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Description Chapter 4 - A Misunderstanding

"You and your cousin are coming into town to host a party?" You took a swig of your soda, looking to Napstablook.

"A-ah, well, he's hosting, I'm just there to be a D.J." He looked down embarrassed, as you clapped your hands together.

"That's great, Napstablook! Your taste in music is awesome!" A light blush littered his ghost cheeks, as he blinked a couple times.

"I guess... Do you think you'll be able to go to the party?" You thought about it, when a skeleton came to mind.

"Is it alright if I brought Sans and Papyrus along with me?" You asked.

"Yeah, Mettaton would be glad to see them. How are they anyway?"

"Papyrus is the sweetest guy and Sans is always cracking me up. I don't know, they're both silly." You smiled.

"A-are you blushing?" You tilted your head and touched your cheeks, finding them heated.

"Huh, I guess I am." Napstablook flickered a little as a small smile crossed his face.

"Do you like one of them? If you do, you don't have to tell me, I'm just curious." You played with your fingers for a moment, before sighing.

"I think... I think I may have a crush on Sans..." You embarrassingly admitted.

"Really? I was sure it was Papyrus... Not that Sans is bad! He just... Usually gives the cold shoulder a lot. He doesn't let too many people become close to him." That didn't sound like the Sans you knew... Unless you considered his avoidance of talking about his old home.

"Are you sure? He seems so open around me..." Napstablook looked in thought before his eyes widened a bit.

"H-hey, how about you bring him and Papyrus over to the party? And while you're there, I can play a slow song. You can take that chance to dance and tell him about your feelings." It was your turn to think about it.

"Would you really do that for me, Napstablook?"

"O-of course! You're one of my best friends. It wouldn't be that much trouble." A smile lit your features.

"I'll take you up on your offer, Blook. I just hope I don't end up making a fool of myself..."

"Hey, if he ends up not returning your feelings, I know he'll still want to stay friends. He's cool like that." Suddenly the door to Napstablook's bedroom slammed open and you saw a... Robotic man? He walked over and looked into the video camera. You'd be lying if you said he didn't look handsome, but you could smell his narcissism through the screen.

"Blooky, who are you talking to?" The robots eyes landed on you and he smirked. "Why, hello~ Are you my dear Blooky's lover?"

You and Napstablook gagged.

"N-no way!" Napstablook quickly shook his head.

"We're siblings through music, dude." You shook your head, but smiled. "I assume your the Mettaton I hear all about?"

The robot flicked back his artificial, black hair and smiled.

"You assume correctly, my dear~ It seems your smarts match your looks." You became flustered and waved it off.

"Thanks, but both could use some tuning-"

"Nonsense! You're lovely!"

"Thank you. You're the one who's friends with Sans and Papyrus, right?" His eyes lit up and he grabbed the screen.

"You're ___! Papyrus has been telling me all about you! It's such an honor to meet you!" He winked. "Thank you for taking care of him, by the way. He is a good friend of mine. I owe you a car or something."

You sweatdropped.

"No way. I don't need payment to sit with someone I wish to sit with." He ignored your comment.

"Perhaps you can help my cousin with making the party playlist! You did say you were connected through music, right? You must have impeccable taste!" You blinked and nodded.

"Sure. I could do that, is that alright, Blooky?" You asked. The little ghost nodded.

"Of course, I could use a little more variety."

"Wonderful, I'll let you two get right to it~" Mettaton blew you a kiss, before standing up straight and strutting out of the room. You stifled a laugh, looking to the ghost.

"You're right. He is the complete opposite of you." Your comment caused Napstablook to sigh and nod.

"Yeah, he's definitely something else. Now, let me show you what I have on the playlist so far." He told you to find the playlist on Spotify and started to explain his ideas.

~

"___! THIS IS GREAT!" Papyrus brought you into a tight hug and began to swing you around. "THANK YOU FOR INVITING US, MY FRIEND!"

"Ah! Papyrus! Loosen up! You're hug is bone-crushing!" You joked.

"yeah, screw bear hug. this is a bone hug." Sans joked. Papyrus groaned in irritation and released you.

"HOW DO I SURVIVE EVERYDAY WITH YOU BOTH. AT LEAST ___ DOESNT DO IT AS MUCH WHEN YOUR NOT AROUND, SANS." Papyrus complained, sitting back down in his seat.

"hey, i can't help that i'm santagious." Papyrus shot a look at the snickering Sans. You nudged the big-boned skeleton, smiling lightly.

"That one was pretty bad, Sans." His expression seemed to soften as he sat back.

