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A renovated version of this. rabbitmaskedman.deviantart.com…This is Linota, she's a main character in a larger project I'm slowly working on... She's a mage, but despite her powerful abilities she's very mellow.
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SilverMelee [2014-07-31 01:09:35 +0000 UTC]
I really love how you drew the faces (especially that "frustrated" one, heh), though I do agree shnurui's comment about the ears on the sad pic and how they should be down like they are in the angry pic. I also think you may have overdone it on the tears; I believe fewer streams of water could really get the job done without making things look too cartoonish.
As for the rest of the drawing, I do think she's got a neat outfit and I really like the hair. It's got a fair deal of detail, but not enough to be overwhelming. I can't but feel like there's something up with the legs on the frontal pose, however... I don't have much experience with digitigrade legs, but for some reason they look crooked; like they're leaning back but the upper half of the body is straight. Gah, I'm not sure I'm being clear... I could try and show you a red-line showing how I think they should go, if you'd like.
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TheGutterBunny In reply to SilverMelee [2014-07-31 01:58:39 +0000 UTC]
I know what you're talking about, yes. She looks like she ought to be falling on her butt.
I need more practice with digitigrade legs.
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Peachfuzz [2014-07-25 05:16:55 +0000 UTC]
Cool design! A definite improvement over the older version. I like the new color scheme of her outfit, as well as her staff. The folds of her clothing are really well drawn, too. Great job on the whole thing.
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shnurui [2014-07-25 02:00:45 +0000 UTC]
sadly sad ears don't fit sad rabbit, but hey, it's your rabbit.
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TheGutterBunny In reply to shnurui [2014-07-25 03:09:07 +0000 UTC]
I'm sorry, could you explain? I'm afraid I don't understand what you mean...
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shnurui In reply to TheGutterBunny [2014-07-25 03:35:22 +0000 UTC]
I mean it is your character, if you wish to express mixed emotions as one, that is up to you.
www.ehow.com/about_6591841_do-…
www.bunnyhugga.com/a-to-z/rabb…
www.allearssac.org/reading.htm…
Generally a sad bunny is the same as a mistrustful bunny, ears are down or at least back, depending on their ear structure.
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TheGutterBunny In reply to shnurui [2014-07-25 04:10:38 +0000 UTC]
Oh
She's not sad, she's mellow. She's really a super chill optimist.
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shnurui In reply to TheGutterBunny [2014-07-25 04:18:04 +0000 UTC]
Was referring to the "sad" face in the corner.
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TheGutterBunny In reply to shnurui [2014-07-25 04:20:37 +0000 UTC]
OHHHhhhhhhhh.... yeah, that makes sense lol.
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