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TheDescendantofKehAn — Zenith, Chapter 12

Published: 2013-10-18 19:33:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 1177; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 12
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Description Once upon a time, Spike went for a walk.

While on his walk, he was judged by an ancient alicorn, lodged with griffons, parlayed with air pirates, charmed a maiden of a mystical race, and dealt with the scourges of hate, fear, and racism while deliberately drawing the armies of myriad nations to the brink of global war.

Once upon a time, Spike went for a walk, and did all of this so that he could keep a promise to the one that meant the most to him... Twilight Sparkle.


Click here to find the other chapters of Zenith!

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Comments: 12

4ScarfAce4 [2013-12-05 16:33:53 +0000 UTC]

Just when I thought Spike had turned a corner ...

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TheDescendantofKehAn In reply to 4ScarfAce4 [2013-12-05 21:28:31 +0000 UTC]

Yeah... naw, that would have been too easy.

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Whisperer-of-Winds [2013-11-01 14:13:21 +0000 UTC]

come one, man! I need more to read *cute puppy eyes*

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TheDescendantofKehAn In reply to Whisperer-of-Winds [2013-11-01 19:58:44 +0000 UTC]

I hope to have it done soon. I had a bad experience with my last two stories, and I want to make sure that I do it right this time.

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Whisperer-of-Winds In reply to TheDescendantofKehAn [2013-11-01 20:13:46 +0000 UTC]

alright... don't keep me waiting so long though and, if any one bothers you *dark look in the eyes* just point me in their direction.

^_^

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dragonknave [2013-10-31 15:35:48 +0000 UTC]

when's the next chapter coming out? it's been almost a month...

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TheDescendantofKehAn In reply to dragonknave [2013-11-01 19:59:38 +0000 UTC]

I hope to have it out soon. I had a bad experience with my last two stories, and I want to make sure that I get the characterization right, which is what people were worried about with the last stories.

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Whisperer-of-Winds [2013-10-19 20:59:24 +0000 UTC]

this haas caught me. I must admit that I made the connection with Celestia but so far I cannot understand why she denied him her aid. Man, this work of your s getting more and more complicated.

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TheDescendantofKehAn In reply to Whisperer-of-Winds [2013-10-22 21:57:44 +0000 UTC]

I'd hate to make it easy on you guys!

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Whisperer-of-Winds In reply to TheDescendantofKehAn [2013-10-23 04:44:36 +0000 UTC]

and a right choice you made ;D

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Ryua [2013-10-18 23:30:27 +0000 UTC]

Aaaaaaaaaaa, how can you write something so touching and hopeful as Spike's scene with that foal and broke parents, and then do THAT? Aaagahsdghasodifnsdlksdjf but seriously, this was awesome.

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TheDescendantofKehAn In reply to Ryua [2013-10-19 12:43:15 +0000 UTC]

Ain't I a stinker?

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