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Published: 2005-12-11 19:11:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 119; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 16
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Description Finalised lines with wings closed. Should be coloured...sometime...

Might get round to finishing the open ones this evening or tomorrow. Maybe.

All crits welcome, particularly on the wing structure and feathering.

EDIT: On further examination i made a minor edit to the front wing so that the muscles all joined up under his arm. But as that's in the .xcf, it's too minor to merit making the requisite adjustments here.
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Comments: 23

botanation [2005-12-13 02:30:18 +0000 UTC]

aw, MAN, he's wearing CLOTHES!! why would you go and do a thing like that, space?

though i am kinda glad that you chose the closed wings. anyway, my only criticism (BESIDES THE FACT THAT HE'S NOT NAKED ANYMORE ) is that i think you overdid the wrinkles on his...attire. there probably wouldn't be so many. which is really only another reason to bereave him of it!

just kidding, he doesn't have to be naked. i just thought it was really awesome with the flip-flops.

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thespaceinvader In reply to botanation [2005-12-13 07:40:21 +0000 UTC]

Lol, it would have been cleaner without the clothing, i agree. But realistically, i can't draw...certain parts of the anatomy.. so...

And you're probably right about the folds. I did go a little nuts with them...

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PearlPhoenix [2005-12-12 05:50:02 +0000 UTC]

wow that looks good

but ...i think u should rotate the pic around....like him flying down instead? will look like an action scene XD

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thespaceinvader In reply to PearlPhoenix [2005-12-12 10:28:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, maybe. Hopefully once i do the background it will seem more active.

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MeltedTuna [2005-12-12 04:33:59 +0000 UTC]

Can't wait to see it finished

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thespaceinvader In reply to MeltedTuna [2005-12-12 10:28:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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Inuyashafreak337 [2005-12-12 00:08:42 +0000 UTC]

nice ^^ the one hand ish a little odd, & the wings feathers might look better if they were longer. But 'tis still awesome the way it is ^^ awesomishness!!! *two thumbs up* ^^

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thespaceinvader In reply to Inuyashafreak337 [2005-12-12 00:58:11 +0000 UTC]

which hand? I wasn't entirely happy with either...

And the wing feathers will be extended with the shading.

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Inuyashafreak337 In reply to thespaceinvader [2005-12-13 00:27:06 +0000 UTC]

cool ^^ The hand I was talking about was the open one the *thinks for a second* left one

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thespaceinvader In reply to Inuyashafreak337 [2005-12-13 01:05:21 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. I might narrow out the fingers a little. I wanted to do a less stretched out hand, but i couldn't get a decent reference photo of myself. AH well, what'll you do...

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Inuyashafreak337 In reply to thespaceinvader [2005-12-13 01:56:10 +0000 UTC]

well, I'm sure it'll turn out awesome ^^

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thespaceinvader In reply to Inuyashafreak337 [2005-12-13 07:42:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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Maeniel [2005-12-11 22:14:17 +0000 UTC]

Nice job! The only thing I could comment on are his abs--you might want to define them with shading than with lines. Really, really minor, though.

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thespaceinvader In reply to Maeniel [2005-12-11 23:51:57 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. Some of the muscle definition and feathers won't be as sharp when it's finished. I was aiming for quite a soft look.

Thanks.

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Feaelen [2005-12-11 21:58:17 +0000 UTC]

Lookin' Good.
Can't wait to see the coloured version, and the open wing version

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thespaceinvader In reply to Feaelen [2005-12-11 22:06:41 +0000 UTC]

Thankies.

The colours i hope to get to work on tomorrow. The open wings might be a while longer...

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Feaelen In reply to thespaceinvader [2005-12-12 01:37:30 +0000 UTC]


YAY!

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artangst [2005-12-11 20:44:56 +0000 UTC]

it's coming along marvelously!

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thespaceinvader In reply to artangst [2005-12-11 21:14:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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miyu-greenleaf [2005-12-11 19:51:52 +0000 UTC]

WOW!! This looks really nice!!! I like it a lot~ The anatomy is really awesome!

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thespaceinvader In reply to miyu-greenleaf [2005-12-11 21:14:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, i'm pretty pleased with it myself. Mine's often a little dodgy, so this came out well.

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miyu-greenleaf In reply to thespaceinvader [2005-12-11 21:15:50 +0000 UTC]

i agree!! -=beams=- nice work once again!

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thespaceinvader In reply to miyu-greenleaf [2005-12-11 21:19:55 +0000 UTC]

XD thanks. Thanks for the too.

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