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Paul-x In reply to ??? [2012-07-30 18:55:30 +0000 UTC]

You just can't please some people

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Thilu In reply to ??? [2012-07-30 18:14:01 +0000 UTC]

thanks for your critique ^^ Actually I chose between having them there and not having them there. Before I have heard that the backgrounds had been too boring so I took a shot with them too

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Kintarotpc [2012-07-30 15:33:41 +0000 UTC]

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I'm going to give you an honest opinion. No sugar coating. The point of this is not to pat you on the back, critiques are meant to help you improve. This is not, however, an attempt to be mean in any way. Just honest.

Vision:This is a pretty common plant seen in a pretty common composition.

Originality:Nothing really original about this. Perhaps next time
try another composition. Maybe shoot from below, next to the ground and up? Understand that flower pictures like this are exceedingly common so the composition is vital.

Technique:The post processing in this makes it feel oldish, which is the fad of the moment but shows no effort involved.

Impact: there isn't a whole lot to say positively for this photo. It's pretty sure, but not much beyond that.

Advice: Flower pictures are common. Exceedingly so. There are ways to make your flower pictures stand out from the crowd but it's going to take some thought. The post processing here kills this image. Keeping a more natural look would be more appealing. As for the composition, I've mentioned it a number of times and it really is that important. Adherence to the rule of thirds would have helped this significantly. Even getting closer would have made for a stronger image. If the flowers themselves aren't particularly unique and interesting, you can also do the old trick of misting them gently with water until beads form on their petals. This gives a common subject more interest by mixing textures. A tripod would help considerably with this kind of image as well, allowing you to use a lower ISO.
Cheers!

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FrauLanders [2012-07-30 14:54:35 +0000 UTC]

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Oh my god! I like little flowers soo much that I can stop right here and congratulate you but word limit makes me continue)))
The only thing is originality. There are many photos of flowers in the world and it's quite easy to take'em if you have a good came.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
Then.
This pic is very warm and calme.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> another plus to ite.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)"/>
It leads in summer, cheers and makes to relaxe.deviantart.net/emoticons/d/d… " width="29" height="21" alt="" title="Dance!"/>
Fresh colours match good and supplement each othere.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> Light green and light blue are awesome! and as I see there can be found some pink)))
So my final conclusion is: Beautiful!

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Thilu In reply to FrauLanders [2012-07-30 15:26:00 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the feedback and I'm very glad you like iT

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FrauLanders In reply to Thilu [2012-07-30 15:58:21 +0000 UTC]

It was my pleasure, dear! I was glad to comment and your art

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cupkeeper00 [2012-07-30 13:37:36 +0000 UTC]

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Vision: the way that you foucus on this stem is amazing i love the way it just shines against the backround

Oringinality: there are alot of pictures of flowers in the world but this one is beutiful not just because its a flower but the colors just go so well together

Technique: the way the picture gets blury as it goes to the other flowers and twards the ground is beautiful it really says look at this flower!!!!

Impact: this peice really speaks to me. it says look at this flower one part of alot f flowers is important, and standing alone is not always a bad thing!!!

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Thilu In reply to cupkeeper00 [2012-07-30 13:40:18 +0000 UTC]

oh thank you for your feedback and i am very glad you like it!

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cupkeeper00 In reply to Thilu [2012-07-30 13:48:26 +0000 UTC]

no prob can i ask how do you request a critique??? do you have to be a member??

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Thilu In reply to cupkeeper00 [2012-07-30 13:52:15 +0000 UTC]

Yes you have to have a premium membership :/

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cupkeeper00 In reply to Thilu [2012-07-30 13:53:15 +0000 UTC]

thats stupid!!!!! well im working on getting one!

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Thilu In reply to cupkeeper00 [2012-07-30 14:13:20 +0000 UTC]

yea me too. I have one atm because some anonymous gave it to me but its just for three months

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cupkeeper00 In reply to Thilu [2012-07-30 14:25:25 +0000 UTC]

well premium is premium!!

