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Published: 2012-09-07 06:53:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 1694; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 25
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EDIT: Made some quick changes just to make the story look betterI return...A sad.....spiritual story...some of my religious beliefs lightly mixed in....BE NICE ABOUT THAT EVERYBODY. Show us why Bronies are the best fandom on the internet Cover image done by the wonderful, (and I'm guessing lovely) with her permission and I hope the writing is 10 times as good as what you're reading enjoy
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No idea what twist you want
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oh, I had it in mind to have his eyes tilted upward to a starry sky, perhaps... anyway, you can judge it when you finish your story. again, I do not promise excellence; only the best i can do.
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Yeah send me a note when you finish
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I will. I will also look forward to your story. have fun
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A few grammatical and spelling errors, but other than that, I liked it 
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I did write it late at night I thought I fixed it
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Nothing to major, just a few mistakes here and there.
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Is this tagged as mature? I can't seem to view it on mobile... Is it on fimfiction?
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No it's a PDF it's not on Fimfiction sorry
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Glad you found it on Fimfiction i'm off to check it out
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? But I didn't find it on fimfiction.
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Oh sorry I misread which title it was this is a PDF that might be why
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I see. I'll try and read on my computer tomorrow.
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Good, could use some work on the words as well as some more detail, but other then that, I like it.
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I like it a whole lot! Great personalities and imagery. Stories about the Apples' parents always stir my emotions and then the potential for a Fluttermac makes it better (added anticipation & all). 2 thumbs up!
Also, speaking of hymns, "I'll Fly Away" comes to mind. So sad.
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Circle isn't really a hymn and thanks for the comments 2 requests down one to go
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Dang it, of the 4 hymns on the face of this planet that can make me cry you go and use "Will the Circle Be Unbroken".
Awesome fic dude you used amazing imagrey to put me into the story. Not gonna lie, would've liked to have the the Fluttershy/Big Macintosh relationship take off from there, but that's a personal preferance not a complaint.
Amazing job
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MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Yes........your tears are like fuel to me. As for the imagery thing thank you. As to the Fluttermac....I wanted to be vague...if you demand a sequel maybe I could make one but I'd need at least three people
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I demand nothing but don't tempt me. I've converted a decent number of bronies in my school to FlutterMac and getting three wouldn't be that hard
Keep up the awesome writing. Respect to the Writers
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Thanks again....please share...I'd love to build a fanbase and as to demands I'd love a commission or a request
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OK fine then, challenge accepted. I am requesting that you continue the FlutterMac angle of the story. :3
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Alrighty.....2 more requests and I'll know I have enough demand/interest. Or a suggested cover image.
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I'll request that too!
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Leave a comment let me know how you feel about the story and I'll count the request
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That was great, I enjoyed the subtle religious undertones and the fact that you put a history behind Applejack's hat and Big Mac's collar. So sweet and sad...
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Thought i am not a fan of spirits visiting people, I foud this rather good.
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Thank you...I'm aware not everyone's a fan of ghost stories but it's an interesting aspect to consider
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I try, especially when it comes to the sad stuff...I'm good at writing sad stuff
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^^ I can see that. Great job!
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Hmmm...Just needs a little tweaking here and there. I'm not a big time critic so you may have to ask somebody else.
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