"hey, i may be the pun king, but that doesn't mean every pun i use is punfect." You snickered, causing his smile to widen, and stood yourself up.

"I'm gonna go get a refill. Do either of you want anything?" You asked, picking up your cup.

"besides some meat on my bones? i am good for now. thanks, ___." Sans gave a friendly wink.

"UGH. I AM ALSO SATISFIED AT THE MOMENT, ___. THANK YOU FOR YOUR OFFER!" You nodded and headed over to the soda fountain. You were about three feet away, when suddenly an arm wrapped around your waist, causing you to drop your empty cup. You were about to shout, but a hand covered your mouth and you were dragged around the corner, out of sight of the other students.

Your attacker turned you around and you were not surprised to find Caden. He gave you a blank look, as he removed his hand. You were about to give out a loud scream, but he suddenly smashed his lips against yours, pinning your wrists above your head. The kiss was rough and you struggled in his grip, but he dug his nails into your skin causing you to wince under his touch.

He pushed you up more against the wall and was about to force his way into your mouth, when you remembered something important. You brought up your knee and smash that spot where the sun don't shine. He yelped, releasing you. As he brought his head up, you socked him in the face, causing him to stumble onto his backside.

"You freak! You're so dead!" You swung around in the direction of your friends.

"Not so fast! What are your friends going to think if they see you like that? I'm not going to be here when you come back." You knew he was right and shot him a glare.

"To the main building first then? You're either getting kicked out or receiving a restraining order!" You hurried off, glancing back to make sure he wasn't following you.

~Sans P.O.V.~

I glanced at the boring professor discuss emotions, before glancing at my phone, again. ___ hasn't responded since the beginning of class and even then, I had no idea where she was. I looked over our previous texts.

*yo, ___. where are you? even my pun was attended.*

*Sorry, Sans. I'm busy in the office. I'll text you later, okay?*

*alright, i will let you off this time, but you owe me a bottle of ketchup.*

She hadn't responded since and I was beginning to have a bad feeling. I looked back at the old geezer of a teacher.

"Next class, we will finish our discussions of happiness and excitement and move onto one of the most questioned over emotions. Love. You're all dismissed." Dang, maybe the guy could read minds. Doesn't matter that much, I guess with me. I packed up, not really having anything out and exited the classroom.

"Hey, bonehead. Over here." I looked over to see a human I didn't recognize. He seemed pretty cocky though. I walked over, making sure my eye glowed a bit.

"what? you have a bone to pick with me?" I asked. He seemed taken back for a moment, before straightening up once more.

"Not me, but my friend, Caden. He wants you to keep your bony hands off his girl." My eye really flared up at that, causing the kid to jump back.

"sorry, is this about ___? last time i check, she was single." I growled slightly, even surprising myself.

"That's what she makes all new monsters think. She hangs around them, gains their trust and gets away with benefits. That slut's favorite part is revealing the truth to the monster she fooled. Looks like she has you wrapped all around her finger." I clenched my fists, not wanting to believe him.

"no... she isn't like that. she's too awkward and oblivious to pull something like that off." I said.

"Don't believe me? Here is your awkward friend an hour ago." He held out his phone to me. I took it and looked at the first picture. My imaginary heart dropped. ___ was making out with some human guy I hadn't noticed before. It was recent, she was wearing the same clothes I saw she had on earlier. I shook my head, scanning through the pictures, but each became worse and worse.

They were all over each other. My left eye bursts into flames, as I crushed the phone in my hands.

"Hey, that-" I used my magic to form it, again and threw it back at the guy.

"i don't want you or your friend interrupting into my or my brothers life after this." I stated, beginning the storm off, causing the lights in the hall to flicker.

"No worries, glad doing business with you."

~Reader P.O.V.~

You stepped out of the building and let out a sigh. The administrators saw the footage of what Caden did to you and were discussing what they would do about him. For now, you would have to wait for their answer. You walked out to your car, pulling out your car keys. Reaching your drivers door, you began to unlock it, when you felt all feeling leave your body for a moment.

"What was..." Before you could examine the area, your feet left the ground and you found yourself floating in midair. You yelped in surprise, noticing a glowing blue heart appear on your chest. You looked around for the source, when a familiar skeleton stepped out from behind a car. You let out a sigh. "Sans, you scared the heck out of me. Can you let me down?"

He didn't respond and you noticed his right eye held no pinprick, his left holding a blue flame of a pupil. It made the hairs on your neck stand, but you reminded yourself that this was Sans. One of your best friends and one of the sweetest guys you know. Or at least, that's what you thought.

