:25:09 +0000 UTC]

Eh, because she's Pinkie ... is there any other answer?

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ABrightSide In reply to TheBadFaerie [2014-12-23 15:23:13 +0000 UTC]

In the show she turned crazy because her friends were ignoring her for a whole day. Now you're stating that all she needs to turn crazy is to look at Twilight without her cutie mark. You accurately portrayed everyone else, why's Pinkie Pie so different?

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TheBadFaerie In reply to ABrightSide [2014-12-23 20:08:00 +0000 UTC]

Pinkie's main characteristic is that she can be really random at times.

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ABrightSide In reply to TheBadFaerie [2014-12-24 10:52:50 +0000 UTC]

But she's not THAT random, little thing can't make her go insane. Don't flanderize her, flanderization is rarely good.

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TheBadFaerie In reply to ABrightSide [2014-12-24 17:21:37 +0000 UTC]

It's a simple movie based joke, I've done 4 or 5 of them for Pinkie. It's a running gag.

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ABrightSide In reply to TheBadFaerie [2014-12-25 12:56:09 +0000 UTC]

Not sure if that excuses it, but OK.

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TheBadFaerie In reply to ABrightSide [2014-12-25 14:08:42 +0000 UTC]

Pinkie was the best character to do the kind of gag that I wanted.

None of the other ponies would have fitted.

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ABrightSide In reply to TheBadFaerie [2014-12-25 19:49:17 +0000 UTC]

Was it really necessary for the episode?

P.S. merry christmas.

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TheBadFaerie In reply to ABrightSide [2014-12-27 14:00:26 +0000 UTC]

Nope, not necessary at all.

In this story arc, none of the Pinkie pages are going to advance the plot at all. They are purely there so that I can draw things a little differently, or to try new things. Like in one Pinkie page I experiment with objects bursting out of a frame, and in another I use a different color pallet. The Pinkie pages can be deleted without really effecting the comic.

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ABrightSide In reply to TheBadFaerie [2014-12-27 14:35:42 +0000 UTC]

OK, I guess I can forgive it then... I've read your story to the latest part and I don't know how to feel. You're giving me a lot to like and a lot to dislike. I can certainly give you kudos for making it so interesting, though.

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MsFalloutShock [2014-11-25 01:46:19 +0000 UTC]

Celestia is watching you
What is this '1984'

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TheBadFaerie In reply to MsFalloutShock [2014-11-25 21:04:22 +0000 UTC]

No, it's 2014.

That's 1984, with a lot of practice.

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MsFalloutShock In reply to TheBadFaerie [2014-11-28 03:57:41 +0000 UTC]

....Wha

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axepony [2014-10-25 18:04:35 +0000 UTC]

"CELESTIA IS WATCHING YOU D:"

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AmaliaPond [2014-10-25 01:48:30 +0000 UTC]

Is there any more after this?

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AmaliaPond In reply to AmaliaPond [2014-10-25 01:49:00 +0000 UTC]

NM, just found it

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Rainbow123451101 [2014-10-21 11:12:17 +0000 UTC]

Celestia your stalking them???

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JNinelives [2014-10-14 17:49:02 +0000 UTC]

"Now if you'll excuse me... I'm going upstairs to sob quietly into my pillow for a while."
Great line.

Spike must really know Twilight well after everything he has been by her side for.
I'm glad he's there.

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WUBTIME123 [2014-10-12 06:01:45 +0000 UTC]

they see she trolling  they hatin but the doin nothing cus she's a mothfuckin princess
a mothafuckin princess yea a mothafuckin princess 

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TheBadFaerie In reply to WUBTIME123 [2014-10-12 10:40:19 +0000 UTC]

Please keep it PG.

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BadWolf1000 [2014-08-31 18:06:16 +0000 UTC]

Creepy poster.

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