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thinkingorplotting — Alex and Josh Part 21
Published: 2010-08-18 01:50:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 512; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description     Alex was up early the next morning, it was still dark out, maybe around 5:30. He could smell his mother cooking. It smelled AMAZING. The smell of eggs, sausage, bacon, pancakes, french toast, orange juice and maple syrup filled the entire house. Josh was already waking up to the beautiful scent of breakfast. Not the quick, on the run stuff he usually ate,but the amazing one their mother was preparing now.

   "uhn....Alex. Is it morning?"

    "Yeah,"

    "That smells really good. Like REALLY good." Josh said, running his hands through his long hair.

   "Um...maybe we should got eat then?" Alex said, hanging over the side of their bunk bed and staring at the nearly asleep Josh.


   Making their way downstairs they saw their mother was still in he pajamas,but enjoying cooking to her heart's content. Almost making to much,but amongst the three they finished it all.

  "Dad is coming back today, isn't he, Mom?" Josh said while helping Alex and his mother clear the table.

  "Yes, Josh he is."

  "I'm okay with that."

   Maybe things would be looking up. Maybe it was time that the Shepherd boy's had a break,right? Wrong.
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Comments: 13

toonzelda99 [2011-02-01 02:28:55 +0000 UTC]

I love your story, it's so addicting! I just became a fan of silent hill recently. (It was just sitting on my video game shelf, so I decided to play it. AND I LOVE IT!) I was just wondering, If it would be okay if i could turn some of this into a comic? Just asking.

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thinkingorplotting In reply to toonzelda99 [2011-02-01 02:47:41 +0000 UTC]

W-wow. I am quite honored you'd even ask me that. And I'm very glad you've enjoyed my writing.
Well, I've never done anything like that,but I'd like to make sure that if you DO want to make it into a comic, please ask for my opinion and input in each and every page, that way it comes out correctly and I'd like for you to leave credit to me for the fact that it is my story. If you do indeed decide to make it into a comic, feel free to ask any questions or details of the story you may have questions on.
Thank you very much. And feel free to talk to me at anytime. I'm always willing to talk to a fellow SH fan.

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toonzelda99 In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-02-01 02:50:04 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME!!! Is it okay if I take out the cursing? I don't curse.

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thinkingorplotting In reply to toonzelda99 [2011-02-01 02:51:53 +0000 UTC]

Hrm, well as long as it doesn't dilute the story, then its fine. It may make the wording a little awkward,but okay.
Would you mind showing me each page before you submit it to dA?
Btw, I'd like to know you personally. XD So, where ya from? Do you go to school? How old are you?

If you wanna know about me I'm 16 and I go to high school. I'm also from New York state.

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toonzelda99 In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-02-01 02:58:32 +0000 UTC]

How do I show you before I submit it? And to answer your questions. Yes, I do go to school. And, Hey! I'm 16 too! I live in California.

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thinkingorplotting In reply to toonzelda99 [2011-02-01 03:02:37 +0000 UTC]

Well...not sure how you could show it to me,but...you could explain it to me before you upload it if you want, or we could negotiate how the page should look. But of course, as long as you give me rightful credit for the story and give yourself rightful credit for the art, I'll be happy.

Awesomeness. You plan on going to college? What for?

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toonzelda99 In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-02-01 03:04:24 +0000 UTC]

That sounds perfect ^_^ I want to go to Academy of Art University in San Fransisco, I really want to be a concept artist for a game company. What about you?

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thinkingorplotting In reply to toonzelda99 [2011-02-01 03:09:36 +0000 UTC]

Yay!

I plan on going to UB, at least for my first 4 years of college, I wanna be a doctor,but not sure what type yet. xD
Oh~ That's so cool. I'm a terrible artist. xD

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toonzelda99 In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-02-01 03:20:50 +0000 UTC]

A doctor? That's really cool. I don't have the brains for that kinda thing. -_- Drawing just takes practice. You're really good at stories and poems though!

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thinkingorplotting In reply to toonzelda99 [2011-02-01 03:25:43 +0000 UTC]

XD Hehe, well I'm not all that smart,but I have a good memory.

Aw, thank you. <3

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toonzelda99 In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-02-01 03:29:38 +0000 UTC]

Ur welcome. ^_^ It's funny, i forget the things from a few days ago more than the things from my childhood.

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girl-next-door13 [2010-08-18 05:57:19 +0000 UTC]

Nice update as usual! Just curious, are Alex and Josh going to see Uncle Richard? That would really add some drama

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thinkingorplotting In reply to girl-next-door13 [2010-08-18 17:23:16 +0000 UTC]

Just wait and see......fufufufu

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