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courswork sucks. I'm hoping to try and finish this sometime before I submit my Round 2 stuff depending on time. At the very least, I'll stick up Adams Round 2 attire (There's a subtle change thanks to 's Ryan burning part of it off). I figured you all at least deserve to see (Especially the Round 2 opponent) where this section left off.

NOT MUCH TO SAY. But here's my very messy plan for Vs Darkdra. NOTICE HOW I DON'T USE ANY CIRCLES OR SKELETONS OR ANYTHING WHILE DRAWING? I'M A TERRIBLE ARTIST! There's a reason why this is in my scraps.

I figured I would at least stick the last few pages like this (I should warn you though, as well as rushed art, Ryan and the twins were drawn from memory here, so it's not exactly accurate)


SYNOPSIS OF THIS SECTION:
The twins complete their little pep talks to Ryan and Adam, telling them that they are the only two left in the area as well as the others "weakness". They also remind them that they don't have to kill them to win if they "don't think they can", they just need to get the screw.

Ryan goes in the direction that Diesel (The male of the twins if you're confused) told him that he'll find Adam and stumbles across his abandoned bike. Thinking it's strange he left his fruit basket, he figured Adam is trying to prepare a trap and would wait for him to return. Hell realises a moment too late that this IS the trap and Adam dives out of a nearby trash can, knife in hand.

There's a cut and blood.

We cut to Diesel and Morphine's "Playhouse", where Morphine is making a new trap: A Cammyboro-Pult, sending explosive camera critters at their target. They then have a mini disagreement over Adam. Diesel is still bitter over the whole attempted murder thing and thinks he'll ruin everything they have planned but Morphine thinks he'll be more fun to use to help torment the other contestants then Ryan will be to torment.

They have a friendly bet: If Ryan wins, they'll stick with Diesels current (Unknown) "plan", if Adam wins, Morphine makes a few personal "changes" to it. Diesel is hesitant due to his sister not being as much of a planner as he is, but when offered a chance with the Cammyboro launcher, he can't refuse.

Back to the action, Ryan, with a nice new cut on his face, has managed to grab Adam's arms. They exchange "pleasentries" back and forth, before Ryan calmly reminds him that it's better to give up due to Ryan having the upper hand.


If you're wondering what they are saying, I'll paste the "script" below. Sorry for this long description. It's up to you guys to try and piece them together as I really should be doing coding right now. I should warn you, that some of it was likely going to get trim or editted, but the general feel is still there.

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BC
.... How could you possibly-

Diesel
Know that? Please, we know all of your secrets. Your motives. Your drives. Your strengths. Your voice inside your head. Your weaknesses.

Likewise, I know all of his too. I can tell you exactly how to deal with him quickly. For example-

Morphine
Only his metal can heal. Nanotechnology is amazing these days isn't it? You were just unlucky that basically every shot hit metal.

M&D
So? Still, going to chicken out?

BC&Ryan
Why... are you so determined to have me face this other guy?

M&D
We have our own reasons. Let's just say that we see... potential in you. Both of you. We just want to see which one of you is worth our attention the most.

Diesel
We can't promise that we know where Lillian is, but it's not impossible that she's here. And if you win, we CAN promise that Jack will do everything he can to help you.

But right now in this area, Adam is the only one who still has a screw in the slums.


Morphine
We can't promise that this island is the key to your plans, but it would definatly help. And if you win, we CAN promise that Jack will do everything he can to help you.

But if you don't take out Ryan now, you'll find yourself unable to do so later.


Ryan
You better not be lying Diesel. But you are right...

BC
My dear, this information will be handsomly rewarded.

Bring him to me...


HELL
This is a trap. It's clearly a trap. If stupidity is a new look you're going for, you're pulling it off well tonight.

Ryan
I don't have any choice and you know it. Diesel said that Adam was the only screw holder still in the slums. I've got to find him before he realises this fact and hops over to the next area.

HELL
Well whose fault is that? I saw at least two kids run past us during your meditation. You can handle a kid rig-

DING DING

Ryan
Wait...

He's here...


DING DING

DING DING

Ryan
Abandoned. Great. The goose chase continues.

HELL
He can't have gone far. He left his fruit basket here...

Ryan
This time you ARE right, he's probably trying to set a trap up. I'll get up on the roof and wait. Catch him by suprise when he returns for his stuff.

HELL
WAIT! NO! YOU FOOL! THIS IS THE TRAP

[slash]

[BOOM]

Diesel
URK

Morphine
OH BROTHER! BACK SO SOON? I didn't hear you come in!

Diesel
Is that... a catapult? Quite primative for you sister.

Morphine
It's being turned into a specific Cammyboro-pult brother! (Considering I missed you, the angle is still off).

So... enjoy your talk with the winged man?

Diesel
I could ask the same for you and Pearson. Honestly, I don't know what you see in him.

Morphine
Oh get over it already. We got bigger things to worry about.

Diesel
No sister, he NEEDS to go. He breaks rules. He causes mayhem. He's-

Morphine
Just like us...

Diesel
That's not... It doesn't matter, he won't beat Ryan anyway.

Morphine
Well if you think that, how about a bet? We won't step in so there is no bias. If Ryan wins, we keep to the current plan. If Adam wins, you let me change the plans a little to include Pearson as our... key componant.

Diesel
And why on earth would I agree to that?

Morphine
Because if you agree to it, I'll let you try out the Cammy-launcher before we go watch the fight.

Diesel
.... Fine, where's the lever?

BC
You know... most things die...

WHY. WON'T. YOU?!

Ryan
It would take a far bigger man then you to even put me into a hospital.

BC
That's the kind of challange I relish boy!

Ryan
You're still talking big for some reason. I'm stronger and quicker then you. You're unnarmed and have no special powers without them. And the deal breaker-
All I have to do is tear off this screw and I've sent you as far away from here as possible.
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Comments: 1

DevilHedgehog [2010-12-21 23:47:35 +0000 UTC]

I'm rather happy you put this up.


Though I'm kind of scared of some of these pictures...
THOSE POOR CAMMYBARAS LOOK LIKE PUPPIES
HOW COULD YOU
;A;

I WANNA SEE YOU KICK MY ASS
GOGO

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