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EDIT: Made some quick changes just to make the story look betterI return...A sad.....spiritual story...some of my religious beliefs lightly mixed in....BE NICE ABOUT THAT EVERYBODY. Show us why Bronies are the best fandom on the internet Cover image done by the wonderful, (and I'm guessing lovely) with her permission and I hope the writing is 10 times as good as what you're reading enjoy
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Comments: 120
Darthsylar12 In reply to ??? [2012-09-08 02:37:51 +0000 UTC]
This was amazing man. I loved that Big Mac Sr asked that Applebloom take his hammer, that's just a brilliant touch. Big Mac's parents sound like really cool ponies and even if they end up being dead in the show I hope they we at least see a flashback episode for them. You really capture Mac's character well, the boy made a man and forced to hide all the pain sadness behind strength and responsibility, its something we all can relate too. Also FlutterMac I really loved this. You are a wonderful writer and did a great job. See you in Brighter Days, my friend!
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TheFireWolfAuthor In reply to Darthsylar12 [2012-09-08 02:42:49 +0000 UTC]
One Brighter Days...that's a good book title if you don't use it I will. Two...Thank you. 3...Inspiration trivia on the show is that Lauren Faust wanted Applejack's parents dead but Hasbro didn't want it specifically stated. For all intents and purposes they are dead. 4. Thank you for the compliments. Can't wait to see more of your stuff
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OriginalVieral In reply to ??? [2012-09-07 18:01:51 +0000 UTC]
sad, but nice too. you got the barbed-wire well by the way. nasty stuff. *subconsciuosly rubbed his leg just there*
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TheFireWolfAuthor In reply to OriginalVieral [2012-09-07 18:04:06 +0000 UTC]
I've been around it a lot my grandparents lived on a farm and that was the fencing of choice. I've also had to cut the stuff so it had to be replaced...think it's good enough for Equestria Daily?
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xXBlodedXxx In reply to ??? [2012-09-07 14:56:13 +0000 UTC]
sad stroy but a good one + i know how it feels when you lose some one you love
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TheFireWolfAuthor In reply to xXBlodedXxx [2012-09-07 14:57:08 +0000 UTC]
I do too...lost my grandma the day after my thirteenth
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TheFireWolfAuthor In reply to Ganondox [2012-09-07 14:15:44 +0000 UTC]
thank you wasn't completely good either is what you're saying I'm guessing
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Ganondox In reply to TheFireWolfAuthor [2012-09-07 14:31:58 +0000 UTC]
I didn't finish it, I like the beginning, that was good, but ghosts and FlutterMac isn't really my thing, so I can't judge the rest.
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TheFireWolfAuthor In reply to Ganondox [2012-09-07 14:35:33 +0000 UTC]
Not quite Fluttermac but yeah the ghosts could throw people off
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Ganondox In reply to TheFireWolfAuthor [2012-09-07 16:30:32 +0000 UTC]
It looked FlutterMacy enough for people to consider it FlutterMac.
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TheFireWolfAuthor In reply to Ganondox [2012-09-07 17:42:09 +0000 UTC]
No one else has called it that
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Ganondox In reply to TheFireWolfAuthor [2012-09-08 06:09:40 +0000 UTC]
Actually someone did.
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TheFireWolfAuthor In reply to Ganondox [2012-09-08 06:24:52 +0000 UTC]
Ahh yes saw that at the point of the previous comment no one had I wanted to leave it vague
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Ixtaek In reply to ??? [2012-09-07 07:18:14 +0000 UTC]
Aw, how sad. One doesn't always think of how Big Mac feels about the loss of his parents... I guess we wrongly assume his stoic exterior means he doesn't let him bother him. Very nice story!
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