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My original character Scruballz in my room again.Old Version: [link]
This was one of the first piece I submitted to dA back in 2009. It was my best piece at the time and I still think it's a pretty good one. I was almost afraid I wouldn't show any improvement but I at last I did and I'm proud of it.
New Version: [link]
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Nyajinsky In reply to ??? [2012-10-22 17:59:37 +0000 UTC]
Am I the only one that likes the before one more?
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TheK40 In reply to Nyajinsky [2012-10-22 19:03:17 +0000 UTC]
Yes.
Nah Jk I got a few who liked the first one better too. What do you like about the first that the second one lacked?
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Nyajinsky In reply to TheK40 [2012-10-22 21:56:17 +0000 UTC]
well... I personally like sketchy art more than smudged. and the second pic is smudged like those OEL online mangas. I like the undies in the first picture. in the second it's just mah. I also dislike the bandages. the second picture might look more realistic or 3D-ish, but it looks less artistic. It looks altogether too smooth. And the chips on the ground look way better on the first one. I also think the details are more detailed although the second one have more things in the background, but they are kind of unnecessary. but I like that the second one have actually something on the posters behind. but the undies are probably the main reason. haha
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TheK40 In reply to Nyajinsky [2012-10-23 00:15:33 +0000 UTC]
oh I see. There is something more organic about the piece when the artist goes sketchy (cross hatching), you can see more of their hand movements in the piece which is why I think you like it more. I do regret not being able to do the same in new one but I kind of went over board with the copic markers which gave the clean smooth (smudged) look. The only thing I would have to disagree is that there's nothing less artistic about it except the fact its a different approach/ style of shading.
lol and your the second to mention about the bandages. Those were actually a new thing I added when improving the character himself through the years. It makes more sense in the story I'm putting him in that I'm currently working on. But you're right, in this picture it's kinda of unnecessary to be having bandages in this realistic setting.
Thanks a bunch for taking the time to explain! : )
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Southrobin In reply to ??? [2012-10-22 17:59:24 +0000 UTC]
Congrats on being in the top 10 C:
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AngryCinnabon [2012-10-22 02:53:39 +0000 UTC]
Looking at your before, you wouldn't think it would need *that* much improvement...compared to your after, you did so so so many things better, including overall composition, coloring, posing, and proportioning. This really shows you the difference that can happen in three years, even to great art
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TheK40 In reply to AngryCinnabon [2012-10-22 04:36:01 +0000 UTC]
Right? That's why I was a bit nervous at first when I choose this piece to redo. But in the end it worked out.
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CHLI [2012-10-21 22:05:54 +0000 UTC]
That is SO me right there!
Congratulations on winning, by the way!!
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WDWParksGal In reply to ??? [2012-10-20 05:14:04 +0000 UTC]
Congratulations on being one of the ten finalists in the "Draw this Again" contest. Enjoy the prizes
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UnknownShadow4ever In reply to ??? [2012-10-16 01:56:35 +0000 UTC]
I love how you added more detail and that CAT!! I love both of them!
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TheK40 In reply to UnknownShadow4ever [2012-10-16 02:26:32 +0000 UTC]
Yay youy noticed the cat! haha You're the first to ever point it out. and thanks ^^
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UnknownShadow4ever In reply to TheK40 [2012-10-16 02:43:14 +0000 UTC]
Lol... I look at every work of art in detail!! Its fun once you find details that can be missed!!
I really love it though!!
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TheK40 In reply to UnknownShadow4ever [2012-10-16 04:52:23 +0000 UTC]
hah ayeah never know what the artist might hide in each drawing >u>
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arima2tumaNyappy [2012-10-12 10:43:29 +0000 UTC]
Congrates ^^ you are ssssssssssooooo awasome ^^
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aniwablue In reply to ??? [2012-10-11 17:36:18 +0000 UTC]
Wow, wonderful! I love the two image, same if the new is better! Good luck for the contest!
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LauraLF In reply to ??? [2012-10-11 12:19:48 +0000 UTC]
I actually think that both are cool but the new one is much better!
keep up the good work! you are an amazing artist
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cmwjw In reply to ??? [2012-10-11 05:21:37 +0000 UTC]
I WAS THERE WATCHING YOU REDRAW! STILL AMAZED!
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LeyoneTracks In reply to ??? [2012-10-11 04:37:56 +0000 UTC]
I see Terra Five back there haha! Good stuff, congrats!
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TheK40 In reply to Kyanselas [2012-10-11 04:25:14 +0000 UTC]
QuQ thank you kyandii, this really made my night
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Kyanselas In reply to TheK40 [2012-10-11 04:32:51 +0000 UTC]
I imagine it would. You really deserve it! ;u; <33 And I miss yoooou. I wish you weren't so busy~ D;
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