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Description            "You remember Robbie, don't you, Alex?" A fourteen year old Josh asked as he dangled the battered doll in front of his brother. "Alex?" Josh whimpered,but there was no reply from his institutionalized brother.

            He hadn't really responded to outside stimulation since the accident. He only made a slight noise when Josh had given him their father's old dog tags,but it was just a slight whimper. Sure, he would talk,but just nonsense about his family being dead and Silent Hill along with other nonsense Josh didn't quite understand.

           "When I'm alone," Josh spoke soft and slowly."I still hold him sometimes. Especially when I have nightmares. I know it maybe kiddish,but-" Josh was cut off by a nurse who said his visit had to end soon.

           "I-I've got to go," Josh said before getting up and sluggishly exiting the familiar white room. He had visited his brother at least once a week for years. There was a time, shortly after the accident, that Josh was in a complete state of depression and sadness. He couldn't leave the house and hated and feared everything,but he recovered with help from doctors and therapists. His brother, however, wasn't as lucky. He was nearly catatonic.

             Josh nervously ran his hands through his shoulder length hair as he read a bike magazine. He was seeing if he could save up his allowance to buy a bike for himself. That way, he didn't have to beg his parents to drive him to see his brother, he could simply ride his bike to the hospital. He saw one he thought he would be able to afford in a month or two and ripped the page out. Quickly jumping off the bunk bed he used to share with his brother, he went to stuff the magazine in a locker on the floor. He opened the chest-like structure and something caught his eye. It was the flashlight that his brother gave to him for when he had nightmares. He clicked it on and realized it still worked.

            "I should take this to Alex," he smiled to himself and stuffed it into his hoodie pocket.

             "Josh! Come downstairs! Joey is here for you," his mother called from the living room.

              "Coming!" Josh yelled as he made his way downstairs.
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Comments: 36

Kittyistwix [2011-03-15 04:22:49 +0000 UTC]

To be honest, I actually teared up a bit here. Just thinking of Alex as being insane makes me feel sad. But I still love this chapter!

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thinkingorplotting In reply to Kittyistwix [2011-03-15 11:55:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much. I hope you can enjoy the rest of the series.

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Jacklelover13 [2011-01-10 16:53:32 +0000 UTC]

I just got Silent Hill Homecoming yesterday (finally >->) and I found it very interesting. Even if it was all in Alex's head, I still felt bad for the kids. And in this, I'm kind of happy to see that they're alive :3 I LIKE THIS!

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thinkingorplotting In reply to Jacklelover13 [2011-01-10 21:38:16 +0000 UTC]


Thank you very much. Please feel free to read and critique the story as you see fit.

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Jacklelover13 In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-01-10 23:48:17 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! And I will :3 (I'm actually playing the game right now... and I realize, Needlers suck >->)

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thinkingorplotting In reply to Jacklelover13 [2011-01-10 23:49:58 +0000 UTC]


I'm super glad that you'll read it. How far are you now?
OH YEAH, THEY REALLY DO.

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Jacklelover13 In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-01-11 00:11:37 +0000 UTC]

Well, I was in school when I read it So I didn't get to read much >->

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thinkingorplotting In reply to Jacklelover13 [2011-01-11 00:12:01 +0000 UTC]

XDDD
Wow, your school lets you on dA? My school blocks it. xD

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Jacklelover13 In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-01-11 00:17:26 +0000 UTC]

Well, they haven't blocked it yet. I hope they don't! I spent the whole day trying to find pictures/fanfiction of like the four children that died. (I find them interesting D: I FAIL)

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thinkingorplotting In reply to Jacklelover13 [2011-01-11 00:19:21 +0000 UTC]

Naw, you don't fail. xD
And feel free to check out all of my writing. <3 A lot of it is Silent Hill. xD

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Jacklelover13 In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-01-11 00:22:17 +0000 UTC]

I can tell <3 Lotsa chapters.

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thinkingorplotting In reply to Jacklelover13 [2011-01-11 00:22:50 +0000 UTC]

<3

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Jacklelover13 In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-01-11 00:24:05 +0000 UTC]

Have you ever considered drawing any of the Silent Hill characters?

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thinkingorplotting In reply to Jacklelover13 [2011-01-11 00:26:59 +0000 UTC]

AFKSDVJKDFDSFDGRFHGRQ3E
MY ART IS SHIT.

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Jacklelover13 In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-01-11 00:27:44 +0000 UTC]

XDDD I don't believe it, show me an example, I'll be the judge of that.

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thinkingorplotting In reply to Jacklelover13 [2011-01-11 00:33:10 +0000 UTC]

Uh....dude...I suck. I assure you.
I have a folder named 'crappy art' for a reason.

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Jacklelover13 In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-01-11 00:36:17 +0000 UTC]

Not really, I can't really draw people or hands like you. That's why I draw chibis!

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thinkingorplotting In reply to Jacklelover13 [2011-01-11 00:38:04 +0000 UTC]

I can't draw at all.

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Jacklelover13 In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-01-11 00:39:28 +0000 UTC]

I don't believe that :3

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thinkingorplotting In reply to Jacklelover13 [2011-01-11 00:41:22 +0000 UTC]

Well you better start believing it, because my art is shit at best.

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Jacklelover13 In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-01-11 00:45:28 +0000 UTC]

I have the same feeling about my art so I guess it can't be helped. But hey, you're a great writer

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thinkingorplotting In reply to Jacklelover13 [2011-01-11 00:52:44 +0000 UTC]

My writing is poop, to.

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Jacklelover13 In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-01-11 01:01:15 +0000 UTC]

>-> Apparently not me and your fans think so x3

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thinkingorplotting In reply to Jacklelover13 [2011-01-11 01:54:18 +0000 UTC]

XD
Well....you guys are on something.

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Jacklelover13 In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-01-11 03:28:51 +0000 UTC]

For me.... it'd be high on sugar xD But no I don't do things like that, but you might want to interrogate your other fans XDDD

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Kyuubi-one-sama [2010-10-04 00:57:53 +0000 UTC]

Josh seems so cute and sweet in this.Poor Alex, like being petrified./goes to read next chap.

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thinkingorplotting In reply to Kyuubi-one-sama [2010-10-04 00:59:13 +0000 UTC]

xD This has no yaoi in it. xD But please read to your heart's content.
I only write to entertain.

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HellsLovely [2010-09-02 00:51:55 +0000 UTC]

I like it .w.

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thinkingorplotting In reply to HellsLovely [2010-09-02 01:09:45 +0000 UTC]

YAYZ

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HellsLovely In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-09-02 01:10:51 +0000 UTC]

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thinkingorplotting In reply to HellsLovely [2010-09-02 01:19:32 +0000 UTC]

<3

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Luminous-Chris [2010-08-26 03:06:33 +0000 UTC]

i like the change in the story, it's good your making your own story out of it, giving it your own spin

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thinkingorplotting In reply to Luminous-Chris [2010-08-26 07:19:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^^

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Luminous-Chris In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-08-30 00:01:39 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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Awai-Kyuuketsuki [2010-08-19 00:12:09 +0000 UTC]

I EXPECT GREAT THINGS FROM THIS FIC. OKAI? I READ IT NOW. DUN BOTHER ME.

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thinkingorplotting In reply to Awai-Kyuuketsuki [2010-08-19 00:13:35 +0000 UTC]

BWAHAHA! I BOTHER YOU NOW! D Enjoy the fic, and it is still an ongoing series.

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