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Published: 2012-08-21 04:26:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 344; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 7
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Garou's first nightmare. The lights here were a fun experiment and also my first texture use. Can't really say anything else about it, so enjoy the brief plot tease.Texture is from right here: [link]
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SO UM SOMETHING I FEEL I SHOULD POINT OUT. When reading the text, this is how I ended up reading it because of the way the words were placed: "Well, well, well... AWAKE... Look who's finally..."
And then I was like wait a minute what.
Move the word "AWAKE" down and push "Look who's finally" upwards so that it's higher than "awake". It'll read better.
I mean unless whoever's talking has some weird way of doing so, that would make more sense in terms of word fluidity and order.
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Wait, holy crap, why did I do that. I mean, it made sense when I was making it, because I was the one who knew what was going on, but
Thanks for pointing that out! As soon as I get back to my computer at the dorms, I'll fix it!
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It's okay, Ray, it's just a nightmare. Or is it...?
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