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Published: 2015-03-03 07:32:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 1153; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 0
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Update: Made it more like "old children's book" style this time, and found a place with better lighting.Shortly after Eloy Paz evolved into an Umbreon (in the far future), his extremely nervous and scared nature around strangers started to manifest itself by his sweating of poison, quickly worsening his already negative reputation. Parts of Seaside Village start to smell bad and he even accidentally gets poison on a couple of other strangers and their things. Even though he is obviously not doing this on purpose, a couple people start spreading the lie that he is doing this on purpose and has intentions to ruin Seaside Village. What they hope to accomplish by this is to tear him down so much that he will have no choice but to leave the place. Most everyone starts believing the lie, and Eloy's life starts to become a living nightmare. It escalates to the point where a mob forms and actually tries to kill him, thinking that he is the root of all evil in their town. Ironically, he is actually the nicest and gentlest member of the Paz family; he wouldn't harm a flea. Sadly, this causes not just him, but the rest of his family to have to move. There is more that happens after this, which will be revealed later.
"A false witness shall not be unpunished, and he that speaketh liesΒ shall perish." - Proverbs 19:9
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This is my greatest fear of being with friends......
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That they'll face this sort of abuse from others?
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You know, I may have overlooked this picture of yours. Why?...I don't know, but HOW DARE I!
Now I understand where You came up with Eloy? ^^
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omh,dude,stop it now. i always was 100% sure diegos family could not become any more awesome,and then-bam,this cutie here appears.
i have a faible for unusual characters,and this guy here is absolutely special and loveable ,the concept with the poison is genius,i never heard of anything like that before. its so cool how you give the good old "outcast of the town-character"-concept a whole new look,eloy is so relatable and adorable,its impossible not to feel sorry for the poor harmless little ball of fur! its cool how you gave him droppy ears,it fits his shy and insecure personality so well,and that lil cap...aaaaaw<3
he looks so helpless here,its clear to see how he feels guilty for something does not have to,and with that,you bring out the essence of bullying so perfectly-someone feels guilty for beeing himself,while the people whoΒ Β really should be ashamed of themself thing their right.
im really curious how his story and live will go on,and i have to say that im so happy that heΒ΄s a memeber of the paz family,cause if anyone in the world can help him and will stick with him,its diego and estrella <3
awesome character as always,MUCH LOVE <3
rylie *hugs eloy* naaaw,dont listen to thoose sad excuses for neighbours,they dont know anything at all.
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Oh, and if you want to go deeper into his story, we can start an RP here and you'll find out what happens:
Official RP-Starter JournalI've been getting more into role-playing since this January, so I figure I'll start an RP journal and anyone is welcome to join in and RP with me. I'll start off with two options here, and I'll list more when I think of them.
RP 1 (Set during mid-July 2031): You're in Seaside Village on a hot sunny day, and you see an Umbreon (still kind of far away) walking in your direction. He appears nervous and is wearing a blue baseball cap.
RP 2: (Set during this past February): It's the middle of the night, and you see a small tan kitten running quickly, as though trying to get away from something. There is a look of terror in her eyes...
If you want to do both options, start two separate comments. You can also use whatever OC of yours you want. Some gore is allowed, but let's try not to let it go past PG-13. Also, I'm involved in some other RP's too, so I won't always be able to respond right away. Thanks, and if you have any other questions, feel free to ask ^.^
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Thank you ^.^
Eloy: *hugs Rylie* Thanks friend ^.^
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youre most welcome,i always love your chars <3
and OMH I ALWAYS WANTED TO RP WITH YOU *O*
*floats away to the roleplay journal*
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Yes! Let's role-play!
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poor Eloy... but God loves him, always
I like that you have the Scripture to go along with it... I love stories that can be traced back to the Bible
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Still, even if he isn't controlling it, it's still poor form to just leave poison everywhere. Is there some sort of Power Limiter or poison absorber/neutralizer he could wear?
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He has a Soothe Bell that helps his agitation somewhat, but it's not enough; he has it BAD.
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The agitation is the root cause, and isn't capable of being properly treated at this time, but there's still poisonΒ being secreted and that's kind of an issue. Is there some sort of chemical matrix that could capture and denature the toxins that he could wear?
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I'm not sure what a chemical matrix even is...sorry.
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Something along the lines ofΒ SAP .
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This reminds me of an episode called Mushi Shi where a girl accidentally causes everyone in her town to rust simply by talking. Great anime, I recommend it
sounds like a good plot too - almost forgot that umbreon sweat poison XD
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What show is that episode part of?
Thank you ^.^
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whoops, I meant an anime called Mushi Shi, late-night typo, sorry XD It's a beautiful anime - I highly recommend it
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OMG MUSHI SHI FAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I HAVE FOUND ONE OF ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Hugs* 
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I haven't met anyone else into Mushi Shi - that's awesome XD
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I forgot Umbreons sweat poison. I have officially failed as a pokenerd XD
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this kinda reminds me of my umbreon 
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It is pretty ironic; I chose that last name for that family on purpose when I first thought of them. I wanted to show in this pic just how far out of control slander can get, and how badly it can hurt people.
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yep...like my umbreon, he's shiny but he has normal eyes so they wonder if he's a monster or something's wrong with him, gossip and rumors that ruin him until he moves out of town and wanders on his own, helping anyone he can
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Aw, that's sad 
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that's good x3 i mean i guess mine (Kage) does too? fighting hatred with kindness and helping others?
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Nice 
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I wonder. With the way our RP is going, is the girl he ends up with still going to be an absol? If it is, don't worry. I won't be offended or anything. This is YOUR story and what we are doing is only an RP. ^_^
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That could change actually since I didn't foresee how Eloy's relationship with Aviya would go. It's gone deeper than I first anticipated.
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We'll see I guess. It's ironic though. Aviya is at least part dark type, which you had planned a dark type, but she is also fairy type (primarily) which I consider to be the "unofficial" light type.
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I like where Eloy and Aviya's relationship is going, so I am leaning towards making that one official, if that's okay with you.
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That's perfectly fine. ^^
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Aw
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(did you mean Zina?)
Eloy: Thanks
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Zina: mean people : (
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Eloy: I keep trying to convince them that I don't mean to hurt anyone or anything, but everyone would rather believe a lie
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