Sans merely flicked his hand and you tumbled to the ground, scraping up your arms. You flinched and examined your arms, before looking to Sans.

"Sans, what-" And then he did it, again. You were lifted into the air and then slammed into the ground, causing you to become winded. Sans stepped forward and you scrambled onto your feet, backing up. "What the heck, Sans?!"

"shut it." Taken back, you notice the obvious glare in his eye and can feel his tension. "i don't want you interacting with me or my brother, again. understand? we don't like being played for fools."

"What? What are you talking about?"

"it doesn't matter, you know what you did. just stay away from me and my family." He shoved his hands in his pockets and turned away. You were so confused, as you stepped forward slightly.

"Sans, I would never hurt you or your brother. Those promises I made you, I didn't break one." You could see him visibly tense up.

"they don't matter now, break them all you want. but attempt to do the first one, again, and i'll really show you a bad time." He walked off, not looking back. You felt your already wounded heart shatter, as tears pricked your eyes. What just happened? Why did it happen? Was this because you didn't show up to class?

It didn't matter, Sans hated you. What could you do to change that? You slipped into the car and locked the doors. You stared out the window, before bursting into tears and burying your face in your arms.
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Comments: 87

the-real-iceevee [2016-02-19 11:29:55 +0000 UTC]

i read sans for puns XD my sole purpose is puns
just
PUNS

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Amyrose98005 [2016-02-19 08:04:27 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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TheCorruptedPaladin In reply to Amyrose98005 [2016-02-21 01:04:47 +0000 UTC]

I'm saying March 8th, but the date is loose.

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Amyrose98005 In reply to TheCorruptedPaladin [2016-02-21 02:16:48 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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TheCorruptedPaladin In reply to Amyrose98005 [2016-02-21 02:43:45 +0000 UTC]

It's not that, the whole story has been finished since December. I just have a schedule with the other series I'm making and all the requests I'm writing out. Not all my Watchers are Undertale fans, so I got to keep a variety going.

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Amyrose98005 In reply to TheCorruptedPaladin [2016-02-21 04:35:09 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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TheCorruptedPaladin In reply to Amyrose98005 [2016-02-21 07:03:16 +0000 UTC]

That's sort of what this Sans X Reader is. No one asked for it, but it came in a burst of inspiration and now it's here. I'm just glad people like it.

But I'm glad to create stories people ask for, it helps improve my writing.

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synthetic16 [2016-02-19 00:05:24 +0000 UTC]

Your writing is so perfect, I almost cried too

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TheCorruptedPaladin In reply to synthetic16 [2016-02-19 01:02:14 +0000 UTC]

Β Thank you! But it's not perfect. I'm glad you enjoy though! And don't cry! Here, have some Cinnamon-Butterscotch pie! Β 

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xHellRavenx [2016-02-18 02:32:56 +0000 UTC]

This story is SOOOOO amazing. Plz.plz.plz make more!

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SilverWolf866 [2016-02-17 20:44:13 +0000 UTC]

Aw geez, Caden's a prick! But at the same time, it's heartbreaking that Sans was more willing to believe some punk he barely met instead of actually trying to get to the bottom of this and hear out a friend. I get why he'd be hesitant and resort to assault since that is a big character flaw with Sans, with everything he's gone through, but that's still pretty sad and messed up. Personally if a friend/crush of mine resorted to assaulting me over a "misunderstanding" then I would seriously need some space. I can forgive them, I've never been someone to hold a grudge, but I would definately need time to trust them again. Great chapter though! And I hopeΒ Napstablook will be able to come in and help her out since he actually knows about Caden.

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TheCorruptedPaladin In reply to SilverWolf866 [2016-02-17 23:06:29 +0000 UTC]

Well, not to spoil too much, there will be a void of time where you and Sans distance yourselves. While this is going on, you and him will both have someone trying to help you both fix it.
But I know what you mean, I hold such hard grudges, if Sans did that to me and didn't apologize first, I wouldn't do anything about it. Nada. If he's sorry, he would come apologize and ask what's happened himself. Then I could reconsider. But I get you.
I wasn't always sure about Sans reaction when I wrote this back in December. I think it came out like this, because I thought of it as a relationship between myself and someone I recently forgave (in this case, Sans recently forgave humans), this makes the relationship really fragile. I'd imagine if I saw pictures like that from someone I trusted (and loved), I would be surprised and angry. I wouldn't be violent, but knowing Sans, that is his last resort. In the scene, I think he used it as a warning, saying like,
Β don't hurt my bro and anyone else i care about, pal.
I don't know, my brain thinks about it in a certain way, but I can see why it would be hard to forgive him (trust me, I recently read a Sans X Reader fic, where he treated her nice at first, before beating her up, threatening her, keeping her in a cage, and then treating her nice, again, and I was like, "Uh, no. I would leave that freak if he did that to me." So, I think I get what you mean there).
As for Caden... He'll be getting what he deserves, maybe not as much as he should, but enough to be satisfied.

