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TheSharpness — JYC Rd1 End WIP

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Description I hate that top third. But oh well, this IS a WIP after all. Also Ryan sheds a single tear. That may have been OOC, so I was going to redo that bit to him just cursing.


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Synopsis:

And then Adam smashs Ryan with his own arm. HA HA! Get it? "Gotta give you a hand!" ha ha.... I'll show myself out.

Anyway, Adam is prancing around as Ryan is trying to get the last of his energy. Adam instead pins him down and strikes down with a blade. Ryan braces for impact... but instead sees that Adam is simply unscrewing the red screw (Drawn black here for some reason).

Adam gleefully steals Ryan's shirt, mentioning how it should be the right shade to repair his jacket a little. Ryan just tells him to get the killing over with, saying that he's failed Lillian now. Seppuka and all that.

Adam strangely enough denies his "warriors way" style request, mainly because it's not as fun if they are asking for death. He prefers them kicking and screaming on the way out and besides, there's more ways for him to have fun.

For example, he explains to Ryan that now he's going to show the next person he finds, be them woman, child or even the Lillian he seeks (Cameos everywhere at this point) there will be no mercy, and they most certainly will not live to tell the tale. He mentions that he'll be back to finish Ryan off when the island is his and rides off on his tribicycle, leaving Ryan to let it all set in that it's not just Lillian he's saved, but every other innocent person that Adam may find and kill on the island. [If you're wondering why Adam let's Ryan lives for now, it's because his ego was hurt by Ryan. Now, he wants Ryan to be a shell of his former self. He's probably hoping that when he goes back, Ryan will have commited suicide.

Course... he doesn't know about Hell]


AND THEN THERE'S A S.E. STUFF AFTER LAWL


If only you had the backbone to not hesitate in killing me the moment you saw me, you might have saved another life, or two, or thirty. I could ride on to the next area and run into some innocent child that wound up here by mistake. A poor woman. A sick man. Perhaps maybe even your precious Lillian.

Now, all the blood that I will spill, and I promise you, there WILL be blood, every last drop of it will now be on your hand.

And honestly, if that doesn't destroy the final part of your proud warrior spirit, then you're almost as messed up as I am!

Language warning from both Ryan and Adam at this point. If you bother to read any of this tl;dr stuff, I suggest reading Adams speech at the end, even if it doesn't quite match up to the panels here. That boy ain't right.
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[Smash with arm]

[SMASH SMASH SMASH]

[Adam throws away arm]

Ryan
Lillian... I've failed you...


BC
ANd now... your final chapter.

[stab down....BUT!]

[unscrew. unscrew]

So according to the rules... I win.

Well... that's interesting. Listen, I'm going to be borrowing what's left of your vest. Gotta fix the damage you did to my outfit is a-


Ryan
Stop wasting my time.

BC
What?

Ryan
You've... beat me. Stop toying with me and just get it over with.

I've failed her. I'll never find Lillian now. Not like this. So just end it...


BC
But... where's the fun in killing you so quickly.

Ryan
WHAT!?

BC
Isn't it obvious? You're pracitcally asking for a mercy kill. I'm not about mercy at all! I want you to suffer, not do you a favor. If I kill you now, I would be taking all the fun out of it.

You're dying anyway. You don't have to be a .......doctor... to see that.

So instead, I'm gonna let you suffer. Give you plenty of time to reflect...

Time to realise that this... Lillian is likely going to die... all because YOU screwed up...

HELL
Don't listen to him... he's right but that's besides the point.


BC
Yep. Hell, this entire tournament, you've just wasted plenty of time. All this time you spent hunting me down. Fighting me. Hell, just sitting on that roof. You could have been looking elsewhere and found her.

Face it, if nobody has ever found this place before, what makes you think a bunch of petty kidnappers could find this place and dump her here? Take it from a real villain boy, if they say she's on an island, then she's tied up in some gimp mask wearing guys cupboard.

But do you know the sweetest thing of all this?

When you reach the point of realisation that she's dying because of you. The point of realisation that every action you did today to save her just resulted in you getting even further away from your goal. When you eventually realise that it's all the more likely that Lillian is already dead seeing as really there is no reason to keep her alive when you in all stubonness would flatly refuse blackmails and shorten her life further.

It's the point where you realise that I knew all of this from a small canine in a school uniform and yet I STILL did everything I could to beat you, just because that's the type of sick bastard I am.

It's then at that point you realise that of all the things to be killed by, a banana and an orange is up there with being beaten with your own arm. Oops, guess I did that too...


And then just for the extra giggle, said sick bastard with zero respect for you or your dead girlfriends well being, just felt like rubbing this fact so blatantly into your face that any remaining pieces of your broken hope and pointless self belief would shatter, before riding off on a childrens tricycle.

BUT THE ICING UPON THIS WONDERFUL CHERRY FILLED CAKE? If only you had the backbone to not hesitate in killing me the moment you saw me, you might have saved another life, or two, or thirty. I could ride on to the next area and run into some innocent child that wound up here by mistake. A poor woman. A sick man. Perhaps maybe even your precious Lillian.

Now, all the blood that I will spill, and I promise you, there WILL be blood, every last drop of it will now be on your hand!

And honestly, if that doesn't destroy the final part of your proud warrior spirit. Then you're almost as messed up as I am!

GWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Ryan
Fuck... Fuck. FUUUCK!
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Comments: 4

DevilHedgehog [2011-01-07 16:35:05 +0000 UTC]

...I feel like I've done him so very wrong.....I honestly hope you DOMINATE with round 2.

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TheSharpness In reply to DevilHedgehog [2011-01-10 16:00:11 +0000 UTC]

Nonsense. You've been doing him absolutly fine

It's me who is worried that I've got your character completly wrong ha ha (I guess you'll see when I finally stick it up lol)

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DevilHedgehog In reply to TheSharpness [2011-01-10 16:55:24 +0000 UTC]

FFFFF I cannot WAIT

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Unknown-Variable [2010-12-15 02:13:50 +0000 UTC]

Bwaaah!!! D: I am so sad you couldn't finish it all the waaaay!!!

But damn! Basket Case! You jerk! xD
I like him!

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