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Lightningball [2013-01-20 10:10:50 +0000 UTC]

Very small, pretty, delicate flowers!

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Thilu In reply to Lightningball [2013-01-20 10:23:42 +0000 UTC]

indeed!

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knirket [2012-12-11 22:53:43 +0000 UTC]

My favorite flower <3

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Thilu In reply to knirket [2012-12-12 07:39:43 +0000 UTC]

^^

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Ithilis [2012-11-29 14:29:47 +0000 UTC]

Myosotis scorpioides Your nature photos are so cool! I wish my herbarium would have had this awesome pictures

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Thilu In reply to Ithilis [2012-12-01 20:19:16 +0000 UTC]

oh thanks!

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Furi-kun [2012-11-12 16:01:26 +0000 UTC]

nice photo

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Thilu In reply to Furi-kun [2012-11-12 20:24:06 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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flowershot400 [2012-10-20 19:31:10 +0000 UTC]

fantastic shot, well done! The color and the background are all in balance, this is were I want my photos to be!

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Thilu In reply to flowershot400 [2012-10-21 08:41:54 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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flowershot400 In reply to Thilu [2012-10-21 17:02:59 +0000 UTC]

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13vamps [2012-10-14 11:37:00 +0000 UTC]

beautiful work

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Thilu In reply to 13vamps [2012-10-14 16:30:00 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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estachos [2012-09-10 08:48:35 +0000 UTC]

one of my favorite flowers, great composition, beutiful light and colors...

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Thilu In reply to estachos [2012-09-10 09:03:11 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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estachos In reply to Thilu [2012-09-10 09:04:35 +0000 UTC]

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chewygummies [2012-09-04 12:05:40 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful macro shot there!

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Thilu In reply to chewygummies [2012-09-06 07:07:38 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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cookielover17 [2012-08-24 16:31:03 +0000 UTC]

pretty!

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Thilu In reply to cookielover17 [2012-08-24 17:48:44 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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cookielover17 In reply to Thilu [2012-08-24 17:49:56 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome!

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legomaximus [2012-08-14 05:52:33 +0000 UTC]

Pardon me but... Y U NO COMMENT ON MY WORK!!!

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Thilu In reply to legomaximus [2012-08-16 18:08:09 +0000 UTC]

what? XD

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legomaximus In reply to Thilu [2012-08-16 23:11:33 +0000 UTC]

You didn't comment on my art. and i feel sad.

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Thilu In reply to legomaximus [2012-08-17 06:49:02 +0000 UTC]

should i have done that? or? hahaha

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LightArtGuy [2012-08-13 17:29:46 +0000 UTC]

vilken hΓ€rlig blom bild

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Thilu In reply to LightArtGuy [2012-08-16 18:08:05 +0000 UTC]

tack

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shimriya [2012-08-11 00:01:51 +0000 UTC]

The flowers look like children's eyes...

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Thilu In reply to shimriya [2012-08-16 18:07:59 +0000 UTC]

haha really?

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Giverny1101 [2012-08-07 19:16:20 +0000 UTC]

very lovely and perfectly

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Thilu In reply to Giverny1101 [2012-08-16 18:07:52 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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kayteachan [2012-08-03 20:46:30 +0000 UTC]

i love the colors and how in focus the flowers are and how out of focus everything else is

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Thilu In reply to kayteachan [2012-08-16 18:07:48 +0000 UTC]

glad you do!

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feldrand [2012-08-02 22:26:56 +0000 UTC]

ah so cute and a wonderful photo as well... i know how difficult it is to catch these...
in my series "flowers along the way" there come some similar ones later on - my daughter showed them to me when we were underway...
yesterday i saw forget-me-nots along that same way - i'm not sure if i have overlooked them before or if they have opened up in the meantime...

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Thilu In reply to feldrand [2012-08-16 18:07:41 +0000 UTC]

^^

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feldrand In reply to Thilu [2012-08-27 07:42:31 +0000 UTC]

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Thilu In reply to feldrand [2012-08-27 14:44:15 +0000 UTC]

lovely smiley i must say!

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