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SilverWolf866 In reply to TheCorruptedPaladin [2016-02-17 23:38:01 +0000 UTC]

Ok, I gotcha. I can understand the situation that Sans is in and why he'd be so quick to jump to conclusions, it's mostly the part where he goes as far as to physically hurt her (which is actually in character) that I'm like"Uhh yeah, no, I would not be so quick to trust him after that. Not cool." But I'm really glad that you're not going the route of them making up so quickly and that you'll actually be taking time with this conflict between them, it makes the story and characters more realistic and interesting. I've actually come across a lot of Sans x Readers with that problem. He'll have some sort of misunderstanding and then proceed to beat the ever living shit out of the reader and then they hook up and make up after that. In one of the stories I've read he beat her so badly that he broke her ankle and traumatized her, they had this emotional moment at the end of the same chapter where he was sorry and she said she forgives him but it'll take a while to trust him. But then in the next chapter she suddenly trusts him again and they get together as if nothing happened. xP

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TheCorruptedPaladin In reply to SilverWolf866 [2016-02-17 23:48:23 +0000 UTC]

This is only a six chapter story, but yeah, story timeline wise, they don't make up until a week later or so later and they don't get together until way after that.
(Though, I am thinking of doing a sequel to this, so it might be longer until they get together.)

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SilverWolf866 In reply to TheCorruptedPaladin [2016-02-17 23:51:55 +0000 UTC]

But at least you're still showing and mentioning the time and what actually happens between the two after the conflict (instead of just dropping it and never mentioning the healing process) which is really good! ^^

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TheCorruptedPaladin In reply to SilverWolf866 [2016-02-17 23:58:28 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I hope that helps. I understand how frustrating it cane be to have a story with rushed emotions (I love the skeleton, but if he denies me freedom and food, I'm not running back into his arms anytime soon).

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SilverWolf866 In reply to TheCorruptedPaladin [2016-02-18 00:32:43 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, to be honest I'm actually really excited to see what you do with this! Especially since it's one of the few I've seen that takes place after Undertale and on the surface, so far it's the most realistic and engaging one I've read.

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TheCorruptedPaladin In reply to SilverWolf866 [2016-02-18 01:14:15 +0000 UTC]

Mines okay, you should see the ones on Archive of Our Own. I was inspired by some of their post stories to make this one (the post stories are the best! There's so many oppurtunites that can span from them!) and I'd love to make some suggestions if you're looking for more.

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SilverWolf866 In reply to TheCorruptedPaladin [2016-02-18 02:12:55 +0000 UTC]

Sure! That'd be great. ^^

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TheCorruptedPaladin In reply to SilverWolf866 [2016-02-18 03:31:30 +0000 UTC]

I'll put five of them that I enjoyed for the most part.


A Tale of Dog and Monster

-A post story, which is mostly full of fluff and angst. I do have to warn, there is self harm used in one chapter, but it's brief.

This is one of two stories that inspired me to write my own.

archiveofourown.org/works/5475…


The Process of Mending

-Yeah, it's a one shot, but so much heart is put into it, it feels like a complete story. It's also post game.

This is the story that literally got me down and writing my own.

archiveofourown.org/works/5011…


The Party Incident and Other Embarrassing Anecdotes

-Are you cool with second-hand embarrassment? If so, this series is awesome! Like its funny, cute, and frustrating all at the same time! It's one of my current favorites! Another post game.

Warning, it's not finished, yet, so this may add to the pain of a non-finished series.

archiveofourown.org/works/5798…


Story That Might Happen if You Date Sans

-I have a love/hate relationship with this one. Sometimes it's really upbeat, full of fluff and suspense! But then, sometimes it can get confusing and even boring. It might be worth a read, but don't get your hopes up (it really is a confusing roller coaster). Post game, but yeah... It still feels like you're in the game at times.

archiveofourown.org/works/5111…


You Learn to Live With It...

-This ones a shot in the dark. It's not bad, but the whole story starts out quirky and fun, a really good post story, but then it slaps you in the face with a lot of angst and confusing, dark turn. It's not finished, so I can't judge it yet, but the beginning is really good in my opinion.

archiveofourown.org/works/5392…


And that's only five of the hundreds of Sans X Reader stories that can be found on Archive of Our Own. So, if they don't peak your interest, there's lots more you can look through there!

