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TheBadFaerie — MLP: FiM - Without Magic Part 14

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Description Page 14 of my Web Comic. MLP: FiM - Without Magic.

Believing that she has come to depend on her magic too much, Princess Celestia has challenged Twilight to find a life outside of it. As Usual, Twilight has over-reacted, and it is up to her friends to put her back on course.

Created in Inkscape, edited in Photoshop. All my own vectors this time. Created from scratch, or using the show as a guide.

This page has a different look to the other pages, mostly because the Ponyville Day Spar has a unique color scheme. Well ... unique for my comic ... at least.

Also Rarity's first appearance. I tend ot avoid doing comics with Rarity because her hair mane is so complicated to draw. Lots of curves and shading. It's  pain to draw.

Yes, I know that Rarity and Twilight switch places in the last two frames. I wanted Rarity to be on the left of the page because she was starting the conversation, but the last conversation wouldn't make sense if Twilight's dialog was on the right, and Rarity's was on the left, so I switched them.

Rarity looks a lot more smug than I originally intended. It's her eyes, I think.

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Comments: 122

TheBadFaerie In reply to ??? [2021-09-20 20:02:41 +0000 UTC]

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nadroj345678 [2021-06-20 10:55:33 +0000 UTC]

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LucaShewolf [2018-02-21 02:31:38 +0000 UTC]

Me, arguing with my mom.

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Zadam101 [2016-07-17 14:01:57 +0000 UTC]

Part of me likes this, but another part has found a flaw. Please hear me out. It has been established since season one that Twilight reads things and studies things other than magic. For example in Fall Weather Friends she reads a book about racing just before entering a race and gets 5th place. And didn't she use the scientific method in Feeling Pinkie Keen?

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ZeloTag In reply to Zadam101 [2017-07-22 01:55:13 +0000 UTC]

Granted several season later six thid comment invalid but she did read daring do too.  But that didn't existxtill season ..4? I think 

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bazla1236 [2016-05-28 07:43:42 +0000 UTC]

she did that on perpous

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TheBadFaerie In reply to bazla1236 [2016-06-04 12:21:22 +0000 UTC]

Porpoise.

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DawnfrostFlitter In reply to TheBadFaerie [2019-02-16 10:19:36 +0000 UTC]

Purpose

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NicolasDominique [2016-03-27 10:18:52 +0000 UTC]

Rarity looks great on the last panel xD

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Kema--Nafe [2016-03-12 05:56:32 +0000 UTC]

Rarity's eyes in the last panel is so funny  

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ShadowSwirl [2015-10-14 17:52:30 +0000 UTC]

Rarity is best pony.. just wanted to throw that out there because now it is fact.. ( To my opinion it is fact XD )

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TheBadFaerie In reply to ShadowSwirl [2015-10-16 19:57:04 +0000 UTC]

That's a funny way to spell Luna.

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ShadowSwirl In reply to TheBadFaerie [2015-10-17 13:47:03 +0000 UTC]

Thats also a funny way to spell Rarity 

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TheBadFaerie In reply to ShadowSwirl [2015-10-17 14:12:46 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I thought you said Best Marshmallow.

My bad.

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quentin1326 [2015-09-10 00:50:25 +0000 UTC]

I swear Rarity's expression on this page:
"I've finally got you where I wanted you. In the tub alone."

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Boreasos [2015-08-25 12:16:57 +0000 UTC]

Well, ignoring the fact that reading is a hobby in and of itself.

Why are all her friends (Minus Applejack) so ok with this? Is Celestia so unquestioned that anything she does, no matter how evil, is suddenly ok?

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EpicBronyL In reply to Boreasos [2015-11-24 01:44:56 +0000 UTC]

It's an work assignment, it's temporary. She's not being forced to change her life forever. 

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PundertaleFan [2015-05-30 19:30:53 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Fluffywolf36 [2015-05-08 04:29:38 +0000 UTC]

That's worth faving just for the expression on Rarity's face.

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TheBadFaerie In reply to Fluffywolf36 [2015-05-08 18:53:53 +0000 UTC]

Yay.

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mirtar34 [2015-01-30 13:06:08 +0000 UTC]

what was the last one being weird? 

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Eric-Michael-Kline In reply to mirtar34 [2015-03-13 08:19:28 +0000 UTC]

Writing fanfics for My Little Human.

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ABrightSide [2014-12-22 19:04:16 +0000 UTC]

Heh, the last panel was hilarious.

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Alayna1919 [2014-11-28 19:34:06 +0000 UTC]

lol raritys face at end says this "shut i up i know everything bro"

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alexwarlorn [2014-10-30 07:59:41 +0000 UTC]

Daring Do.

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WUBTIME123 [2014-10-12 06:11:51 +0000 UTC]

instead of offending rarity rarity offended her

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Bendykins [2014-09-19 07:25:37 +0000 UTC]

Loving that smirk , and the last panel twi's flipping

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ColonelBSacquet [2014-09-16 21:25:30 +0000 UTC]

Well, plenty of magic-related hobbies. What's so bad? Magic's her special talent, right?

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TheBadFaerie In reply to ColonelBSacquet [2014-09-19 19:16:25 +0000 UTC]

Yes, but she's forgetting he non-magical ones. Which will come up later on.

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ColonelBSacquet In reply to TheBadFaerie [2014-09-20 00:20:53 +0000 UTC]

"but she's forgetting the non-magical ones."

Good point.

