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Theif-Of-Heart β€” Homestuck X Reader :Intro:
Published: 2012-08-28 06:32:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 2966; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 6
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Description Lets start this off with your name. You are (first and last name) and you are 16 and it is now summer vacation. You are going to the beach with your friends John, Rose, Dave, and Jade. They had invited you to stay with them for a month, turns out they have some friends out there, that you'd never heard of, and wanted you to come with. "(Name), hurry up!" Jade called impaciently. The girl was zooming around downstairs, excited to get on the road.
You heard Dave sigh, "No, (Name), please take your time. As long as it takes to avoid this car drive over there"
Rose joined the conversation?thing? you three were having, "Actually, if we wish to arrive on time then we should leave soon"
Just as she finished her sentance you zipped up your bag and slung it over your shoulder, "Done!" you smiled and slid down your staircase rail.
"Finally! Lets go!!" Jade began to push everyone out the door and you hopped into the car.
The ride wasn't too bad. You sat next to Dave and he was pretty mellow.. for a while. Jade was in the front with Rose, who was driving,Β Β and played music on the radio. Dave insisted she play his beats he makes with his bro.
You fall asleep the rest of the time and finally wake up when your 5 minuts away from the place you'll be staying. You yawn and slouch over, "Are we there yet?" you mumble. Rose cluches the steering wheel and growls, "No we-"
"Yes, yes, yes, yes, were here!" Jade squeels loudly making you and Dave jump. The five of you pile out of the car and your all greeted by twelve trolls(?) You blink and tilt your head, "There trolls?"
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Comments: 17

alicemoonlight123 [2013-04-27 01:13:07 +0000 UTC]

no she didnt forget. at the end it says the five of them get out of the car. the four kids and the reader. Dave was squished between John and the reader in the back seat.

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LetMeBelieve [2012-08-29 23:09:39 +0000 UTC]

Lol wheres john? I think we left without him XDD
This is good can't wait for the rest!!! :3

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Theif-Of-Heart In reply to LetMeBelieve [2012-08-29 23:32:39 +0000 UTC]

D: LOL, I know someone pointed that out already. I'm SOO sorry I knew I forgot someone *drives back to get john*
But thanks it means alot!

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LetMeBelieve In reply to Theif-Of-Heart [2012-08-29 23:36:34 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha no problem :3

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musicnote854 [2012-08-28 23:25:11 +0000 UTC]

Not bad, actually really good. I can't wait to see the next

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Theif-Of-Heart In reply to musicnote854 [2012-08-28 23:39:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you: ) The next part is up, actually

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ScarredCalamity [2012-08-28 09:03:28 +0000 UTC]

for a first time this is really good! cantwaittoseethenextparts x//3

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Theif-Of-Heart In reply to ScarredCalamity [2012-08-28 16:57:37 +0000 UTC]

YAY! Thanks so much and the first one should be up later today

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ScarredCalamity In reply to Theif-Of-Heart [2012-08-28 19:05:43 +0000 UTC]

no problem and YEY!

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spazzgirl1 [2012-08-28 08:45:53 +0000 UTC]

Quick question. Are you going to be doing one of these for each of the characters?

Anyway, this looks good. Can't wait to see what happens next (:

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Theif-Of-Heart In reply to spazzgirl1 [2012-08-28 16:57:18 +0000 UTC]

Yes, there will be one for all the characters. And thank you! I was debating weather to post it or not
Yay! I should have it up by later today

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DoomWulf [2012-08-28 07:59:45 +0000 UTC]

Looks good so far, just one thing that bothers me slightly... in the beginning you say that John is going with the reader along with Rose, Jade, and Dave, but he isn't mentioned for the rest of the chapter/introduction.
Also I can't help but want to correct a few words... impaciently = impatiently, "There trolls?" = "They're trolls?"

Other than that, it seems alright so far.

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Theif-Of-Heart In reply to DoomWulf [2012-08-28 08:01:35 +0000 UTC]

BLUH! I knew I was forgetting something! Sorry! I'll fix that in the next one D:

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TheFireDragoness [2012-08-28 06:38:42 +0000 UTC]

I like it! Can't wait to see what happens next :3

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Theif-Of-Heart In reply to TheFireDragoness [2012-08-28 06:40:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I hope to have it up by tomorrow

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TheFireDragoness In reply to Theif-Of-Heart [2012-08-28 06:51:29 +0000 UTC]

You're certainly very welcome!
Hooray!

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Theif-Of-Heart In reply to TheFireDragoness [2012-08-28 06:51:56 +0000 UTC]

LOLZ!

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