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Published: 2012-01-16 19:10:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 5304; Favourites: 131; Downloads: 40
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'Tis a commish forShe asked for her Warriors OC Hoperose with Runningwind from Warriors~
(According to WW this is what he looks like so, stuff you people xD)
Tried something new with the bg, blurring it so see if I could get like some perspective or something...
I like it better now xD
Oh and sorry for Runningwind's spazzy fringe... o3o /needtostopdrawingthem
Now then, they're most likely on Sunningrocks. But. Maybe they aren't. How should I know. o3o
Hope yous like it~
Hoperose belongs to ~SparkyStarHedgehog92
Runningwind belongs to Erin Hunter
Drawing belongs to me~
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Comments: 32
this is a great picture! I think my only problem is probably that the rocks look a little smooth, and that's not how they would look in the wild. The trees are great, I certainly can't draw them that way. I love the male's expression of love looking down on the female. Another thing I like is the way the fur looks. It looks quite realistic! It does look a bit weird that Runningwind has no mouth, but it still looks ok. Overall, this picture is absolutely squeezable!! P.S. I love your artwork, I wish I could draw like that.
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Hello! This is my first critique using this feature so I apologize right away if I sound stupid or crude. I also tend to be a little blunt and try to be honest when it comes critiquing (as in I don't only give compliments) Ignore the vision rating as I honestly am not sure what it means, if anyone knows please tell me. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a⦠" width="19" height="19" alt="
I honestly do not like Warriors very much and few of the artwork I've seen here stands out to me. This one is an exception however and caught my attention almost right away.
Originality- Sunset/sunrise scenes are used often, particularly with romance, but I've yet to see one like this. Normally, most artists would make the sun visible or put at the most small foliage such as bushes or grass. I like that you used a forest scene for this and added stones as well.
Technique- This is where your artwork stands out. I adore how you showed the fur strokes with the two cats and the trees look lovely. I particularly love how you showed the emotion on the male cat's face. There seem to be something off with the paws and legs, though I'm not that familiar with cat anatomy to be sure. One thing I really like is that you used colour for lighting and not only white. The lighting seems to be a bit off on the trees however, I can't help but feel the right ones may need a little more light, it might just be me however.
Impact- Overall lovely piece, granted there may be some flaws but nothing is perfect. You captured the emotion wonderfully however. I hope this helps somewhat, I apologize if it doesn't. You've much potential and I wish you the best of luck with your artwork. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h⦠" width="15" height="13" alt="
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u should of added Runingwind's mouth cause in here he looks like hes a rok or something. the shading is verrrrrrry well done. i kinda think that Runningwind himself needs to be a bit bigger even if he is behind Hoperose and his neck looks a bit weird. the rocks in the backround look ok but in the wild they wouldn't be that smooth but thats my only problem and the rock that they are on, the shading looks kinda weird and spotty in places and doesn't look smooth. the blur you did with the backround did add a lot of perspective but i dont think that you had to add the extra leaves or you should of added less of them but overall very good picture!
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YouΒ΄re welcome
You must know I love your work and i wish I can do this to
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I swear this is my favourite picture from you. I love it so much I have no way of expressing it.
I'm being serious. It's like my fandom for GLaDOS and Danny, I can't go up to them and hug them because they aren't real, thus never turly expressing that I love them IN A FAN WAY 
Aannd I just love the blurred BG<3 It makes it look like it has focus, like a photograph. c:
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Aww thanks Owleyy <33
HERE YOU MAY HUG THE PICTURE NOW *gives hug-friendly picture*
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No problem<33
THANK YOUUUU. *glomps* Do you stock GLaDOS and Danny in that format too? *shot*
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Dawwww so cute! 8'D
Nice details on the tom-cat
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Aw, this is amazing! I love the poses so much! I just love how his paw is over hers. So cute!! ^^
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Omigosh! It's So cute!! I love it I can't stop looking at it! I LOVE it! Thank you So much Doggeh! :3
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Thanks and glad ya love like it ^^
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This is amazing! I love everything about it! The eyes, the poses, the colors, the background... Its just amazing
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I love how you drew their poses, that's so nice
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