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Yaaay Touhou \o/ Love the colors you used and the way you do hair is really nice too~
Hmm now for my critique!
- Her neck is waaay too long. XD I think it should only be half as long.
- Her pose is pretty static.... why not try out some more dynamic poses? It's tough but the end result would definitely be rewarding. I like watching videos and screencapping people in motion, it's really helpful for drawing bodies in movement.
- Her face seems too hidden.... sometimes artists have the eyes transparent so you can see them through the hair. I do it too and it makes a huge difference~ Does that make sense? Haha
It looks lovely ;v; I hope my advice helps even just a little~
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