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Published: 2008-08-03 02:43:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 1212; Favourites: 52; Downloads: 11
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How...does one know if he is strong?And how...do you know if fighting,
Is right, or if it's wrong?
I! Have been holding on so long!
This life is so real!
I never thought I would feel,
All this pain inside!
It is the story, the story of my life,
So many nightmares, so many sleepless nights...!
I! I cannot break now,
Because if I do, there is no way out...
And so I cry...
And my heart breaks at the sound...
It is the,
Sound of my joy,
The sound of my pain,
And, this will never change
It is the,
Sound of my laughter,
The sound of my tears,
These things will remain...
The sound, you see,
It's the rhythm that surrounds me...
I! I have been left for dead!
My soul, from me has fled!
Because of the paths that I must tread
I! I do not want to be me!
Where is my God?
And his fabled mercy?
I! I cannot break now,
Because if I do, there is no way out,
And so I cry...
And my heart breaks at the sound
It is the,
Sound of refusing,
The sound of believing,
And never letting go
It is the,
Sound of two heartbeats,
Beating in time together,
And, this will never change
The sound, you see!
It's the rhythm that surrounds me...!
The sound...You see)
Driving through me!
The sound...(You see)
My emotions consume me!
The sound...(You see)
I am a shell of what I was!
And I don't know who I'll be!
I just need a reprieve...
I find it in the,
Sound of the music,
It flows right through me,
And never lets me go
It is the sound of my joy,
The sound of my pain,
And this will never change
It is the sound of refusing,
The sound of believing,
The sound of a forever,
And a heart that's beating!
The sound...
You see!
It's everything around me!
The sound...
You see!
It's all my love abounding!
It's the sound...
You see!
It's the sound of living!
jlp August 2, 2008-revised July 6, 2009
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Comments: 70
Awesome.......
Reminds me of a picture I started on. This makes me think of someone who always strives to be strong but can't help but cry every now and then.
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Crying, to my mind, IS strength.
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It's the strength of being willing to admit that you can be sad enough to cry... if that makes sense.
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And to not hide it, as well. To show your emotions, your humanity.
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*intense applauding*
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Word homey, word.
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Homey?
Um, no offense, but I don't really know you.... please don't call me "homey".
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...It's just something I say. 
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That probably sounded cold.
All I'm trying to say is, it's okay for you to be friendly, just please don't be TOO friendly.
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Um, I don't know HOW to be "less friendly".
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So do u always know what ur going to write about or do u just start writing and it turns into something u like.
Or how do u know if its finished, just whenever u want it to be.
It seems like whenever I write something it seems fake. Like shallow or simple, I know I'm not that good at writing anything and that drawing and photography is my passion but it is neat to write. I have a craving every now and then to but i start and I don't think its always that bad, but when i read over it, its just not real somehow. not what I want. So I just stop cause I get board and don't know what else to do. U know what I mean?
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I always have a general concept, yes. It's finished when it's finished.
I don't ever seem to have the same problem you do, that most people do, I'm unsure as to just why that is.
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ya I guess thats just ur true passion so u have no problem watso ever just like art is mine. Sure I get frustrated sometimes but I get frustrated cause I love it lol u know what i mean.
But ya back at u
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These things will remain...
The sound, you see!
It's the rhythm that surrounds me...
super
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you're very welcome 
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LOVE this...
"I! I have been left for dead!
My soul from me has fled!
Because of the paths that I must tread
I! I do not want to be me!
Where is my God?
And his fabled mercy?
I! I cannot break now,
Because if I do, there is no way out,
And so I cry...and my heart breaks at the sound"
Amazing.
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I really enjoyed re-reading this one Bro. It is so awesome.
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i understand ....its like you're grasping at your last lifesaver, in your last breathe....trying to still be in existant....nicely done
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