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thinkingorplotting — Alex and Josh Part 24 [NSFW]
Published: 2010-08-20 06:22:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 402; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description    It was like someone had lifted a two ton building off of the Shepherd's household. Everyone, even Adam, seemed to have a spring in their step.

  Alex was reading a book quietly, his father at work, his mother working in the garden, and Josh off in his room playing on his laptop. It was nice and quiet....so calm. Then Alex's mind went haywire. He started seeing images of Elle...why Elle? She was being beaten...and torn apart, over and over....hideous monsters ripping and beating her....destroying her....devouring her. Oh the sight was horrid and wouldn't leave Alex's mind...he screamed out in protest.

  "NO!!!STOP! PLEASE!!!!STOP!" He fell to the ground screaming and crying. His body shaking uncontrollably.

  The noise of Josh's feet rushing, nearly falling, down the stairs and his mother slamming the door open was almost as loud as his screaming.

   "Alex! ALEX!" Josh yelled, trying to snap his brother back into consciousness, while his mother tried to hold him down to keep him still.

   His screaming began to grow lower and his body stopped shaking. He sat up and looked to his mother and then his brother. "Oh God...." he covered his face in embarrassment. "Why???" he cried. His mother wrapped her arm's around her quivering son. Josh joined in the embrace.

  "Shhh...." Josh uttered in a kind voice, before his mother could."Don't worry...it'll be okay."
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SilentHillFan1 [2010-11-10 00:14:37 +0000 UTC]

Elle?

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thinkingorplotting In reply to SilentHillFan1 [2010-11-10 03:51:43 +0000 UTC]

xDDD

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SexySonadow [2010-08-20 18:07:00 +0000 UTC]

oh my..... *huggles Alex* shh..

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thinkingorplotting In reply to SexySonadow [2010-08-20 18:16:59 +0000 UTC]

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SexySonadow In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-08-20 18:24:07 +0000 UTC]

I wish I could hug him for real though..

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thinkingorplotting In reply to SexySonadow [2010-08-20 18:27:59 +0000 UTC]

I know, right?

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SexySonadow In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-08-20 18:30:12 +0000 UTC]

yeah...glad his mother and little bro did though

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thinkingorplotting In reply to SexySonadow [2010-08-20 18:33:11 +0000 UTC]

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SexySonadow In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-08-20 18:45:10 +0000 UTC]

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thinkingorplotting In reply to SexySonadow [2010-08-20 18:46:38 +0000 UTC]

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SexySonadow In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-08-20 18:57:33 +0000 UTC]

XD

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girl-next-door13 [2010-08-20 07:02:46 +0000 UTC]

Nice update! Wonder where those thoughts of Elle came from and what they mean. Can't wait for the next one! ^^

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thinkingorplotting In reply to girl-next-door13 [2010-08-20 07:05:02 +0000 UTC]

Okay. I should've presented them better,but I wanted it to come out of nowhere. I wanted to show that Alex still has a fragile mental state.

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girl-next-door13 In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-08-20 15:38:45 +0000 UTC]

Ooooooh, ok!

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Kumajii [2010-08-20 06:23:57 +0000 UTC]

Constructive criticism.. The thoughts of Elle are kind of random. There isn't much buildup or description of them.

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thinkingorplotting In reply to Kumajii [2010-08-20 06:27:18 +0000 UTC]

>.< Yeah, I am a sucky write and not specific. It really isn't meant to be,but whatever. I don't expect many people to really read it.

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