Hope me that can help until the next chapter.

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SilverWolf866 In reply to TheCorruptedPaladin [2016-02-18 03:37:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I'll be sure to check them out!

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rockygaga [2016-02-17 17:26:31 +0000 UTC]

I love your SansXreader do you know when the next one is coming out?Β 



Btw I got da feelsΒ  Β 

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TheCorruptedPaladin In reply to rockygaga [2016-02-17 22:40:25 +0000 UTC]

I'm saying March 8, but the date choice is loose.

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rockygaga In reply to TheCorruptedPaladin [2016-02-17 23:15:49 +0000 UTC]

Thx I'm dead excited!

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TheCorruptedPaladin In reply to rockygaga [2016-02-17 23:44:18 +0000 UTC]

Β you mean you're jumping out of your skin about the next chapter?
Β  Β SANS!Β 
Β what bro?
Β STOP WITH YOUR TEDIOUS PUNS! AND I THOUGHT YOU WERE MAD AT THE READER!
Β eh, too much work. maybe i'll save my energy for the next chapter.
Β *sigh* FINE, BROTHER. BUT YOU BETTER NOT SLEEP THROUGH THE NEXT CHAPTER!

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rockygaga In reply to TheCorruptedPaladin [2016-02-27 00:25:18 +0000 UTC]

XD. Β 

Sans forgive meh plz!!

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Danish-Fay In reply to ??? [2016-02-17 14:56:27 +0000 UTC]

How I absolutely LOATHE cliffhangers!!! Especially in such a wonderful story as this!! Please, please, PLEEEEAAAAAAAASSSSEEEE hurry with part 5?!?!?

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TheCorruptedPaladin In reply to Danish-Fay [2016-02-17 22:39:57 +0000 UTC]

Sadly, I think the next update might be a while away. I don't think I'm planning on uploading it until March 8.

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ToXicWildcat In reply to ??? [2016-02-17 13:44:40 +0000 UTC]

Words cannot describe how I feel right now, I am so sad this happen, but really satisfied with how amazing this chapter is! Great job once again!

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sanniebannie4 In reply to ??? [2016-02-17 07:57:18 +0000 UTC]

Β  Β  Β  M-My poor heart... Β  Β 

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chasitythewolf [2016-02-17 05:01:23 +0000 UTC]

*struts away from Sans*

*gets behind corner*

NOOO WHY SANS I DIDN'T DO SHIT TO YOOOU!!!!! ;-; ;-; ;-; ;-; Β  Β 

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Pan-chan66 [2016-02-17 04:15:00 +0000 UTC]

Hoooooo you clever mother-. Entirely well written. I wanna go punch a dude in the face...and maybe a steel toed shoe action in there too. Holy...Okay yeah. This was great. Can't wait for the next chapter!

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TheCorruptedPaladin In reply to Pan-chan66 [2016-02-17 04:44:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I am glad I could fuel your anger!

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catsrule090 In reply to ??? [2016-02-17 04:13:57 +0000 UTC]

No!!!! *starts crying tears of sadness* why you do this?!? Nice to see an update but... Where's a Temmie when you need one...

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TheCorruptedPaladin In reply to catsrule090 [2016-02-17 04:43:39 +0000 UTC]

Here, I have a spare!Β  Β 

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catsrule090 In reply to TheCorruptedPaladin [2016-02-17 20:08:14 +0000 UTC]

*starts hugging Temmie* I feel a bit better now, can't wait for the next update!

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LaceyRaven In reply to ??? [2016-02-17 04:05:40 +0000 UTC]

I need more. 8|Β 
this is good stuff πŸ‘ŒπŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ
I just started today, wow!

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rubytwili18 In reply to ??? [2016-02-17 03:15:49 +0000 UTC]

OOOOH MYYYYY GAAAAAWD!! So, I just found this today and I was soooo happy through the first three and it was all so sweet and fluffy and then I saw this one up and it's like a truck just hit me with all the feels ow ;_;

Thank you for this wonderful story (even this last section of sadness), I really look forward to the next one and finding out how/if the mess gets sorted!

(...excuse me as I go find some fluff to mend my heart now)

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TheCorruptedPaladin In reply to rubytwili18 [2016-02-17 03:27:55 +0000 UTC]

(If it hurts that means it's working! ... Sorry.)

I'm glad you like it so far! Don't worry, it can only get better from here on out! I promise you plenty of fluff in the next chapter!

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