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Published: 2015-03-03 07:32:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 1153; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 0
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Description Update: Made it more like "old children's book" style this time, and found a place with better lighting.

Shortly after Eloy Paz evolved into an Umbreon (in the far future), his extremely nervous and scared nature around strangers started to manifest itself by his sweating of poison, quickly worsening his already negative reputation. Parts of Seaside Village start to smell bad and he even accidentally gets poison on a couple of other strangers and their things. Even though he is obviously not doing this on purpose, a couple people start spreading the lie that he is doing this on purpose and has intentions to ruin Seaside Village. What they hope to accomplish by this is to tear him down so much that he will have no choice but to leave the place. Most everyone starts believing the lie, and Eloy's life starts to become a living nightmare. It escalates to the point where a mob forms and actually tries to kill him, thinking that he is the root of all evil in their town. Ironically, he is actually the nicest and gentlest member of the Paz family; he wouldn't harm a flea. Sadly, this causes not just him, but the rest of his family to have to move. There is more that happens after this, which will be revealed later.

"A false witness shall not be unpunished, and he that speaketh liesΒ shall perish." - Proverbs 19:9

This is the finalized design for this OC:
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Comments: 74

Daphneysilly In reply to ??? [2015-03-03 07:54:38 +0000 UTC]

ZIna: i.. believe... you

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

TheBoldMouse In reply to Daphneysilly [2015-03-03 07:56:20 +0000 UTC]

Eloy: Thank you... *wipes tear away*

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Daphneysilly In reply to TheBoldMouse [2015-03-03 07:58:45 +0000 UTC]

Zina: *snuggles into him*

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

TheBoldMouse In reply to Daphneysilly [2015-03-03 08:00:26 +0000 UTC]

Eloy: *trembles slightly since Zina is still new to him, but he doesn't sweat any poison.*

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Daphneysilly In reply to TheBoldMouse [2015-03-03 08:02:20 +0000 UTC]

Zina: what wrong?

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

TheBoldMouse In reply to Daphneysilly [2015-03-03 08:05:16 +0000 UTC]

Eloy: Nothing...I just get really nervous around strangers, but you seem really nice. Maybe we can be friends?

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Daphneysilly In reply to TheBoldMouse [2015-03-03 08:06:21 +0000 UTC]

Zina: yes please!Β 

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

TheBoldMouse In reply to Daphneysilly [2015-03-03 08:07:49 +0000 UTC]

Eloy: *stops trembling* ^.^

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Daphneysilly In reply to TheBoldMouse [2015-03-03 08:13:31 +0000 UTC]

Zina: all better?

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

TheBoldMouse In reply to Daphneysilly [2015-03-03 08:14:50 +0000 UTC]

Eloy: Yes ^.^

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Daphneysilly In reply to TheBoldMouse [2015-03-03 08:17:38 +0000 UTC]

Zina: im Zina

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

TheBoldMouse In reply to Daphneysilly [2015-03-03 08:19:40 +0000 UTC]

Eloy: I'm Eloy ^.^

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Daphneysilly In reply to TheBoldMouse [2015-03-03 08:21:14 +0000 UTC]

Zina: why were they calling you monster?

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

TheBoldMouse In reply to Daphneysilly [2015-03-03 08:23:48 +0000 UTC]

Eloy: They're spreading the lie that I'm intentionally hurting people and ruining things by getting my poison on them. So many people believe that, so they call me a monster, which is actually one of the nicer names I've had thrown at me...

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Daphneysilly In reply to TheBoldMouse [2015-03-03 08:24:17 +0000 UTC]

Zina: poison?

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

TheBoldMouse In reply to Daphneysilly [2015-03-03 08:26:49 +0000 UTC]

Eloy: Yeah, Umbreons actually sweat poison when they get agitated, and I get extremely agitated around strangers. I don't know why I'm like this, but I just hope it stops someday...

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Daphneysilly In reply to TheBoldMouse [2015-03-03 08:29:43 +0000 UTC]

Zina: why not try sprawling an antidote?

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

TheBoldMouse In reply to Daphneysilly [2015-03-03 08:31:15 +0000 UTC]

Eloy: Sprawling an antidote? What do you mean by that?

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Daphneysilly In reply to TheBoldMouse [2015-03-03 08:31:40 +0000 UTC]

Zina: spray!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

TheBoldMouse In reply to Daphneysilly [2015-03-03 08:34:49 +0000 UTC]

Eloy: That cures poison, but that won't stop it from coming out of me; it's just something my body does.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Daphneysilly In reply to TheBoldMouse [2015-03-03 08:35:58 +0000 UTC]

Zina: have you ever licked it?

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

TheBoldMouse In reply to Daphneysilly [2015-03-03 08:40:11 +0000 UTC]

Eloy: No.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Daphneysilly In reply to TheBoldMouse [2015-03-04 04:29:35 +0000 UTC]

Zina: ohΒ 

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0


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