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tyruvelp [2014-08-31 01:05:03 +0000 UTC]

wait....
wait....
     wait....
           wait....

she didnt make rarity cry lol 

 

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NachoTheTrekkie [2014-08-16 15:00:21 +0000 UTC]

This strip in particular works too as a stand alone.

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TheBadFaerie In reply to NachoTheTrekkie [2014-08-16 15:02:43 +0000 UTC]

you're avatar is very appropriate for the Page 16 (Due to be uploaded today).

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NachoTheTrekkie In reply to TheBadFaerie [2014-08-18 21:23:21 +0000 UTC]

Indeed

BTW: good that you changed the links between files. Now they can be navigated. 

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kabhes [2014-08-14 16:30:52 +0000 UTC]

how about that weird one is that not an option? 

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DuskyDreams [2014-08-14 04:47:18 +0000 UTC]

I did not realize it was back

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WolfCookieQueen In reply to DuskyDreams [2015-01-24 03:26:21 +0000 UTC]

Why hello there  

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DuskyDreams In reply to WolfCookieQueen [2015-01-24 03:37:01 +0000 UTC]

old comment stalker much? xD

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WolfCookieQueen In reply to DuskyDreams [2015-01-24 03:45:51 +0000 UTC]

Maaaybee
Maybe not xD

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TimMcJimFromPL [2014-08-08 20:39:05 +0000 UTC]

It's great.

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Sturmlion1 [2014-08-08 04:04:29 +0000 UTC]

No matter how many times I read this Rarity just get cuter in every panel.

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badbloodkiller In reply to Sturmlion1 [2014-09-17 19:05:33 +0000 UTC]

Really? Is it because she's taking a bath?^^

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Sturmlion1 In reply to badbloodkiller [2014-09-18 01:13:50 +0000 UTC]

Maybe.....or the fact she is just so smug and adorable in it.

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badbloodkiller In reply to Sturmlion1 [2014-09-18 20:42:49 +0000 UTC]

Fair enough.

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badbloodkiller In reply to Sturmlion1 [2014-09-18 19:45:26 +0000 UTC]

Fair Enough.

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Sturmlion1 In reply to badbloodkiller [2014-11-23 21:09:37 +0000 UTC]

Yes, its so fair it needs to be said twice. Haha! Adorable Rarity.

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2tail [2014-07-30 05:01:12 +0000 UTC]

Celestia just is not good at teaching. That makes me think of the start of "A bird in the hoof". 
The cakes are being fearful of Celestia, so she trolls them. Did they learn anything? No. At no time did she tell the Cakes to not fear her or that she did not mind the way Pinkie was acting.
They learned nothing because Celestia did not tell them.

When coaching basketball, you find people who are not working their off-hand. you tell them "there are moves that need both hands, and people will go after you on your good hand side". You then tell them to work with their off-hand. You DON"T tie their good hand behind their back and have them drill. It would throw them off in their movement, and build resentment from you not trusting them.
I don't see this as OOC because Celestia has a history of not trusting Twilight when she should. Twilight was able to fight Tirek to a stand still after Tirek had Discords power. She would have been able to stop him if Celestia had trusted Twilight and not ordered Twilight to not face him.

When you walk or run, look at how your hands move. Same for when you reach for something. While you may pick up something with one hand, the other moves some too.
So the person who learned to use their off-hand with their good hand tied up, will have to relearn to use the off-hand after it is not tied up. It will also be harder to learn. You have to unlearn bad habits.
Magic is like a hand (sometimes more then others) for Unicorns. 
Celestia picked a poor way to teach "don't work on just one thing" or "find more things outside your zone that you enjoy".
When Twilight came to Town Celestia trusted Twilight some. She believed that while Twilight did not want to make friends, she would do it. At the time Twilight had a active reason to NOT make Friends (was trying to save world and did not have the time). If Celastia had sent Twilight there a few weeks before and told her to "Make Fiends" maybe she would have.

Celestia could have said: 
"There is much to learn in this world outside of Unicorn magic. Go and ask your friends what they like to do. Try to do it to the best of your abilities without using magic. Maybe you will learn something about your friends and your self."
If this comic takes place after Discord, Celestia could point out about her horn being taking away by Discord. SO, maybe she need to expand on her non-magical skills. Try to live her normal life without casting a spell for a few days. She would still have her magic if something bad happens. How would Celestia feel if a bookcase fell on Twilight killer her because she did not have her magic to push it back or telaport?

She is not malicious, just does not have the right skill to be a good teacher. She may be a good Chessmaster (not great), but her playing her cards to close to her chest grows resentment.
Luna did not feel like anyone loved her, and Sunset felt like she was getting nowhere. She Celestia had been more open with them, maybe things would have come to pass.

I just hope that while Twilight learns something, Celestia learns a even more needed thing; to stop treating anyone like chess pieces.
One thing that feels off is that in this Story Celestia is made off as an very poor Chessmaster. Maybe you can add sometime near the end that makes her plan look better then "drop filly in Everfree and tell them good luck". Something like the missing horn was a big illusion/Geas. If she really needed her magic, she would have cast a spell by habit and overcome a very low level magic block. It would make Celestia's plan less stupid.

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TheBadFaerie In reply to 2tail [2014-08-01 19:20:25 +0000 UTC]

Twilight over reacts to everything. It's part of her character.

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Dakathi666 [2014-07-29 22:54:17 +0000 UTC]

Rarity has a pretty good troll face!

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TheBadFaerie In reply to Dakathi666 [2014-08-01 19:20:34 +0000 UTC]

It wasn't intentional.

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